| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 22:31 CDT
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yeay...you updated fast this time, i like when writers can update fast, not that i expect them to, oh no just the opposite, i like better knowing they've worked on a stories next chapter hard so that it will be good, you seem to be able to just make 'em good without all that stress, great chapter, updates asap, Zirra
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Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 22:13 CDT
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nice chapter. setting us up for something coming. I'm waiting for the attack on Nez. we all know it's coming, it's just the question of when.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 21:28 CDT
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hmm even though they've finally understand each other, theres still other issues to consider...hopefully nez goes through the marking process...n hopefully those two get back to doing what they are comfortable doing [oversized clothes and hunting] iM lUvInG tHe sToRy!
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Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon (it REALLY doesn't want to admit I'm me...) On: May 10, 2005 21:27 CDT
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Awww, poor Nezumi. She doesn't know what she's gotten herself into, does she? Heeheehee. Hooray for fluff!
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: May 10, 2005 20:01 CDT
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"This Sierra"...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA:coughhack:HAHAHAAAA! ;) Oooh...the marking. Yeah. Not being afraid of needles or blood, I can't feel what Nez does here, but I can certainly understand why she'd be more than a little nervous. And I love how Ryo and Nez are continuing to grow closer, little by little. As Nez notes in this chapter, although she still has her moments where she wants to back away and hide (and Ryo is still fighting those baka genes), they've kept at it and their relationship is developing into something even greater than their original friendship. That takes a lot of trust and courage, and they're doing it, bit by bit. :)
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Reviewed By: leyley On: May 10, 2005 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love these two, fumbling through their relationship trying to make things work, the whole give and take. Top marks to ya.....
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 17:26 CDT
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So the marking shows up again, eh? Hopefully she'll agree to do it.
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Reviewed By: kurisu no ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 17:04 CDT
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interesting...I can't wait to see where this goes. lol, ja ne
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Title: I love Sue the BEST
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehe, can't wait for the wedding. . . I have a feeling Kags will be dissapointed. . .
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! Updates two days oin a row!!! Boy, do I feel special!! Anyway, I thought it was an aweosme chapter as usual and please keep updating any time you can!!! ~One of your biggest fans (^_~)~
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 10, 2005 16:39 CDT
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Heh. Lots of favorite bits in this chapter. I love the phrase "fulminating glare." I want one. Grin. I also loved "you'd think that women never had babies, the way Toga carries on" and "you don't get that constipated look unless something is bugging you, so you might as well tell me what it is." Lots of great moments. I also loved the way Ryo gobbled up all his meat and then went begging for Nez's. Definately classic inu behavior - hanyou, yokai, and mortal garden variety pup. I also loved the "this Toga" "this Sierra" exchange. Excellent. So much fun in this chapter. Thank you!!
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Title: am I right
Reviewed By: yasha 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think nez's marking spot is on her leg btw great chapter jane yasha
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Reviewed By: Firetrixs [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 14:42 CDT
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Another masterful chapter. Thanks Sue, I needed this break. Only 12 days till my graduation.
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 14:41 CDT
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Yay Sue! 2 chapters in 2 days. This was exactly what I needed when I got back from my exam today. This chapter was beautiful and funny. I wonder where Nez's mark will be? Thanks again Sue for a wonderful chapter! ~ mackie
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Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow ... I just finished this chapter and ... wow.
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