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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 16:37 CDT
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warm fuzzies sue! This chapter was wonderful! I wonder what was in the box! The question is was nez embarrased or was she afraid of what was in the box?? Yes I am the queen of randomness! Awesome A/N! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Wolf's Rain Kagome On: May 02, 2005 15:52 CDT
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Wow, I was hoping that Ryo would finally tell Nez how he feels, or visa versa(sp?). I do hope that you continue to write fanfictions after you finish the purity series. I enjoy your stories so much. I was just wondering, have you ever written a fic because someone requested it? One more question, are Nez and Ryo going to have kids in P4? I mean, even consider having kids at all? Do they ever really warm up to each other or is there always going to be this angsty-type thing between them? I don't think I have anything more to ask you right now, so GREAT CHAPTER!! As always I love your work.
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Reviewed By: Descendant of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 15:13 CDT
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Lol luv the whole dress idea!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 14:59 CDT
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arrgghh! Damnit- His Youkai told him to tell her, not ask her a question. Stupid Ryo. Growling in public - he has a lot to learn still, but we love him, and so does Nez... I love them and their story. Sometimes I feel like these chapters are the only thing that I have to look forward to during the day.
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Title: two questions please
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue, I have two questions for you. 1. I know this probably sounds stupid but what is a "Beta"? ( I am really sorry if I offend anybody by asking this question) 2. Have you published any works and If so can you please tell us? thank you sue. Joyce
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Reviewed By: LadyBlade (NSI) On: May 02, 2005 13:37 CDT
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This is more question than review, although you've yet again put out a wonderful chapter. Props to Diana for the creative put-down and taking the time to explain what exactly she'd said. ^_^ Ok, my question is this, you mentioned you liked Anne Rice and her 'incarnations'... does she write as JK Rowling? My sisters claim no, but I figured I'd ask the person who wrote the statement for clarification.. please?
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Title: good writing
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always sue an overall ten and a half to your great writing. I loved the chapter. Sue, I do read some of the writing on ff.net and I think it would be sad for you to stop posting there because the readers would miss out on a great writer as yourself. I understand the painstanking time it takes to create something. I make jewelry and when I hear a comment like " this isn't anything of interest here" at certain craft shows where I display my jewelry, I what to rip those people's comments out of them and shove it up their a****s. Yep the world is a stupid and cruel place at times. But you sue are the best!! Please keep the creative juices flowing and be blessed. J
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 13:28 CDT
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Ah ha! With a little prodding from his youkai (ok, maybe a lot of prodding) Ryo is finally questioning 'why' Nez allowed/participated in that fateful night with him. Her continued reluctance to discuss the encounter is not surprising but it looks like Ryo is going to use that good old stubborn nature, courtesy of his father, to get his answers...now that he's asking the right questions. I have a feeling that finding out that she has loved him this whole time, all through his idiotic parade of women and clueless camaraderie...by his side and secretly hurting, is going to absolutely floor him. (Is it too awful of me to enjoy the anticipation of the impending water/fire works? *chuckle*) Ryo's finding of Nez's secret memory box reminds me of that game Hot & Cold, where you helpfully call out, "You're getting warmer!" to someone searching for a carefully hidden object. Finding the box is a Red-Hot find for Ryo (appropriate for such a Red-Hawt Hanyou! LOL). I also love the frustrated dominance fueling all the "you can't -blank- your Mate!" rambling, turning the normal tongue-tied Ryomaru into an adorably loquatious buffoon. Just another example of his passion. LMAO! -- Wonderful!
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 12:36 CDT
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LOL! Great chapter! It makes me sad that you don't think you're going to be posting for awhile after Purity 3 and 4 are done. :o( By all means, take as much time as you need (not that you need my permission lol) but I really hope you decide to keep posting, because your stories are amazingly well done. Honestly, I think most of them are better than some I've read by published authors. You and your wonderful stories are the main reason I've decided to try my hand at writing and I want to thank you for that. You are an inspiration to young authors everywhere, and you should be extremely proud of that. :o) Ok, enough of my rambling, can't wait to see what happens next with Ryo and Nez! Have a great week, Sue!
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Reviewed By: Shiga(not logged in) On: May 01, 2005 00:14 CDT
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Hello there! Sorry about not reviewing for a while! I have been so damn busy and then on Tuesday I lost my uncle so it's been hectic. But today I was able to catch up and review! Sorry about all these bad reviewers! =O! It's really horrible!!!!! But as long as you post I'm gonna keep on reading =D! Now I am off to bed *yawn* 1:00 a.m.ish ugh! =P BYE! Awesome story by the way(forgot to say it) loving it more and more!
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Reviewed By: Kittycat78 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 18:10 CDT
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I love your story it's amazing. I was wondering how you prononce the name of Ryo's swod. I hope you continue posting your an amazing author.
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Title: sorry!
Reviewed By: Mizbum2u On: April 30, 2005 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! in so sorry! i would have reviewed for the other chapters but i had some work to do at school! lmao! i loved this chapter... nez and ryo are getting closer to eachother... maybe they can think of it as love. i also read chronicals afew days before... i loved it! i also know that you don't like plagerism... i was wondering if i can use the idea of inuyasha reading her diary which reveals her secret-that she loves him. I would mention you for the idea, i would even put up all of your links and stories in there and the sites for mediaminer and ffnet. can i please use the idea? i really like it and i would put a disclaimer that its not my idea... so can i please use it? anyways... love all your stories... you shouldn't care about what people say that flame your story! i happen to love it and i know alot of people love it too! just continue updating for us... please? i really love the story and i dont know what i would do without your inspiring words... so won't you continue for those of us that find so much depth in your writting? pretty please? ^-^ -hien
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Reviewed By: EAP - again On: April 30, 2005 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am I the only one who thinks that ad, "Sticky Paws - Don't Declaw! Get Sticky Paws! Modify cat behavier humanely!", is incredibly funny for being on this chapter? I love the story Sueric, I happily await the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: DragonHostile17 On: April 28, 2005 22:33 CDT
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I have a small suggestion to make. Take it or leave it, it doesn't really matter, perhaps you already have one. I think you should do a message board type story, where you post your reviews, and the responses you and your betas leave, because because your responses to the incites of those moronic earth-monkeys is some of the most hilarious shit I have ever read! A third of the time i read the chapter cause of YOUR reviews, especially your betas. Its like listening to Dennis Leary. Anyway your work is fantanstic so listen to your lovely and bitchin friends and be happy because if one has a talent like yours and friends like the ones you have, break me off whatever you have because i could sure use some of those blessings, and tell the rest of the world to go fuck itself. "Humans are but simple creatures and easily destroyed. So dont be human, just be yourself."~Dragon Hostile 17
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: April 28, 2005 17:50 CDT
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Wow, it kinda makes you sad for poor Ryo there. He does what he is doing now for Nez, yet her fear seems to hold her back from saying what may be very important to the both of them. But I can see the personailties and the way they are both stubborn, but can be true to each other in any sense possible. It's an amazing mix, if you really stop to think. I could see alot of it in these last two chapters! Good job and keep going!! ^_^
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