| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Title: purity 3
Reviewed By: cufflink95 On: June 14, 2005 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just read your comment about people and the crap you feel that has been thrown at you over their opinions of your stories.............i've read quite a few of your stories and enjoyed them all personally or i wouldn't have read more than one..........but , what i'm eluding to in this critique isn't over your writing skills or stories but the apparent fact that your letting these said opinions bother you......the internet is a annonymous world and people can cloak themselves behind anything, so whatever you do don't take anything negative to heart.........just let your ideas flow and feel free to share them with those that care enough to read them............and ignore the rest of the idiots that feel their opinions have any validity on the value of your work or life........stay as annonymous as you can to protect anyone you feel you need to, including yourself, and by all means if you enjoy writing, continue it.......as my dad always says about issues....."if it pleases you , everyone else should be tickled pink..." your not doing anything illegal or immoral or with intent on hurting anyone, and rumico takahashi should feel proud and elated that people have taken her work and felt so strongly about it that they embellish upon it and give it wings it may not otherwise have,.....keep up the good work and as this yank will add.....screw 'em...........always be true to yourself........
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Title: Chapters 43 - Epilogue - *bows to the Empress Of the Written Word*
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My most humble apologies for being absent for the conclusion of this wonderful story. I simply adored the twins when they were introduced early on, smirked when they terrorized Toga and took over his apartment for thier risque activities and thrilled to the idea of two very naughty modern versions of InuYasha; the dog-boy supreme. I really like Ryomaru in particular for his gruff personality and his sensual confidence, all his own. His devotion and larger than life attitude combined with his lust for life makes him seem so awesomely real and someone you could count on to guard your back in any situation. I admire this wild son of InuYasha, but I fell in love with Ryomaru's character upon his sudden downfall at Nezumi/Deidre's unsuspecting feet. From the very beginning of this story, the intensity of Ryo's emotions and instincts held me like few stories have. When he dropped to his knees and laid his head in her lap, I felt just as lost and found as he must have felt. The impact of their story, watching them go at things ass-backwards and manage to make things right for each other, will remain with me for a long time. InuYasha is, hands down, my favorite character, but Ryomaru almost displaced him...but I think there is room for two on that pedestal. Blushing InuYasha and Smirking Ryomaru, both of them rowdy and untamed...be still my beating heart! Thank you. Thank you so much for your inspired imagination and for creating such a diverting world for us to enjoy! - Michelle
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Reviewed By: Bandit the Army Brat On: June 05, 2005 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue.Are you OK????It it is not like you to be so long on righting the next chapter.No rush,I was just afade you were not KO. My E-mail is bandit_the_army_brat@yahoo.com if you want to E-mail me.Take care. ^_~
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Reviewed By: tinky On: June 04, 2005 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the purity storys are the best things i have ever read thank you so much for writing such a great story about me favroit show, and keep up with #4 its roxx
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: kamackie(nsi) On: June 02, 2005 23:49 CDT
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Yay Sue I just got to read the final chapters of Purity 3. LOL...I loved how they got married in Vegas and the diamond making competition (Gin kicks A**). I'm off to read the chapters of P4 for this week.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: June 02, 2005 23:31 CDT
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as always, i bow to you. wonderful story! beautiful and happy ending for all of them! i got to say, i laughed hysterically as Gin showed all the boys up with tetsusaiga and even louder as Sesshoumaru attempted to get Toga to do it agian, so he was not outdone by a girl. oh, the family love. LOL. that was just to perfect! loving the dropped hints towards purity 4 and Kagome's insistant want for another baby (and the nice dropped line about teh full moon...praying its not a girl for poor Gin's sake...man, inu is protective!) absolutly wonderful story, i love the characters. the lemon was so well written and ...just...wow. LOL. i can't wait to see how purity 4 comes out. as always, love the work, it's amazing! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: bloomz-baby On: May 31, 2005 07:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez! I go away for the weekend and I come back and find like 5 chapters! When I saw how many chapters you had posted I spat out the milk I was drinking (back into my glass luckily - my keyboard is safe for another day!).
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: May 31, 2005 02:56 CDT
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O.O I can't believe it's done! I thought there was some sort of glitch when I checked my mail and saw all those "new chapter" notices! LOL These last few chapters were just amazing. Again, you had me crying and laughing in the same moment. 'The Sex'. So classic (still gotta love Toga). It's been such a crazy journey, completely twisting the standard order of events in some ways, and yet, the love and understanding that forms and grows between Nez and Ryo throughout the story is exactly the kind of thing that I've come to expect from your stories. Lots of tears. Lots of laughs. And a wonderful ending. And Gin got to show up the boys. :) Thank you!
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Title: WHOA! you finished it!
Reviewed By: mizbu2u On: May 30, 2005 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! you finished it! WOW! that was awesome! and the ring pop "wedding rings" kicked A$$! that was awesome sue! can't wait till the next purity! keep up the good work sue!
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue all your stories I would rate a full 10, but this one is a 10+, I guess what I liked so much about it was all the conflict between Nez and Ryo and yet they came together in the end. I loved that Kag wants another baby and although I know you stated that you may not do any more of the series after Purity 4, I would love to see a story of Inu and Kag having another baby or even grandkids. Love to see our loveable Puppy's reaction to that! lol. Well anyway whatever you decide to do in the future, I hope you will reconsider and write more fics. Many of us would miss your very creative, funny, and beautiful stories that you write. I think you are one of the best writers posting work on FF and Mediaminer. Thanks again for this story; it was a wonderful adventure. Joyce
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 01:06 CDT
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whoa i just got onto the computer and saw all of the finishing chapters uploaded! wow...and i have to say that it was a wonderful story! and a funny ending as well...and thats so sweet that toga and sierra named their baby coral after sango *sigh* in the beginning it looked like there was no hope for ryo and nez but now they are finally officially "mated" and "married" haha in las vegas lol...well and again i LUVED THE STORY! it was great just like your other purity stories...
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Reviewed By: Kesstral [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 00:37 CDT
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agh, i stuck in that begin html thing and it cut off the rest of my review... -_-; argh. In summary, it pretty much said "I love Purity 3 I love you" etc... only a bit more eloquently...
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Reviewed By: Kesstral [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah! I leave for a few days and when i come back you've finished the story! I hope this was more enjoyable to write than Meta was. It seems like it was--it's an amazing story! Lol, i love how Gin showed up the guys... but how was toga able to hold the sword? Lol... just great.. totally wonderful. You stuck so much humor in the last few chapters it felt like i was constantly laughing when i wasn't squealing with delight at the fluffiness of it. *squee!* (
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Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to see this one end, but what an ending! Very fitting for Sierra and Toga to name their baby girl after Sierra's ancestress. Does Coral have puppy ears, or normal ones?
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I loved the ending. It was so sweet. I am sorry to see this story end. I really loved it, and was hoping that you would write a little more of it before you wrapped it up. Out of all of your stories, this one is definitely my favorite. It would be awesome if you could write a sequel staring Ryo and Nezmui, maybe with them having kids when they're a little older? I also loved the scene between Inuyasha and Kagome. Does she REALLY want to have another baby, or was she just saying that to drive Inuyasha crazy? I
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