| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha and Ryo are so easy to sway... All it takes is a few pretty pleases and some eyelash batting and they're gone. lol I have a question, have you ever considered writing a Miroku/Sango fic? I love those two, but I have yet to find a half way decent fic about them. I know you would do them justice. :o)
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 11:59 CST
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I bypassed the silly ratings, since I always make it all 10s anyway ... wow, things are really starting to gel for Ryo and Nez, huh? I'm dying to figure out what the unspoken "you don't think ... ?" stuff is between Kagome and InuYasha!! Obviously, it has something to do with Ryo and Nez's childhood friendship, but I can't imagine what it could be that Ryo would actually remember ... hmmm, this will keep me busy for a while! Great idea with the portrait that Kagome had done - can hardly wait to hear the reaction to that one too!! Thanks for another enjoyable chapter! :-D
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 28, 2005 11:52 CST
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I'm glad there was no crying this time. Ryo is so damn sweet when he wants to be... or maybe he's just a sweetie all the time - there had to be a reason that she hung around him for so long. "Nah, Kich is still around." LOL. What's Yasha going to ask?? Ryo said that he'd protect her all those years ago... he's own undoing...mawhahaha
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Title: I smiled all the way through this chapter...my cheeks hurt.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 10:39 CST
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This was so cute, and fun. I loved the painting, awwwwwwwwww. And Kagome's needling InuYasha to 'ask' Ryo...hehe. His reaction was almost, "How can he not know if his youkai chose Nez? He can't be that thickheaded!" But Kagome knows her wonderfully thickheaded mate...and some traits always breed true! LMAO - Awwwwww (there I go again) the moment between Ryo and Nez at the swing was so warm and fuzzy. I loved it. And Nez has discovered that, as strong and confident Ryo might be, she has the upper hand. I bet if she tried, she could have him stuttering like a schoolboy. *giggle* -- What a great way to officially start the week! Thanks Sue!
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Reviewed By: AkuPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww, what a sweet chapter. When she said on her terms, I thought she was going to knee him in the groin, but it is very apparent that she is really enjoying herself now and letting Ryo help. She seems to be letting out a more carefree side and I think it has caught Ryo hook-line-and sinker XD. And it seems that Inu and Kag have an inkling about Ryo's youkai choosing her, but it is adorable to imagine it choosing her back when they were so young! Great chapter, as always!
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Reviewed By: Catnel On: March 28, 2005 09:29 CST
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Sueric! I found you! :) I am so glad I found your writings again. I was going through Purity 3 withdrawls. :) The story is going so well, and I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the good work. Sad about Nezumi's mom. Made me cry... It's not her fault at all, but a child takes so much burden upon their souls when they shouldn't.
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Title: like dating
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 09:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness!! How cute it's like their dating. Well anyway I am such a glutton that I was hoping due to the weekend you would post an extra chapt. I am getting fat on this story (better than cake). lol . Great chapter sue, I like how you referred back to inu and kag's relationship (friends first then lovers). I think those relationships last the longest and the most profound. The kiss by the swing it looks like nez is finally realizing the impact she has on ryo (or vise-versa). Love it!!! Thanks again, sue. J
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Title: so sweet
Reviewed By: Deep Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah so sweet and funny while I am a fan of agnst it's good to see them just enjoying each other. I bet that picture is so sweet! I like the current direction and can't wait to see where this goes, good job
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Title: great chappies
Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapters, poor nez to loose her mom that way. no wonder she is such a tom boy. love how they are slowly getting closer, he has a house being built, to sweet and her own room and bath (far away! lol) she is breaking through him isn't she? thanks for another great chapter. littleolmee
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: March 28, 2005 05:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello great updates as always. I have an announcement I wanted to make. I believe it is time for us to take action. Action against the flamers on tthese fanfiction sites. These people are ruining the experience for authors everywhere. They are torturing these writers and they dont even give it a second thought. I know how those authors feel. I once wrote my own Inu/Kag fict and After I recieed my reviews I just ended up deleting the story and now I only review. So it is about time someone took this to the administrators of these sites and put a stop to this Flaming. Whose with me?! We must put a stop to these people! There stupidity is starting to ruin these sites. These people should be given a warning about this and if done again be banned from these sites all togather. So stand up for what you think is right and tear down these FLAmers!!!! That is all I have to say. Great story Sueric hope you update real soon.
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Reviewed By: KayT On: March 27, 2005 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories and when i read the A/N from the chapter "Kichiro" it made me angry that there are low-lifes just out there to flame and make others feel bad for a great story. I really hope you keep writing. Don't let a couple pricks bring you down, because they aren't worth it. Your stories are so original and there aren't that many authors that actually finish what they have started, and you do that. So I hope you keep writing, and don't let some scum get to you.
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Title: question
Reviewed By: gameprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your stories!!! do you know of any other good fanfiction sites where i can post my story? i already have it here and at anime spiral. yasha101 helped too will you read it? it is called hunter tell other people to read it also please!!! thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: March 27, 2005 15:14 CST
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Happ waster to you as well! And you know...I KNOW you missed me! lol I went on a trip to san fransisco...had fun, etc. But I missed being able to read your fanfiction. So I finally caught up, like a good little girl. :P Anyways, I just wanna say that if you do ever repost that one chapter you are talking about, i look forward to reading it. This story and others you have written, are always different from the last, and never copy from another writer's style. I respect that...and some people, they just can't respect the magic you weave in the tales you spin. So you know what? I, as a devoted fan to your fictions, have to say WAY TO GO! I'm loving it! And come on..don't let others get ya down on that. You are right..there is a back button...some people are just to off the wall to know how to use it. ANyways, luck to ya, and I hope to see another chapie soon cause they are definately awesome to read!
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Reviewed By: JoseB On: March 27, 2005 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I just discoverd the Purity series and I love it! I read it all the way through in one day! Please dont let the flamers hurt your feelings, the fact that they flamed one of the best written stories on the net shows how ignorant they are! Please keep posting!
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Title: i found you!
Reviewed By: mizbum2u On: March 27, 2005 07:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i found you! i'm one of your animespiral readers! i was trying to find you everywhere! i had you on my favorites and wanted to check it but then it gave me some other person! so after that i did search author's name: sueric. and i still didn't find you! i was going to cry! thank god i remembered that you had mediaminer! i love all of your fictions! they inspire me alot! thanks for continuing the stories! i love all of them! please update soon and repost the other fiction becasue you have a way with words that melt my heart! thank you! *~hien~*
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