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Reviewed By: notzathros On: March 29, 2005 09:22 CST
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Kichero's two "helpful" words made me laugh. Such brothers. He's right though, Ryo is really being dense about Nez. Poor Nez. I hope she can eventually learn to accept Ryo for what he is, 'cause he's pretty cool. He'll be even cooler when he's not so dumb. (grin)
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 09:20 CST
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still lovin every chapter. When will Ryo actually do something right with nez? seems like all he does is get himself in trouble with her.
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Title: Review Pt. 2
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 08:56 CST
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...and surprisingly, Sesshomaru this time not dragging his brother threw too many flaming hoops before bequeathing the answers. And Sessh has only himself to blame for Inuyasha's appalling lack of knowledge, though IMO IY's none-the-worse for that lack, and far stronger a personality for what he's endured to get this far. Yeah! Hah, Kagome continues her miko role as matriarch, LOLROTF!! Thanks are insufficient for your latest literary outpourings, but I say it anyway: THANKS SO MUCH!!! WARM AND FUZZY DAY after a hella week medically from additional complications, you'll never know how so very MUCH, SO damned much it means for me to be able to grasp some hafts of light. Helps me take care of my fam that much better, even when primarily incapable;to go that extra mile. You don't need this much info...but,in light of your recent disappointments, I think you do,the tremendous difference an author can make--in this case, YOU. {{{{ }}}}
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Title: Review Pt 1
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 08:56 CST
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Priceless, the chapters. First, Nezumi agreeing to accompany Ryo to the contractor's office as she slowly continues to deepen her mate's hold on her life in all aspects. The ice cream cone scene? HILARIOUS, as the hit-to-the-nuts flashback, the touching reminder of Ryo's that he'd never let her fall with the swing...the wonderfully heart-wrenching subtle tenderness as Nezumi please, "My terms"? And, Ryo not only acquiesces, but he suffuses slightly yet again--and she *catches* this,allows herself to comprehend the import, at least the barebones.And that painting idea? Consummate genious. Oh,oh,oh, you just keep enriching this amazing, continuing Saga. Hah, All Hail Inu Family Tessaiga Shoving Festivities in all its multi-generational Gloria!!! LOLROTF--poor Nez, tho, and in Ryo's cheerful bloodlust, he completely forgot just *why* she'd be so affected,after the memory dredging the previous night. Oh, I hope he didn't completely undo the hesitant strides accomplished into softening her stance!!! Kich had the sense, but Ryo just didn't listen, Baka! But, she did need to come to grips with this integral aspect of family life. Oh yeah, loved the comfort level in the exchange between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha. Heh, the fastidious Inotaisho eschewing IY's bare feets on the desk, LOLROTF
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Title: *dying of laughter*
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 07:59 CST
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Oh this chapter is priceless. I would soo pay to see a picture of Sesshoumaru thwapping InuYash's feet. *snickers* I love reading about their family get togethers. And I'm glad to see that Kagura still has all of the boys still quacking in their toes in fear of her fans and temper. But I feel bad for poor Nez. *sighs* Kich is right, Ryo is a dumb ass. lol, but he's such a lovable one. I can't wait to see how he gets out of the doghouse noew.
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Reviewed By: Aitu- not signed in On: March 29, 2005 07:23 CST
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Very entertaining. It's always a laugh fest whenever Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru get out the swords to "play." Looks like Nez didn't really take it that well.. ah, that's to be expected. Loved the "two words" for Ryo, hahaha. Cannot wait to see what happens next! loves it! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: March 29, 2005 07:10 CST
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Just wanted you to know that you had me laughing outloud several times during that chapter. Thank you.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Kadaede NSI On: March 29, 2005 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so interesting...I was wondering how they all vented, since Inuyasha can't exactly go on forest clearing sprees anymore...poor Nezumi...I hope she kicks his butt when he finds her! Anyway Keep up the great work!
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Title: Ah yes
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 06:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
boys will be boys lol. Interesting chapter. I wonder how nez is going to take to ryo's profession. Especially due to she cant stand blood. I assume that since she is a tough ass that she was more upset about the possibility of someone bleeding than the display of fighting.
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Title: IKMS
Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 06:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I love the conversations between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha! You crack me up with the way you have them baiting each other (mostly Sesshoumaru). I can just see Sesshoumaru swatting at his feet! How will you be able to get Nezumi to lose her fear of blood though? The family she is mated into is pretty much always going to have to deal with blood one way or another. I can't wait to see how you pull it off though. Thanks for another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: March 28, 2005 17:53 CST
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Aww 17 was really cute. GO NEZ! heh, I'm so proud of her! ^_^ Ryo and Nez are just so adorable. Good for her for having the courage to give him a kiss on the cheek. I love the painting too, it sounds really beautiful. lol, I always end up with this stupidly happy grin on my face whenever I read one of your chapters! That's a good thing!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 17:49 CST
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awww wut a sweet update!! haha hmm i wonder if that painting that kagome got is to help out the 2 of them with their trusting problems...at least those two seem to be gettin closer!!!
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for asking my question...that was a very cute chapter. I wonder when she's going to start believing in the 'mating' thing...hmm...
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Reviewed By: yasha 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how sweet! So nez finaly got the courage to do something. I wish she would of just acsepted ryo'2s gester for what it was. but I guess the suspence her reluctance causes is what makes it so fun to read. At least she is getting closer to understanding that she is not like the other girls to him. later yasha
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Title: Cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you posted another chapter. I think I go through withdrawls on the weekends. Reading this story is the bright spot of my morning. Really nice chapter. It was fluffy but you didn't take it to the point where it would rot your teeth. It sounds like Ryo's youkai is smarter than he is. Oh well, like father like son, huh. I seem to remember another pighead hanyou that couldn't get his act together until it was almost too late. I think this is exactly what their relationship needs. They didn't have the time to gradually move from friends to lovers beforehand so now they must do it afterwards. I just think that their date was so cute. And if they survive without killing each other while designing the house then it means their relationship can handle anything.
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