| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: May 27, 2005 12:36 CDT
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*sniffle* Closure is good.
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: May 27, 2005 11:51 CDT
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Okay that did it - you officially made me cry. You seriously could be a professional writer if the desire ever hit you.
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 (who's that?) On: May 27, 2005 10:14 CDT
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The true test of something filled with emotions? If it makes you react the exact way reading it for the second time as it did for the first. This chapter is filled with such depth and emotion, I really felt I like I was reading it for the first time. Again, I think this peice is one of your best work...and it actually has nothing to do with where the plot bunny for this one came from. The characters are so real, the plot is simple and wonderful with no 'real' evil standing in their way, except for the confusion of two friends...trying to muddle their way into something beautiful, simply because they know each other too well. The entire story is flawless in telling, and really pulls the readers in. Wonderful job.
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Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy(not logged in) On: May 27, 2005 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was precious. I am crying. I am going to miss P3.
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Title: Chp. 35
Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reee!Reeee!Ne Zu Mi! Kambate kambate Nezumi! Ties on a red head band around with the kanji for Kambate on it and does the Kambate cheer hand gestures and all so that Nezumi will have the corage to admit her feelings. (been in japan for a year and I still giggle at the kambate cheer) :P great heart wrenching fic per usuall Sue. Thanks for your lovely writings. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 14:06 CDT
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It looks like there may be the beginnings of a new relationship for Nez and her father, a more open and loving one. Every time she turns around, she is confronted with more evidence of how Ryo has always been there for her, proving that he does have staying power. -- InuYasha's insight and hope that Ryomaru and Dierdre elope instead of being coerced into some fantastical wedding from Kagome's fancy shows that the baka-gene can be tempered with time and experience...and then his stubborness jumps back in with both feet when Gin askes if she can date, "Hell No!" Well, he wouldn't be InuYasha if didn't have some kind of frustrating, irrational behavoir. LOL
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: mizbum2u On: May 26, 2005 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! sorry for the lack of reviews i've been a bit busy! anywho... i have a question! if inuyasha has the wind scar that he could use with tetsuaiga then couldn't ryo use his sword for a big blasting attack? (im guessing his sword is stronger then inuyasha) ^-^ great chapter! i loved it. things have been going great in this story... i noticed that there are alot of happy things now... does that mean its starting to end? i hope not. please continue! Now the previous chapter was one of my best. Iron reaver ass squisher! lmao! that was awesome... and how it ended with nez in ryo's arms... AWWWWW!! good job sue! and Gin is cool! lmao... she's so cute and persistant.. baka inuyasha is well... how would i put it? A BIG MEANIE! lmao jk alrighty... i hope you update soon! byee!!!
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Reviewed By: EAP On: May 26, 2005 01:26 CDT
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You never disapoint, you know? Another great chapter. Go Ryo for kicking evil butt, again. I really liked the Gin/InuYasha scene, very cute. I hope you can update again soon, I'm eager to read more!
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 19:06 CDT
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I love it so much. I'm glad that Ryo and Nez are going to be ok.
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Reviewed By: Akihana... On: May 25, 2005 18:16 CDT
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Hey, quick question. The name of the leopard youkai who appeared briefly was Tanak Akinoka, ne? That seems a tad bit strange for a Japanese, because they have no way to write "Tanak." All of the consonants (except n) must have a vowel following them. Its not that big a deal, just something I noticed. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 17:50 CDT
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*contented sigh* is it over? is this the end? i think that if it is the end then it's a good one but you could go on, i'm not sure, it's up to you. i love this story, and i'm glad things worked out with ryo and deirdre. (i still love that name) well till next time, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It just gives you the warm fuzzies don't it?
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 16:59 CDT
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Such a shame....I'm better at grammer than all of my friends that are into fanfiction....I'm more of their betas....although they give me some awesome ideas. (I just like my stories to be completed before posting them 'cause I don't have as good as skills as you!) Hmmm....visiting Mama's grave...should be interesting!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 16:48 CDT
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omg her father came to see her...they had a very deep father daughter moment that i guess they needed to have...but im glad that ryo and her are finally happy and the demons are GONE! heh and kagome's "meddling" lol
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: May 25, 2005 15:57 CDT
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wonderful chapter...i was wondering what happened to the evi neko. yay for happy endings!!! sooo....why do i sense a large amount of foreshadowing in that last scene about Inu and Gin needed a guy to kick his ass? heheh. (i'm eagerly awaiting that one. LOL). congrats on 1000 reviews! this story (as well as the rest of your works) deserves it!!!
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