| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: gapinec21 aka Hope_Poe26 On: May 17, 2005 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey... I just wanna tell you that people are so stupid to complain about made up characters because they don't understand or are not willing to understand the writer's open-mindedness and the fact that Nezumi is a shy tomboy who is very unsure of herself and the relationship between her and Ryomaru... so many times people... not just people in story books make mistakes and they can't read the minds of the other if they don't talk in a whole-heartedly honest manner. Fact is, the way I see it, if a person reads a book, but doesn't like one of the primary characters and calls it stupid, its calling itself stupid for two main reasons: he/she/it doesn't know anything about human behavior and forgets that the book is written to entertain, to inform, to etc. If someone doesn't like it, then don't read it. Simple as that. As for this chapter, my eyes were stinging by the time I finished it. You are a very good writer... is there going to be a Purity4? If there is I want Gin first. Can you make a love story for the daughter Inuyasha in Torrent timeline? I love the fact that Inuyasha in one single instant became overprotective father figure. Your fan always; Hope_Poe26
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Reviewed By: kurisu no ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 10:05 CDT
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great chapter can't wait to see the next one.
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Reviewed By: Fairia On: May 17, 2005 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated! It's always a genuine pleasure to come in to class and sneak a peek to see what my favorite story characters have been doing. Do you think that if you stop posting, you would consider setting up a mailing list for those of us who genuinly love your stories (canon or not, the stiffs)and want to see your stories, on the condition that they never use your characters or plotlines for their own works? Or maybe if I pleaded sweetly you would consent to emailing me chapters of your stories for my personal viewing pleasure, uunder the same conditions? (I write too, but I specialize in alternate pairings. I can't do justice to the intracies of Kag/Inu relationships, so I refuse to try... I just make up my own, LoL.) I hope you'll at least consider it, for the people who truly love your stories.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 17, 2005 08:15 CDT
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Another great chapter! Poor Ryo and Nez. Everytime they start to get snuggly, the universe interrupts. The renegade youki are giving me the creeps. Nez better get marked, and soon. Shiver. Love the whole wedding, pup, bribe thing. Hats off to Ryo for not considering it (tempting as it may be). Thanks for the wonderful chapter! Sorry about your art; I liked them.
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: May 17, 2005 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great posting. So your being flamed for your artwork? That really sucks you know that. I myself like art and drawing characters from inuyasha serries. When people make fun of them it really hurts. I guess thats why you took down you other ones huh. So you want me to mentaly berate the flamers of your qonderful artwork/stories?
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 16, 2005 19:32 CDT
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Poor Nez. With the over-achieving Kagome for a mom-in-law - she'll be lucky to get a small wedding - they should just elope, it'd be more fun for them anyway. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the renegade youkai... you are plotting something, I just don't know what yet. I'm looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 19:32 CDT
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These last few chapters have been wonderful! The baka gene has been absent for once, enabling this relationship to finally florish the way it's supposed too. Wonderfully done I might add. I think poor Ryo might just be a little shell shocked at the whole situation, I know I would be if I was in his place. I just hope Nez realizes how much he really cares about her, I think she's finally starting to understand. Kagome coming in and taking care of the wedding is SO her. Too bad I think Nez is horrified at the idea of wearing a dress...that is that big...and that white. Not to mention that I can't see her wanting to be the center of that much attention. Poor girl...the entire experience is just a disaster in the making. Her fears of tripping and falling on her face are very valid for a girl who's probably only worn heels once or twice in her life. Poor Nez...lets hope Kagome doesn't frighten her away before Ryo can get her to the altar. As usual...you are weaving a masterpeice!! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. It must be really scary for Nezumi, seeing that she hates the sight of blood. Ryo definitely is more like his father; being gruff and tough on the outside but such a soft core. Sigh....that's sweet. :)
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 18:41 CDT
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omg they are in L-O-V-E thats soo romantic at the beginning and sExAy haha well things seem to still have their ups and downs with them with the wedding and the marking but at least now they new their feelings for each other!
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Reviewed By: Shiga(NLI) On: May 16, 2005 17:54 CDT
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HEY HEY HEY!!!! I finished so yay!!! Now on to purity 4 lol. I love where this is going, I sense a youkai attack in the near future against Nez! How exciting, but of course sad!! :D:D KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!! BYE!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 16:21 CDT
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This was a sweet, funny, loving chapter. I could just picture Yukitora blending in with Ryomaru's hair...speaking of kittens, my cat had her first litter, and I have to think of a name for the black one...assuming that there are still cat names out there that we can use....we've had a lot of cats.
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 12:52 CDT
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Hmmmm....on her shoulder? Didn't see that one coming. Poor Nez and Ryo...just when they seem to reach a nice equilibrium, bam! Somebody from the family has to throw something new at them and make things screwy. Makes for wonderful reading though! Great chapter Sue! Have a wonderful Monday!
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Reviewed By: Shiga(not logged in) On: May 16, 2005 10:12 CDT
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Hey there! I'm only on chapter 34 of this because I'm been so busy with my family and stuff *tear* so I decided to drop you a review to tell you I am still reading and still love your work!! I will catch up soon and oh happy day when I do =P LOVE LOVE IT!!! *waves* bye!!!
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 06:15 CDT
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I know I've already written a review at ff.net but I just want to say again that I really love your stories alot. Keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: May 16, 2005 03:29 CDT
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aww! great update! so cute! i love the fluff! ;) anyhow, i hope she gets marked b4 she gets kidnapped/attacked. cause you know it's comin. foreshadowing baby!
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