| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 23:41 CDT
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great chapter, can't wait till the next one.
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Title: Don't mind me...I think I caught the Baka Virus...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 22:09 CDT
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Huzzah!! Nez is officially marked. I loved all the interaction between Deirdre and Ryomaru in these last two chapters. It's really beginning to show how close they've become. Once the bigger obsticles were out of the way, her fear being the biggest, they are finally growing into a relationship that will truly stand the test of time...and it will have to. LOL -- Uh oh, we all knew that the 'cats' were gunning for Ryo, but now it appears that he is only a small part of a larger conspiracy to 'de-throne' the Inutaisho regime. "...tonight on Tokyo Dynasty..." (sorry, hehehe, I couldn't help myself) Hmm...Kagura doesn't quite fit the "Alexis" part anymore... LMAO
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 21:42 CDT
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Hmmmm.... Bad youkais after the Fang brothers and family. That's never good. I hope that Ryo will get Nez back home in time before the bad youkais attack. At least he'll have he's sword then. I love the chapter. Great job! :)
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Reviewed By: Jesachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 19:44 CDT
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Totally awesome fic, Sue!!! Keep it coming!!! WHOOOOO!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: May 18, 2005 19:18 CDT
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This was another one of those chapters where I was torn between (~two loverssss...feelin' like a fooooool~ ooooh...too much lite 70s radio...ugh!)...*ahem*...torn between two emotions. I was so concerned for Nez and Ryo with the whole official "mating" process. After all the build-up and worry, I was so scared that something would happen! And yet, Kich and Ryo's (and Sierra's! LOL) banter had me laughing the entire time. Gotta love it. Oh, but Nez's last thought had me reaching for the tissues. *sigh* So beautiful! I'm kinda nervous about the youkai attack, but we knew it had to happen some time. I just hope all the appropriate parties are okay! ::worryworry::
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 16:58 CDT
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omg the marking is complete! their officially mates! yayyyyy but i can see theres going to be some more conflict ahead with those nasty demons out to get the family...uh-oh......
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 16:31 CDT
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When you brought up the fat ass, it reminded me of this cartoon I saw on the internet...Well, looks like some more actions going to show itself in your story...I don't understand why you don't like writing it, you do such a great job at it!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you updated!!! I was hoping you would. I thought this chapter was. . . . . diferent (not in a bad way) from the others. I don't know why, it just was. I'm a little curious about the new bad guys. Hmm. . . . .well, awesome chapter and I guess I'll go check out your website!!!!!
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 14:52 CDT
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Nez and Ryo are so cute now...It really has been amazing watching them come to terms with their feelings. The sibling interactions in this chapter between Kich and Ryo are just hilarious. Kich is a riot, and Ryo responds in kind. I love this story sue! I'm so nervous about the next chapter b/c I know those icky bad youkai are going to attack. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 18, 2005 10:00 CDT
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Those rogue youki have been giving me the creeps for a while. Now I know why. Shiver. Poor Ryo, he's out of shape and weakened from the marking. This is not going to be pretty. Those youki are insane though if they think they have a chance at Sessoumaru. The only thing that gives them any chance of even touching him is that Sess will probably exercise as much restraint as possible to avoid killing innocent bystanders. It's going to take a lot more than a bunch of youki riff raff to unseat the dog clan. Especially if Inuyasha and Sess work together. In addition, I imagine the dogs have an extensive network of allies. Still, I'm worried about Ryo. This is not what he needs right now. As always, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for your next update. Thanks for the great chapter!
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Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter had me chuckling from beginning to end. Great work, Sue.
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Reviewed By: Abril On: May 17, 2005 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore this fanfic just in general along with all the others that you have written. Lately the song "Demons" by Guster has been on my mind while reading your story and it makes me smile. I really can't imagine being brave enough to put my work out there like you do, but in your case you actually have talent. The characters in your work really stand out, they are believable and real. Inuyasha, Kagome and the rest seem right in line with the anime, which a lot of writers seem to have a hard time with. Good luck with you writing, talent like yours is a wonderful thing and I'm glad that you share it with us. Yours Truely Abril
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Reviewed By: blondi_51 On: May 17, 2005 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! please oh please decide to have ryo and nez have pups. Theyd be so cute! Well keep it up i LOVE YOUR stories. Best writer ever! Update soon! ^.^
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Reviewed By: EAP On: May 17, 2005 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I'm still really amazed at how real Nezumi is, it is so cool. You really have a knack for this writing thing...I look forward to every chapter, and i'm always so happy when you update. You write beautifully. You really, really do. Thank you so much for an excellent chapter!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya! So sorry I was late but I went to Schlitterbahn this weekend!!! Ya know, teh waterpark? I stayed there for like, eight hours and I didn't get sunburned! And I didn't use sunscreen, either. I bought a little killer whale as a souvenier. I would rather read the story, though. As much as I love Schlitterbahn, I L-O-V-E this story much better!!!!! Awesome chapter!!!!! Update when you can!!!
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