| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Title: Missing Fanart
Reviewed By: Ultima X On: May 15, 2005 16:19 CDT
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I think this chapter was great. Espacially the "This Toga", "This Sierra" dialog was funny. But I have a question not concerning the story: What happened to your fanarts? They're completely gone on MM. I thought they were quite good. I hope that you keep posting your stories, I enjoyed them very much so far.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 00:42 CDT
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Then again, maybe he's not exaggerating. They seem to have covered a lot of ground very fast. Most people say you get along with family members better when you're all grown up...I say bs to it all. Ryomaru is sure putting a lot into trying to make up tih Nezumi. I think thats a lot of why she starting to accept their relationship and is letting it deepen. i really admire that he has that quality, especially since he is a former girl chaser. At least, he better be formerly. I think almost every family member would kill him if it wasn't. And, Sesshomaru has Tenseiga, so its literally possible...
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: May 13, 2005 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent Another Great posting of a new chapter. After the Purity Serries will you do another Inuyasha Fict? Have you done any on Full Metal Alchemist? I know you mentioned getting into the anime awhile back but I haven't heard anything else on it.
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Title: "This Sierra ..."
Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funniest line in the story. I really am enjoying where this one is heading, no "buts" attached.
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Reviewed By: Bandit the Army Brat On: May 12, 2005 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic!!I have read 1&2,and 3 is just as good.I cant wait till you get the next ch. on. I don't cair what enyone says,I love this fanfic! And if I hade to give it a 1 to 5 star reteing,I woud give it a 6 star ratring.
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Reviewed By: TheGreatMinionRalph On: May 12, 2005 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(+1 to all of the above)I'm not very good at this... I love this and all the purity stories beyond any online story i've ever read. By now, you have probably recived every form of praise that there is, and any compliment I give you would probably seem unorigional. Know at least that your stories have brought joy tome and many others, and that, in my opinion is the greatest compliment any writer or author could ever recive. You are a fantastic writer. Unassociated with the above, I have a question. I worry about reading P4 before P3 is completed. Does P4 reveal anything about the ending of P3? Anything that we can't already assume, I mean? (such as that Ryomaru and Deirdre end up together.) I really would like to know, so that if it dosen't I may start reading it. After I finish all the purity stories (I am at the current end of P3- chapter 37.) I plan to read your other stories, starting with chronicles. I look forward to your next chapter! P.S. Sorry I'm so long winded XD.
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Title: Ch. 37
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 02:07 CDT
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Wow, Nez finally agreed to the 'marking' process. Has Ryo ever told her all the benifits that marking brings to a mortal mate or has he only skimmed over what it means? Telling her the process isn't the same as full disclosure. Knowing may make it less traumatic. (Sorry for the sketchy review, it's hard to read and type when you keep zoning out from exhaustion. Especially when you have to erase a line of e's from drooping with a finger depressing the key.) -- On to P4!
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Title: Ch. 36
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 01:45 CDT
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Yay! A significant breakthrough for both Ryomaru and Deirdre. As uncomfortable it was to bare her soul and heart, it needed to be done...that step taken. They both were holding part of themselves back; He wanting her to accept the way things are now that they are mated without searching too deeply into the part he played in making her leery of the whole situation, and She wishing for the safety of thier old relationship without risking her heart for fear of being hurt beyond what she could stand...or survive. I'm glad that they are managing to work things out together. They still have quite a lot to hash out, but now they are 'walking' together in the same direction. -- Well, on to teh next chappie! (that's if I can keep my eyes open, lol)
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Darksquire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I went ahead and gave you a ten on originality this time... although this is a fan fiction half the charachters or more in this story you created. I'm on chapter 30 I think. I really like it. Thanks so much for writing these. They really are quite wonderful. Ryo and Nez are so perfect for each other. I hope they get their acts together soon though because they are going to drive me crazy! Well thanks again for writing this story. I have to dash and go do work now. Isn't that exciting? No not really. -C~i
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Reviewed By: Green Arrow On: May 11, 2005 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is absolutely brilliant!! I am thoroughly enjoying it. Pure genius. Ryo and Nez interact together so well, and their chemistry is amazing and heartwarming. Keep up the fabulous work.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 11, 2005 21:03 CDT
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Toga's gonna get his butt kicked! "This Sierra..." LOL I'm glad that, even though she's scared, she's listening, and really trying, maybe even really ready.... **sigh** love is not an emotion for wussies!
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Title: tears
Reviewed By: rage2velvet (not signed in) On: May 11, 2005 17:27 CDT
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I actually cried. This chapter made me cry. The embarassing part is that I was reading this on the way home on the bus. I got so choked up. It was so moving and beautiful. I truly felt the connection between Ryo and Nez. He became so attuned to her and everything that happened between them- wow, and to have such a strong guy break like that over you...I better not start crying again thinking about it-
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Reviewed By: Kitcat99 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I really enjoyed Toga talking like his father and Sierra's comeback in the same manner. The "fulminating glare" was good too...I couldn't stop laughing. Of course Toga's reaction to Ryo's innovative cussing was interesting, though he didn't notice the first time Ryo said "balls". A few questions: Wasn't Kagome and Inuyash's wedding a small one? So I don't think Ryo's wedding would be quite as large as Toga's. Will Kagome and Inuyasha have another child? She did ask in Purity 4. I also noticed that Rin and Shippo haven't been around much at all in the continuations. Are they being used more as comic relief/side characters again? How old are their children in Purity 3? Is Aiko still in Japan or is she else where? Did Kagome ever find out that Sierra is Sango's descendent? Well that's it for my questions I look forward to your next chapter even if it is keeping me from studying for finals. Though it is a much needed break...@_@ Brain fried! Kitcat
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Reviewed By: EAP On: May 11, 2005 04:50 CDT
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Yay! Another excellent chapter, just what I needed today. The exchanges between Ryo and Toga...I just cracked up. They are too cute together. I hope the writing is going along well, please update again soon!
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Title: Sigh
Reviewed By: Wlfhund On: May 10, 2005 23:11 CDT
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Oh my! I can't believe it! Ryo is working his magic. She is more creeped out by the thought of an elaborate marrige than the marking! Good for her! I know that one! My first marrige was the big nightmare... (some people call them social events) Don't remember much. Lots of posing for pictures, to many people and as soon as the huge dress goes on... you realize you have to pee! No way around that! Wlfhund
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