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 Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2005 16:22 EDT
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*evil chuckle* Just ignore me while I revel in Izayoi Sensei's downfall. KABOOM!!
 Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon, who after all this time is still not signed in  On: July 08, 2005 16:04 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wildflowers and SEX?! o.O ...Well, sure, why the hell not. Belle's an odd one, why should she smell normal? ...Anywho. Lovely chapter, as always. No Gin or Cain, unfortunately, but I somehow doubt you'd neglect them. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2005 15:41 EDT
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Aww this chapter was really cute. Kichiro seemed a little more playful tonight; can't wait to read about the experience at an amusement park....what will he do when she wants to go on the tallest and fastest ride? Maybe he'll scream like a girl.
 Reviewed By: chichiwvu-nsi  On: July 08, 2005 13:41 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I dont' know why, but i'm actually kinda confused in this chapter... Was kich really drunk? I can see him saying those things to any woman, but it's interesting to see him saying things like that to belle. it is a nice movement forward though... i've been waiting for kich to fess up for some time!:)
 Reviewed By: Amargo Scribe  On: July 08, 2005 12:05 EDT
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Nice to see some active courting being done. I really liked this chapter--the men in your romances can make me uneasy with how overbearing they can be at times, but in the end, they respect the woman's wishes, and that's the most important thing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
 Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2005 11:05 EDT
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A very nice beginning to what could be a beautiful relationship! :D
 Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(>.> hmmm....don't think i'm logged in....sorry ^.^)  On: July 08, 2005 10:37 EDT
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awsome chapter.. so sweet and fluffy.. can't wait till the next one. update asap, please. ja ne, Zirra
 Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2005 10:36 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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That was such a beautiful chapter. I don't think Kich was drunk, was he? It doesn't matter though, since he sort of told Belle how he felt. I can't wait for the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: EAP  On: July 08, 2005 05:12 EDT
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I'm with Cain, that was totaly...Wow...Aazing chapter, and an amazing kiss. And the defense lessons! Brilliant idea, I love it. Good luck on the nexy chapter, I, as always, eagerly await it!
 Title: Ch37
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 07, 2005 21:35 EDT
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Hahaha! After all the fun must come the punishment...looks like Belle's in a bit over her head this time though, girlifying Kich and all. And now Kich is gonna teach her? Oh boy... Its nice to see how much closer Gin and Cain are getting too. Awesome job on getting them this far, Sueric! Keep it up, and keep 'em wanting more! d('')b
 Reviewed By: Rawben...  On: July 07, 2005 20:59 EDT
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yey! great chapter! yey for kissing! ;) anyhow, so what the heck was kich talking about? "i'll bet he does"?? does that mean that he thinks that cain hates it but he's just being nice by eating them? ...what is it w/ dogs and peanut butter? lol... ;) that's just too adorable. i forget that he's japanese sometimes... is that weird? and that he'd never have had contact w/ peanut butter before...lol... anyhow, so is kich going to make her buy underware? cause that'd be funny... ...and yey for her learning to protect herself! everyone should be able to do that! at least a lil... ;) uh... i guess that's it... uh.. have a nice day?
 Title: Chapter 37
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 07, 2005 20:42 EDT
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Uh-oh. Cain kissed Gin. He really kissed Gin and regretted it afterward. Kich and Belle are actually being civil towards each other. Hopefully Kich won't put his foot in his mouth and screw it up. Training, huh? I wonder what kind of situation that will lead to. Things are developing at a nice pace between the two couples. You're doing great as always.
 Reviewed By: Amargo Scribe  On: July 07, 2005 17:29 EDT
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Yay, a chapter where Kichiro doesn't come off as a jerk! :) Of course, while his intentions are no doubt good--after all, she SHOULD learn how to defend herself--fighting lessons are like, the classic sexual tension builder. Can't wait!
 Reviewed By: WhiteTara  On: July 07, 2005 16:50 EDT
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This chapter made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, but interestingly enough it wasn't the kiss that did it, it was the interaction between Belle and Kich. There was something about how the whole thing played out. He took what would have been a disaster earlier on and turning it into something good for both of them. Teaching herself defense is about one of the sweetest things he could do. I love how they are able to assert who they are and both be strong individuals and still look like a couple absolutely in love.
 Reviewed By: GoldWings [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 07, 2005 16:47 EDT
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Good chapter! I love Belle and Kichiro. They're so youthful.
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