| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: hikaru1617((not signed in)) On: May 23, 2005 18:29 CDT
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I decided that I had to stop using Lena17, and start using my actual sn name, which is..of course, Hikaru1617. Sooo..yea! lol Anyways, I liked this alot..I really appreciated the jok of Iron Reiver, Ass Squisher....very inovative. I don't know if you know this, but you have this real gift for putting in suspense that just makes it interesting. As aside question, however, I was wondering how yoiyu got your betas? lol I need to find some good ones. *sighs* And need advice on how to do it.
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Title: ^_~
Reviewed By: kagome_higurashi_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you updated!!!! And the chapter anwered my question. I thought it was really cool. This is probably my favorite chapter, or at least in my top five. Totally awesome!! By the way, it's me, inuyashasluverforever, but I got a new username. And oncew again an awesome chapter!!! I got to babysit my three month old neice yesterday!! She kept making all of these sounds and she stared at me a lot. Plus she has blue-green eyes that are really clear looking. She is so cute!! I love her to death!!! And this weekend I get to see my new nephew, Phillip. He was born about a week or two ago. Yay I'm so happy!!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 16:22 CDT
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"Iron Reaver Ass Squisher?"...LMAO!!!! It reminded me of that "Boulder Weilder Stone Crusher!" or something along those lines.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 16:03 CDT
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great chapter as always...but why aren't i in the reviewers section...i review almost every chapter :( oh well, it doesn't really matter as long as you keep updating...i love your stories...update asap please...Zirra
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: May 23, 2005 14:43 CDT
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alls well that ends well, ne? very good chapter. i loved the title. very origional, clever as well. sometimes, sue, i don't know how you do it. the lines that you manage to construct are just awe inspiring. the inu-youkai and hanyous, and woe betide the fool who thought to injure one of Sesshoumaru's own. honeslty, i don't think i've read anything that well constructed in a while. and this is fan fiction! man...i'm sure you could kick ass in the novel world (now to only find ways to do the same...). as always, great chapter as well as a healthy and safe ending for all loose ends to be tied with. (now...onto the issue of marriage ceremonies and pups....hehehehe). great story, i love it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smiles* Nothing like some good old family bonding eh?
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Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 13:11 CDT
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Iron Reaver Ass Squisher, I love it! This is such a great story, thanks for the fast updates!
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 12:28 CDT
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Iron Reaver Ass Squisher?! LMAO That's HILARIOUS!!!! It looks like Nez finally understands, which is good b/c I'm afraid of what poor Ryo would do if he had to spend one more day behind a desk. lol :o) Great chapter, Sue.
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 11:47 CDT
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Oh that was fabulous! I love a good fight scene! Nez is great! I hoped that when she saw him fight, she would realize, protecting was in his blood! That was beautiful Sue! Another brilliant chapter for us to be humbled by! Mad Skillz - it is! You humble us.
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Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy(not logged in) On: May 23, 2005 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, Ryo and Nez are so sweet! I liked reading what everyone in the fight was thinking. Awesome as always.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 23, 2005 11:07 CDT
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I loved the title on this chapter, "Splintering the Sun." Gave me a shiver right from the get go. Great fight scene! Thanks for the wonderful update!!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 10:25 CDT
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Wow, look at all that action. Kich is right, Nez needed to see that. I love their running family commentairy while fighting - until Yasha knocks the building down. ...ass-squisher... LOL!
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 10:21 CDT
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great chapter, I enjoyed the fight, I am confused about why InuYasha and Sesshoumaru stayed behind though, InuYasha is right, they would be lucky to escape his 'Scar of the Wind' Ja ne, Kurisu
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Title: Wow....Just...WOW
Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not logged in) On: May 23, 2005 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was an AWESOME battle scene... I really, really, really loved it. You get a 10+++++ for awesomility of this chapter. And btw: Iron Reaver Ass Squisher? Priceless. I laughed for a good 15 minutes.
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Title: =)
Reviewed By: Inuyashas_wishing_star [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 09:29 CDT
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That was AWESOME!! I loved how Nez told Ryo to Hunt to protect her. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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