| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: May 04, 2005 05:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice long chapter. Hope you keep posting for a very long time. I just wanted to say before I started reading your stories it used to take me around forty to an hour before I finished an nine thousand word chapter for anything. Fan fiction to English homework. But since Ive been reading your stories I got it down to twenty minutes. Just wanted to thank you for posting these wonderful stories and sharing them with all these people. Take as long as you want to update.
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Title: Vocabulary
Reviewed By: freethephoenix On: May 03, 2005 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*raises both hands and cheers loudly* Congradulations to me. I have officially read every single one of the Inuyasha fics you've posted on Media Miner!! *takes a bow* And, in celebration of this, I will now provide you with a list of words that I never would have known if I had not ventured to read your amazing works: Fulminate Consternation Sardonic Inexorably Lucent Altruistic Vermillion Albeit Mire Fastidious Cadence Inscrutable Affronted Crux Eminence Comeuppance Inundation Ilk Chagrined Gamboling Ebullient Paltry Trepidation Deign Nonplussed Telegraphing Altercation Conflagration Obstinate Invective Diatribe Halcyon Languor Visceral Acquiesce Ardent Aspersion Delineate Exorbitant Credence Cloying Subterfuge Acerbically Mimetic (tendancies) Exacerbate Whoresonned Mandrake Do not mock my previous lack of vocabulary, for it has now been expanded to include such lovely words. I feel that my life has been forever enriched!! I actually sit down to read your new chapters with dictionary.com in a seperate window so I can look up the new words. Half of me is very excited to read a new chapter, and the rest is excited to see what new and tantalizing words you'll bestow upon me, and wow that sounds REALLY nerdy!! Oh well, I don't care, Your writing rules! With much love, appreciation, and nothing fanatical what-so-ever -freethephoenix
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Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon, though it doesn't want to let me say I'm me On: May 03, 2005 23:04 CDT
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Squee!! Hooray for another chapter!! I love Nezumi, I just can't get enough of her ^__^ A question about your choice of the name "Deirdre" - did you choose it as a charactonymic of the Deirdre of the Irish legend of Deirdre of the Sorrows? Or - if I remember correctly, Nezumi's mom is Irish? Or Irish-American? - did you just choose it because it's a fairly common Irish name?
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: May 03, 2005 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for answering my questions. It realy did put a few other questions out of my mind.... for now at least. Another great story as always. Hey if anyones flaming you anymore I could always track down their i.p. address and send them a nasty worm or something (chuckling) So great update as always. Your loyal fan Jason C
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Reviewed By: EAP On: May 03, 2005 01:56 CDT
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Ohhh! Ryo-Snuggle! Fun. Great chapter, so happy you updated! Very good scene in the resturant and Ryo's reaction to the dress. This is such a great story, you are very talented, I eagerly (and patiently) await the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 23:45 CDT
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I love Nez. She reminds me a lot of Sango.:D Another terrific chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 23:25 CDT
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I just love that chapter it makes me laugh so much...which I needed tonight. Ryo is so close in figuring out everything, I can't wait to see his reaction when he finally does. The vision I got in my head of him sniffing out that dress was priceless. You never cease to amaze me...I may be the brainstorm beta and have a clue about what is coming in the future, but the way you bring it to life always amazes me.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 21:24 CDT
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omg they seemed to have gotten so CLOSE to tell each other how they felt OMG.....!!! haha i wanna know whats in that box!!!! welll good chapter it kinda blew me away at how nez wanted to dress up for ryo i didnt expect that! but that didnt work out...ha...
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Title: You're so Cool!
Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wounderful chapter! I just love those two. Nez and Ryo have to be my favorite Purity characters so far. It must be the Inuyash/Kagome lover in me. Their relationships are pretty comparable aren't they? Do you mean for that to happen or was it just a niffty byproduct? I hope Nez lets Ryomaru in and shows him the box. Someone has to take the first step in opening up after all. Thanks again for sharing your talent with us! Hope to hear from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well now that I've caught up to you in 'purity 3' (I'll bet your glad about that, lol) I was wanting to ask you if this is your favorite fic? Why? Because I haven't seen any sequals to your other fics, and honestly the hell you went through with Metamorphosis, I don't expect a sequal to that. I did actually hope for a sequal to Chronicles, is that a possibility at all? ja ne, Kurisu oh and BTW: I wasn't nocking the purity series I really like it, I was just curious, great job!
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Reviewed By: DragonHostile17 On: May 02, 2005 18:14 CDT
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Balls?! you used balls as a curse word?! where do you come up with this shit?! i swear you must have like this psycotic dream to make us all die laughing. honestly, no one but you could come up with something that censor-friendly funny. props to you on yet another successful chapter. you never cease to amaze me. rock on sister.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 18:01 CDT
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I felt so bad for Nez...she was desperate to get that box...not that I blame her. Well, even if you decide to edit your chapters first, I still hope you continue to write because you're stories are always worth reading.
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story. I've been reading it from the beginning and I've enjoyed all of the chapters. I especially loved this chapter. The testosterone was flying! I kind of expected Ryo to freak when he saw Nez in the dress. There is one thing I have been wondering, though. This may sound weird, but does Kicharo have feelings for Nex besides friendship? I'm kind of wondering because he gets really frustrated with Ryo when he upsets Nezumi. AND he was the one who started everything by asking if Nez was gay. I may be wrong, but is he secretly jealous or something?
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 17:16 CDT
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o o o o *jumps up and down in excitment* i wanna know what's in the box...can't remember if you told us(don't think you did) hey Nezumi's got a secret, and Will Ryomaru ever shred that dress(it be funny if he did :D) PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...*this continues for a few hours* *gasp* Please *gasp* oh i give up i'm so out of breath *gasps for a while while a few random kids come up and pokes me with a long stick* OW! that hurt you little brats *scares 'em all away* N E Ways please update any fic I don't care just do it ASAP PLEEEEAAAAASSSSSSSEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank-you, Zirra
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it the same box that Nez put the flower in? Anyway, thank you for updating (Now that youy aren't the chapters are getting even better--no offense or anything) and it was a WONDERFUL chapter!!!
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