| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Title: ummmm
Reviewed By: fudge On: May 06, 2005 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm running out of comments. i LOVE your story keep it up! and did I mention I love your story! hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 16:57 CDT
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YAY! Looks like those two stubborn bakas are finally going to stop hiding from feelings and actually face them! About time! lol :o)
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm. . . . . . I looked over all of your other chapters earlier (because I was bored and this story is awesome) and I have to say that this is by far your best chapter yet. I'm hoping that the chapters get even better as you go along. I think this is my favorite because it shows how Ryo cares about Nezumi in a way that most of us can only dream of in the world we live in now. It also shows how Nezumi loves Ryo, when they were in the tree talking. It made me tear up a little bit because it reminded me of when InuYasha took Kagome up there so mamy times. If you ask me, Ryo resembles InuYasha a bit more than Kichiro does, because of his attitude and protectiveness. . . . .and jealousy, too. But I can't say for sure because I haven't seen THAT much of Kich. Well, I just wanted to say you are getting more creative each and every single time you update and I hope to see you soon!
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so happy you've updated...my day was a total bum...this si the best cure for anything...including english hw worth 15%of you final grade:)
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Title: Thank You
Reviewed By: WonderAway [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, I know you get a lot of reviews and mine is probably like all the rest. I've only reviewd to you twice but that was on another account. I read your one message board about how reviewers treat you and it made me feel so bad for you that I had to send a review. Though I have sent you reviews before there are some things I left out. Every time you review it lights my day up, your stories are funny, sad, intelligent, and so much mroe I can't put into words. I love reading your stories and I'll continue as long as you are kind enough to post them. Personally I can live without lemon as it annoys me whn writers write sex too soon or too much or for no reason. Everyday I look forward to a chapter but I'm never pset if it doesn't come that day because I know ho busy you are. Your stories make me happy and they help me get through some things are relax. My mom has breast cancer and my parents are getting a divorce and college is crazy so reading them just helps me relax. They're so well written it's like I'm actually a character in the story and so it's like I'm someone else for just a few minutes. Thank you so much Sueric.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: May 06, 2005 02:06 CDT
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Cool!! I really like all the dialoge between Ryo and himself, very entertaining. And him getting all protective at the end...Made me happy :). I'm so glad you got a chance to update, you made my day!
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 23:17 CDT
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Opps!!! my review got cut off anyway here is the rest wasn't paying attention to how long I went oh well.... Anyway thats enough of me on my soap box I have a question I can't remember whats in the box? I know there are pictures and I know there are tickets I think from the dance he took her to so he could get that other girl but is there anything else? Great story I love these characters Ryo and Nez rule.
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Reviewed By: Ladyblade (NSI) On: May 05, 2005 23:14 CDT
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Ah.. thanks for the clarification ^_^ Pardon my lack of intelligence lol. It was late when i read that and of course once i had sleep i realized I could have found the info myself, but thanks for answering me just the same :) Another great chapter. I'm really itching to see how things go in P4 lol, but also entralled with 3. Until next chapter!
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Title: I suck... at reviews
Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 23:08 CDT
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This chapter just rules!!!! It points out all the things that some of your reviewers seem to not get at times. Ryomaru realizes how he has treated Nez their whole lives, that his youkai picked her from the time they were pretty much children and he realizes why she is dressing the way she did with the well... dress. It blows my mind and frankly makes me angry when people say they don't like Nez. I find it hard to believe that people adopt the blame it on the victim mentality at times I hope that this chapter helps to drive home Nez's reasoning for being so slow to trust Ryo. It is obvious to me that in this story Ryomaru has really not treated Nez as well as he should have in the past. I mean the guy has used her to get to other girls, he's put her life in danger with the whole river incident. I realize people can argue that he didn't mean to but how selfish is that? Sure he honestly didn't mean for her to be hurt but he still used her and if he had not only been thinking about himself he would have realized that it was not a smart idea to send her out in the weather. It's no wonder the girl has such an incredibly hard time trusting him. To top if off she knows him almost better then she knows herself she has seen him chase girls, only for the chase, once it's over he drops them flat!!! How can she not be afraid to be one of those girls??? Anyway thats enough of me on my soap box I have a question I can't remember whats in the box? I know there are pictures and I know there a |
Title: nice real nice
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First. Sue thank you for answering my questions. I'll explain another time why I asked if you had anything published. But let me review this beautifully written chapter. You know just when I think I have Ryo completely figured out ( being a rough and tough like Inuyasha), you come out with showing a very sweet caring and sensitive side of him. WOW!! I love how you portray these two characters nez and ryo. don't know how you do it but you make the characters so real its like you can just reach out and touch them. thanks ever so for a wonderful chapter and have a really nice weekend. J
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 05, 2005 18:57 CDT
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Another great chapter. Ryo is really trying to figure his way through this. Way to go! I'm rooting for him. Thanks for sharing your work!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 18:26 CDT
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So, now Baka Ryo finally finds out about his youkai blood...bet he feels stupid now. I wonder, will Nez ever how Ryo the contents in the box? Probably not lol. One thing I love about anime...get's your mind off of reality.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: Firetrixs [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I mentioned this before. thank you i really needed this after today. i had a feeling that you would update today
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 18:19 CDT
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Well following up is not something I had really thought about other than the way you have with Purity, I always thought one would follow along the journal aspect of the story, also I thought that if a sequal was made, you (and your betas) have great enough minds to create a world out of it, as you have with the Purity series. Anyway, whatever you decision is on that matter I would repsect it, the only thing I would actually try to 'change your mind' about would be to stop writing and posting altogether, I (and countless others) enjoy your stories, and no matter what kind of shit you get from those bakas that don't understand you work and effort put into these, we will always support you, Sue. Thanks for the writing you have done. Ja ne, Chris
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 17:55 CDT
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*lip quivers and eyes water* Wow...even a little edit goes a long way. *wipes eyes* That last line was just. *Glomps Ryo* The baka has learned so much in this chapter. Quite the emotional overload for him. I just can't wait to see how he's going to break down that wall around her heart...only to find that he's been in there this whole time...the wall was just there to protect herself. *sigh* You have the most indepth characterizations...how can anyone not fall in love with these characters you have created. You have the ability to bring them to life with written word...and I so admire you for that.
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