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Title: Chapter 39
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: July 09, 2005 14:10 EDT
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::sniffles:: oh poor Gin!! I feel so bad for her! Ah even if Cain didn't mean for what he said to hurt her...ouch. And she's drunk now...oh boy! heh, a drunk Gin will be rather...interesting to say the least! heh, makes me wonder just what all she'll do! She's already lost her inhabitions ;) I love jealous Cain though at the beginning...heh, he's so cute when he's jealous, and when he's flustered too! But Gin's comment about not wanting to go on another date if that was a date was so sad too :( But I love how he took her home, it reminds me of inuyasha and kagome. It's so sweet! Wonderful chapter Sue! And thank you for helping me get my mind off of my kidney stones :) Thanks for posting today, it definitely helped me feel better ::big hug!::
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Reviewed By: EAP On: July 09, 2005 05:08 EDT
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Interesting, very interesting....As always, I really enjoyed this chapter. I really like the dynamics between Kichiro and Belle, its so much fun to read. I look forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Ch38
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 03:54 EDT
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Woohoo! *Ahem* Wow, that was rather intersting, no? Kich's and Belle's human nights are on the same day, huh? Come to think about it, we shoulda figured that out, right? You hinted about their nights in the chapter where Cain went over to Gin's while she was a human. At least thats what I "think" I remember, lol. Anyways, awesome chapter. The tension between the two was so thick, you could almost choke on it =P Very cool. Loved how you focused on Belle and Kich for this chapter, 'specially since Cain just got a kiss, hehe. For all the bickering that goes on between the two hanyous, they've got it bad for each other. Serious awesomeness, keep it up! d('')b
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Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: July 09, 2005 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wasn't ryo suppose to be the baka? you know that old tv show kids say the darnest things well they should make one drunken hanyou's say the darnest things. anyway scary but good chapter and i thought you said this was the last purity please don't let it be and if it is are ryo and nezumi ever going to have a baby?
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 02:11 EDT
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I so love your Cain, Gin, Kich and Belle! They are sweet, funny, sexy, hawt! The kissing.. man.. and the humor. Sess with the cake comment, and Cain with the "did she suck her thumb" omg! I thought I'd die.. laughing so hard.. This is such a great story. I'm going to miss this family so much when your done!
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Reviewed By: Anoki On: July 09, 2005 00:11 EDT
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Oh my goodness, what a wonderful chapter. You have no idea how excited I am that Kich is finally showing Belle his true self and not that angry facade he puts on for her. Things are starting to get more comfortable for both relationships. I smell a plot twist on it's way and I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: WhiteTara On: July 09, 2005 00:06 EDT
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I have decided to take it upon myself to become the personal cheering section for Belle and Kich. They are one of the best couples ever! Their whole interaction is great in that it goes beyond making you feel warm and fuzzy to making you feel just plain fabulous. I finish reading their sections and I want to cheer! Neither of them are perfect, but they just might be perfect for each other. And you're handling them so well! Most of the time when author's have a romance between two people who start out hating each other they fight until they're overwhelmed by passion. I like how you're developing the friendship between them alongside the physical part. That last section was beautiful, watching them blend sexual attraction with teasing and plain affection. It was perfect.
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Title: Purity 4
Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 22:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Burping contest! Oh my gosh what will you come up with next? I couldn't stop laughing, I kept rereading it just so I could keep giggling picturing his horrified look from her belches! What can I say - keep up the excellent work! I love your stories!
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: July 08, 2005 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im back. II just had to unpack my computer to read your next chapters. And they are GOOD. I was wondering do you still just update on week days or do you do both weekdays and weekends?
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 08, 2005 21:37 EDT
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hey, I'll review here. Cool chapter, and love the description of Belle's scent.
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Reviewed By: yasha 101(nli) On: July 08, 2005 20:52 EDT
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sorry i havent reviewed in a long time first my computer diedn then i went vacation so i just caught up this story is just priceless i love it so much well see ya -yasha
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 20:40 EDT
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sry for the lack of reviews...again...i wuz away with family...anyways i just finished reading the chapters i missed...haha that was interesting about belle's crest lol and it was just wow when cain kissed gin on her birthday but hilarious on the stories her family told about her childhood days..."show me yours and i'll show you mine" hahahaha
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: July 08, 2005 19:47 EDT
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lol! great chapter! ;) wildflowers and sex! anyhow, i liked it... kich is adorable. and i love that belle has has stripes...;) that's hilarious. just too funny. ohoh!! and now are you gonna do a chapter about gin and cain on her human night? or not b/c you've already done one w/ hers... anyhow, i'm tired. so i'll...stop. but it was great! yey!
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 18:54 EDT
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Oh, ok. Thanks for the response, I was just curious because it seemed like something Cain would do just to make Belle smile. :o) Anyway, HILARIOUS chapter! You had me chuckling for like five minutes. I'm glad that Kichiro and Belle are getting closer, I was wondering how long those two stubborn bakas were going to take to give in to each other. lol Oh, and the burping contest? Priceless... :o)
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Reviewed By: TenshiKaika On: July 08, 2005 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFL!!! I LOVED that chapter! *wipes tears from eyes and tries to stop laughing* When Cain said that he wanted to paint her my mind flashed to that scene in Titanic where that girl says, "I want you to draw me wearing this. Wearing ONLY this."
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