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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 05, 2005 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Sueric, I have a question; in the paragraph mentioning "the night that changed everything," in which Ryomaru is thinking to himself, while looking at Nezumi sleeping, is he contemplating the night they made love, or, the night when Nezumi tried to be the date for her dad's friend, or, the night she wore the dress to meet Ryo for dinner? I think that I have had just a little too much allergy medicine and my thinking is just muddled. (Is that a real word?) Love the story. Also, just want to tell you that I understand if you need a break from the stress and "nutcases" of fanfic stardom, but I will be devistated/devastated (which is it?!?!) if you disappear on us forever. Oh woe, to those of us who will have to read teenage hormonic wailings (sounds scientific), because all the good authors are chased off by "nutcases"! Sighhhhh . . I too, have become a Sueric, spoiled rotten with dailey/weekly updates of quality writing, fan. Thank you for what you have or will share with us. Signed your loyal "nutcase", Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Crazy Fan S.S. On: May 05, 2005 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, Ryomaru realizes he chose Nezumi as his mate when he was a pup! It's about time! lol I've been really bad about reviewing for Purity 3, so I feel really bad. I love this segment of the Purity saga (I'm not quite sure what you'd call it) because the conflict's so great. I mean, what could be more angsty than best friends finding out they want to be more than friends? Anyway, I thought I'd drop a line to say that I'm not dead and that I'm really enjoying following Nezumi's and Ryomaru's character development. Thanks for the laughs and smiles!
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 17:23 CDT
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Hey, Sue! Random fact of the day: Roman soldiers pierced their nipples to show off their manliness. I'm doing a paper linking body modification to infectious disease. I think I may have found the link between guys and the fascination with nipple piercings. And I leave you with that joke/word of advice: If a guy has his nipples pierced, he should never get into a fight with his girlfriend/wife while shirtless. I don't know about you or the betas, but I've got a Scotch-Irish temper and probably wouldn't hesitate to yank. Good thing my boyfriend is afraid of needles, huh? Love you and the betas! Just thought I'd ramble on before I have to get back to the paper. XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
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Title: ^_~
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya!! Thank you for updating. I think this would have to be one of your best chapters. I really loved the way that you styled it and the ay you made Ryo actually think. . . . . for once. I was also glad that he didn;t look in the box, I think it really shows that-even though he may not know it-he loves Nezumi to death-literally. Update when you can!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story sue, i've missed reading your story (life hasn't allowed me to lately) love how you are progressing ryo and nez's relationship. so what happened to the youkai who were after ryo and his family? i'm sure you will hit us with that when we least expect it. so loved the exchange between nez's father and ryo. wonderful work as always.
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: May 05, 2005 17:01 CDT
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*sniffle* Must...not...cry...at work... That last line of Ryo's (not the final thought - the bit about keeping Nez from being lonely) just hit me like a ton of bricks. First he didn't take the chance and look in the box because he knew it would hurt her, and now wanting to take her to help her say goodbye to her mother. Wow. He's really done a lot of growing up. I'm so impressed! And thanks for the great chapters recently. I've been horrifically busy with work and now I'm sick as a dog, so I haven't had the time to review. But I've been reading all along and each chapter has been a nice bright spot to my days. :)
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 16:47 CDT
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"ello, and i resent that though i know you didn't mean to upset me but my name is not girly.... or at least i'm not girly, *sigh* never mind i'm not really upset, loved the chapter too much to get mad at you, well update asap please till then, Zirra
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 16:40 CDT
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i like how ryo went to speak to nez's father I didnt no that much about him really...i didnt think that nez's past would come back since ryo is now probably take her to her mothers grave...which is really sweet...i really like the update...but i still wonder whats in that box...!!!
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Title: Twins >-
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus On: May 05, 2005 16:35 CDT
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Alright, for the first time ever, I have a question. That I'm not afraid to ask and wouldn't be rude, and I won't give examples of the rudes ones because that would be...you get the idea. Does InuYasha hear his youkai blood, or just Kich and Ryo 'cause their twins? I feel like you already answered this, but I'm an idiot. Please answer the question of this lowly reviewer o' Mighty Queen of Angst.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 05, 2005 16:31 CDT
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:) I was so happy to see an update today. I've had a crummy week and it's not getting better, I so needed this wonderful distraction!
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 16:14 CDT
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Hmmmm.... interesting. Have you already told us what's in the box? Does it have stuff about Ryo in it? I need to look back... Anyway, awesome chapter as always. Very introspective.
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: May 05, 2005 15:14 CDT
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Also - one more question I couldn't fit into the above - I know that you have been pulling some of you fics because of certain unpleasant situations. I was wondering if you have (or ever plan to) post your fics in a way that would be downloadable (either as one big doc or pdf). I know that you are not allowed to make money on your fics and you don't have any interest in publishing but I generally make it a habit to return to books/stories I like (I have a book I reread yesterday that I read for the first time in 1997). If you ever decide to do that I would love to know about it so that I could attain a copy for future perusal. :)
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: May 05, 2005 15:07 CDT
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You keep Nezumi on a shelf, and you get her down when it pleases you to play with her. When you're done, you put her away, and you don't spare her another thought until someone looks at your toy . . . until someone else wants to borrow your possession. That is a rather profound observation. If more people realized that they did that then there would be a lot more happy people out there. Stammer in all the righteous indignation you want. And that is just fricken' hilarious! I will likely use that in the future! (not in a fic but when faced with people with misplaced rightious indignation). Also, I am curious - it seems that in Ryo's case (at least) his youkai side is actually more level headed then his human side. In the series Yasha's youkai side always seems to be the impulsive, violent part ... is it different for every individual? I can understand a more observant and level headed youkai side because of Seshy and his practically stoic ways but I was just curious as if there was any specific logic or reason you imployed. I also want to say that the maturity and logic of your writing is refreshing. Your vocabulary alone puts your writing above most. You write insights into your characters that I think lots of people don't grasp - let alone understand well enough to integrate it into a fiction. It makes me wish I could know you in real life ... as odd as this likely sounds - your fics make me believe you are likely a good friend/person.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 14:59 CDT
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"Know Thyself" is the uncomfortable position Ryo is experiencing now. The realization that his 'youkai blood' chose Nez that very first day when they were children hit him hard. And then understanding that in his efforts to protect her, he isolated her from others just as surely her father did. Her father went so far as to distance himself as well while Ryo was her only real contact. It may have been unconciously done, but the guilt for having done it is all too real. Now that Ryo has some of the answers he's been looking for, he's taking steps to fix things. They may still be baby steps and he may be a bit unsure but his heart is true, it will lead him in the right direction. Her father, having had his own mistakes dealing with his heartbroken daughter thrown in his face, has also seen Ryo's passionate determination to take care of her and is content to know she is in good hands...better hands than his own. Quite a bitter pill. *considers gushing like a fangirl and sighs* Ryo is...just awesome! Clueless; yes. Has Baka tendencies; yes....but still awesome! I hope your proud of your pup Sue, because I am.
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Title: Turning point
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This last chapter was 'the moment' in the story for me. A turning point where neither character can hide from their feelings any more. Or one another. They are trying to but at this point, it is a farce. It's 'do or die'. I like that Nez is not giving up and is willing to give as much as Ryo. But she is guarding her heart so fiercely from being hurt that she can't see what's there in front of her. It makes you feel so sad for her. That she's so young and carrying so much around inside of her. I really wish she had her father there for her but the good news is that she had Ryo for a very long time in her life. No wonder she is so afraid of losing him-of making the wrong choice-like what happened with her mother, she is treading so carefully, terrified that she will do something to destroy it all. And the saddest part is that none of this is her fault! Thanks for all your hard work and the update. (I try to say this to you b/c of the feelings you've expressed about needing to take a breather from fan fic and so on). It's the least I could do. :-)
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