| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 22:56 CDT
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BEEFCAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!! Toga may not live to see his first born well born!!! Heh I wa wondering what was in the envelope thats terribley amuseing I am so happy that the beefcake piccy is comeing back to haunt Toga. Thats just too amuseing I love this fic!!! Hope you and the kids are feeling better!!!
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Reviewed By: Anoki On: April 05, 2005 19:45 CDT
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Once again another great chapter. Ryo is such an awesome character and I can't wait for another chapter. So thanks for being a wonderful writer and I hope you feel better.
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-nsi On: April 05, 2005 19:38 CDT
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Was this progress? Will these actually get there @sses in gear. I'm not sure if I missed something or not, but did the issue of Ryo's dissapearance ever come up? Is it going to?
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Reviewed By: OROsan7706 (not signed in...thought i did though) On: April 05, 2005 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that's not good; just get a lot of bed rest I guess. I hope you all feel better soon. The flu has been spreading all over here too. Well, I hope you all get better, take care!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi, I don't WANT to imagine Kagura's face. . . . . *shudders*. Anyway, PLEASE stop throwing up and get better!!!!!! I know, it sucks. I've been through it. Get better soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tachi_fossae [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 15:37 CDT
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Somehow I just knew the calendar would come back to haunt Toga. I quite literally fell out of my chair laughing about it. Frustrating the way every time Ryo and Nez start getting close they're interrupted, but what can you do. I can sympathize with Ryo and his inability to cook; it's all I can do to make ramen.
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Reviewed By: webcomicLoser On: April 05, 2005 15:29 CDT
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hope you get better.
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Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 15:00 CDT
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I cannot wait to see Kagura and Kagome's reaction to Toga's beefcake calendar. I think that Kagome will find it pretty funny. She has a good sense of humor. She'd have to after all those years with Inu-yasha. It was so sweet of Ryo to cook dinner for Nez. I mean, he could have just ordered in but the fact that he took the time to try something that he is not very good at just to please her is better than five star meal. He had better tell her about his "job" soon or she going to find out on her own and she can be scary when she gets mad. It is nice that you posted a chapter today since your family is sick. I hope everyone is feeling better. Take it easy. After all, Moms don't get sick days.
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Reviewed By: DawnIllusion On: April 05, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see the reaction of Kagome and Kagura when they see the beef calendar! I hope you and your kids are feeling better. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 13:04 CDT
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Awwwwwww!!!!! He cooked for her!!! Toga and Sierra are having a baby!!! YAY! lol At least he got the pizza part right. And if he thinks Nez is going to forget about Toga's little slip, he's got another thing coming... Hope you feel better soon. Try drinking ginger ale (if you can keep anything down, that is) It always helps me when I have the stomach flu. *hugz*
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Title: Awwwww
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, poor Nez. I've tasted burnt rice before so I can totally sympathize with her. I have to say this chapter was highly amusing with Ryo's cooking, the flashback, and Toga and Sierra's teasing (and of course, the part about Ryo sending Kagura and Kagome that calendar... I can just imagine their reactions). Which BTW, I am thrilled to hear that Sierra's going to have a baby. Anyways I was really hoping that this chapter being posted meant that everyone was feeling better, but reading your AN burst my bubble so I end this review by sending wishes of good health for you and your family. *sends virtual chicken soup with noodles in the shape of InuYasha characters*
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: April 05, 2005 11:18 CDT
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Sorry to hear that everybody is sick! Definitely take care of yourself and the kiddos before worrying about posting! But since you did....what a great chapter! I'm constantly amazed at how you can so deftly have me engrossed in the mushy romanticness one second and lmao at the total lunacy the next. Ryo is being SO sweet here. Looks like he's starting to understand how their shared history (and his past behavior) has affected Nez. I just want to cheer him on - that's it...keep doing what you're doing...don't screw it up... LOL By the time I hit the "I want you" line, I was just a little puddle of goo...then *BAM* mood broken! LOL Toga and Sierra are having a baby!!!! Yea!!!! That's really awesome. I was laughing so hard at the repartee - poor Nez...she's definitely in danger of dying from embarassment. And the return of the beefcake!!!!!!!! ROTFLMAO!!!! Heh heh heh... I am a little concerned about Nez's thoughts on the "youkai exterminator". Ryo definitely needs to explain his job more fully, but I don't forsee a good reaction when she finds out the truth. Yikes.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: April 05, 2005 10:37 CDT
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Another awesome chapter, but damnit woman would you REST!! This will all wait until you and the family is well. Random comment about the chapter, I love Toga! "That other smell"... mawhahahahaha.
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Title: Aww, take care of yourself.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 10:15 CDT
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He cooks! Well, don't give up your day job Ryo. And he's talking...not much but it's a start. His observations are starting to make Nezumi nervous because they are right on target. It won't be long before he figures out just how blind he was. Even if she tries to deny how long she's loved him, he'll see she's lying. -- Toga almost spilled the beans about Ryo's job and I'm sure Ryo's about to get the third degree after Nez thinks about it more. Hehe, I might have known that Ryo was capable of blackmail. He's been sitting on Toga's beefcake pictures waiting for the worst (or best, depends on your point of view) time to bring them up. -- Congratulations Sierra & Toga!
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Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was hoping that since you posted this chapter it meant you were better... but your AN dashed all of my hopes and dresm. *tear* Anyway, this was a great chapter... so cute. *all warm and fuzzy inside* Random thought... just where did Ryo get the beefcake?
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