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Title: Chapter36
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 10:29 EDT
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Bwahahaha! Awesome birthday party! What is it with parents embarassing their children on their day though? I don't have kids, but I remember how my parents would tell embarassing stories about me on my birthday...Anyways, that was hilarious. I found it amusing how Belle told one person about Kich's "makeover," and that led to almost everyone in his family knowing what picture Gin was talking about. Serious awesomeness d('')b. (God bless you and your family, I'm sorry to hear what happened. I forgot to add this part to my previous review, so I'll add it here. Holding you and your family in thought prayer!)
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Title: Chapter35
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 10:17 EDT
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Woah...must be nice to live in a dream world where everything is perfect...to bad it isn't. Hopefully Belle can see the reality of the situation she's in, and not just the "reality" she imposes on herself. Thats where Kichiro steps in right? He sure is rather...blunt with his reasoning though. Strikes quite a contrast with the man-whore he used to be =P. Awesome work, keep it up! d('')b
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 09:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious birthday party. :)
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Title: OH wow
Reviewed By: Lokelani04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 08:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot stop laughing Sue!! This chapter was really really great. It's made my birthday really nice so far, just being able to sit here and laugh. I'm sorry about your sister-in-law's boyfriend. You and your family are in my prayers.
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Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: July 06, 2005 05:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so happy that the couples are finally starting to get closer and i think belle should learn how to fight i mean she a hanyou she should use that to her advantage and just so you know i'm not telling you to make it like that i'm just saying so if something like that happened again she could fight them off but great story i think kich and belle are getting nicer to each other and i know cain and gin are so i'm amazed that you don't get writers block when i'm writing a fan fic i don't get writers block usally but i do get name block and i was wondering are you going to have a purity 5 and if you are is it going to be about gin and cain child if they get together or is it going to be about kich and belle child if they get together or is it about inu and kagome child that they decided they were going to have? and what if they had another set of twin boys i think kagome would go crazy. anyway thanks if you read my really long review just say pointless stuff. great story update when possible. ^_^
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Title: thought provoking
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 02:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, after reading this chapter, I began to remember the night my father died back in 1992. I remember standing outside by my car late at night looking up to the stars telling God how I just lost the last man in my life ( I've never married). I absolutely felt so lost and alone. Reading your story I can understand how Belle feels about losing her father. Cain is all she has. You really nailed the deep emotional link Belle has to her father. Really good chapter and I am glad that Kich started acting like a sensitive male although you make him pretty sexy when he butts heads with Belle. lol. But really Sue, I always find something unique about each of your chapters. This chapter just twangs at the heart strings. Thanks for sharing it with us wacko fans of your writing. Joyce.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 05, 2005 23:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You write so well, and the story is proceeding nicely. It seems so well thought out; not rushed. I really love your stories, especially the Inu/Kag ones. Do you think you will continue to post? On MM? On your website? Or, are you going to take a break and work on your previous works? This is the last of the Purity series for now, isn't it? Will you still post for those of us who love your stories? I remember you voicing some thoughts earlier, and I wondered how you currently felt. I was just trying to figure out if I should start panicing now, before this story ends. I am truly a very spoiled SUERIC fan, who is used to getting weekly updates of high quality reading; and, I can not imagine what I will replace it with. This may not be the place for such questions; my apologies if so. I do understand if you decide you want a break. Thank you, for spoiling me, with this story and all the others that I get to reread. Cynbad146 P.S. Please do not listen to any jerks that complain or insinuate anything regarding Inu/Kag stories. We all know that is what attracted us to these stories in the first place. They are living in denial. I can not wait for your next Inu/Kag story. I imagine it will be a new storyline. Go Sueric!!!
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: July 05, 2005 20:09 EDT
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awww... so sad! i had high hopes for this chapter! he just found out that she doesnt wear underware! i was thinking sexual tension! lol, but this was great. sad. but nice. and what about gin and cain? i forsee a sad next chapter for them. please tell me i'm wrong. oh! and how about kich teaching belle how to fight... it'd be a good excuse to touch her... ;) ha. i'd laugh anyhow... :P
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last part about dreams having prices made me cry. That was so sad, but then I could just be PMSing. Anyway, great chapter as always. Can't wait for the next one. :)
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Reviewed By: GoldWings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 18:21 EDT
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Very good chapter. Keep it up!
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Title: Question
Reviewed By: Jason C On: July 05, 2005 15:57 EDT
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I have a question and I was wondering if you know the answer. What is Kagaga no subaba translated into? Do you know?
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 15:36 EDT
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I would have thought Belle versus three teenage punks would be much like a bear versus...well, three teenage punks. A bear is never taught how to fight, either, but that hardly gives pathetic humans much of a chance against it unarmed. But I suppose without fighting training her strength may not be built quite as super-human as the rest, either. Still, seems to me that though she might not escape unscathed, she would escape, and with the three punks pasted along the walls and sidewalk. Although that brings up the thought that Belle probably isn't mentally prepared to seriously hurt, much less kill, anybody. Hmm...I think about things too much.
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner(nsi) On: July 05, 2005 15:32 EDT
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I love how you've taken your OC's and managed to make them very much a part of the Inuyasha universe. Your scope of imagination is so vast it's amazing. As for the people who are complete dumbasses and complain about your stories, just remember that there are petty people out there who love nothing more than to make others miserable, not to mention they are usually unimaginative and non-creative people. Don't pay attention to them, keep writing for yourself and those of us who love your stories and have no complaints. Can't wait to read your next chapter since I'm absolutely addicted to these stories!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 14:55 EDT
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And with the water works again, aww, Belle finally told him...kinda; well about her dad anyway. I think this is the fourth of fifth time I've cried in your story...I probably have many more to shed, right? Or no? Well, keep up with the awesome writing and I'll read some more tomorrow!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(>.> nope not logged in.....) On: July 05, 2005 14:39 EDT
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awsome chapters...sorry i didn't review the last one but life was in the way. :P update soon. poor belle.. great story, update soon. ja ne, Zirra
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