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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 › » ] | Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 14:17 EDT
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All in all, I think Kich handled that rather well, and he got some new insight on why Belle acts and thinks the way she does. Belle's fear over losing her father is deep-seated and almost all-encompassing because he is her only family. Losing a parent to misfortune is one thing, but to face losing them in a planned manner is heartrending. I wonder if Belle ever thinks that Cain loved Isabelle more than his daughter? There go all those thoughts of, "...aren't I good enough?" and other lack of self-worth emotions that probably keep her in a state of fear. - InuYasha had to deal with those kind of thoughts while growing up and living on his own. And though Kikyou opened the door, Kagome is the one who welcomed him into the world of acceptance, bringing friends and home with her. I know he would do anythig for her and to stay in that world, even though he brought his so-called 'worthlessness' - Yes, Belle lives in an urealistic little world, but she feels safest there. She knows what's real, she just doesn't want it...not if it means she loses her father. Poor girl.
| Reviewed By: Amargo Scribe On: July 05, 2005 12:12 EDT
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This was a very touching one :) Kichiro really is on his best behavior. This has to be my favorite moment in any romance--the moment when things start moving in one direction, but both people are still so uncertain about each other. Makes for good reading. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: July 05, 2005 12:09 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok great chapter! you made my cry, however that could be the whole daddy thing that hits a little close to home. But i cry and wanted to tell you that cause i know you were worried before that you were loseing your touch. But great chapter, Can't wait to see what happens next. please update soon!!!
| Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 10:42 EDT
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Beautiful, I loved it! Can't wait for more.
| Title: great job!
Reviewed By: fluffy_hugger On: July 05, 2005 10:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story it is fantastic but i have a few questions that have been bugging me for a while. when a hanyou and a human mate the full moon they get hanyous and new they get humans (realize that it is different for different hanyous) but when a demon and hanyou mate, it would be when the hanyou isn't human, so they wouldn't get hurt or anything, but then wouldn't the baby be full demon? yah, i think that might have been mentioned befor in something eles. but when hanyou and hanyou mate, like belle and kich, on the full moon what do yo get, i think it would be full demon, wouldn't it? both of thier demon heritage is strongest at those times. so how would that work out? I was just courious. love that story, keep it up.
| Reviewed By: misterflem On: July 05, 2005 10:27 EDT
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nice chapter. whens the next time that you'll be posting up a historical romance story?
| Reviewed By: Jason C On: July 05, 2005 10:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im still here. Nice Chapter by the way. Guess what.... I lost all the data on the stories I was reading. I reinstalled windows and forgot to back them up. Over 200 fricken stories Im so pissed soI decide to type it out to realive some stress. Anyways good work on the chapter. See you around next chapter.
| Reviewed By: EAP On: July 05, 2005 02:55 EDT
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Excellent! Amazingly written as always, and I loved the finger painting scene! I know I've said it a million times, but I really love this story, and this series, and I think you have so much talent. I really enjoy reading your chapters, I look forward to them when I get online. Thanks for telling me stories I'll never forget.
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 01:02 EDT
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Gin...so damn cute! And silly, hesitating over the word 'virile' when she started all the 'name calling'? Hehe...if I ever met a guy that could do that...I'd be in trouble. LOL --- Oh, I knew Kich would nut-up over Belle sneaking out of the club. She may be stronger than the average human, but if those humans know any fighting techniques, she could be in real trouble. Kich was right to be mad...but realizing her state of dress (or undress) made him blow a fuse. He's so confidant, that it's an actual joy to see him knocked for a loop. I wonder if he'll just send her too her room, *snort* or give her teh "big brother" lecture about the "evils in the world waiting for naive little Belle"? -- Loving it! Happy 4th!!
| Title: Cheers!
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 00:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Muahaha! Go me! I finally caught up to you on your writing (150+ WPM?!?! Oh...my...God...)! I've been reading your other stories on and off starting with Purity since the beginning of last month and I'm amazed I caught up...anyway, thats not the point. I think I'll start reviewing chapters individually now too, since this one isn't finished yet =P. Anyways, to the actual review!~ Your style of writing is freaking awesome. I have never read an author before who was able to weave thoughts, dialogue, and actions so seamlessly together. I love how everything you write has purpose. To date (starting with Purity), I have only seen one major mistake in grammar spelling. It is simply superb. When I started reading this series I was impressed with how you managed Kagome and Inuyasha, but as the series went on, the way you were able to manage so many different characters and give them all individual identities was amazing. Keep this up, I can't wait to see how Kichiro's relationship with Belle plays out. Same for Gin and Cain. Keep writing, keep rockin', keep them wanting more! God bless and peace to you and your family! d('')b
| Reviewed By: Rawben... On: July 05, 2005 00:10 EDT
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yey!!! i was wondering when he would find out that she doesnt wear underware!!! ha! that's great! and how are they going to have a conversation about that????? aw man. that's just too funny. ;) great chapter! i loved it! happy independence day!!!
| Reviewed By: Gold Wings On: July 04, 2005 23:16 EDT
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Heh...Belle ain't got no panties on, Belle ain't got no paintes on, she really ain't got no panties on! Heh, heh... This chapter made me laugh. Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
| Reviewed By: kocoum On: July 04, 2005 22:48 EDT
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agh! oh my gawsh, sorry about the mistakes on the picture.. lol, i draw another one :] i love this chapter.. heeh, she goes comando everywhere? oooh chyeah, i'll send you the new cain & gin pic i drew after my cousins stop bugging me... ttfn ta ta for now
| Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon, who is once again not signed in On: July 04, 2005 20:16 EDT
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O.O Oh my. Poor Kich. Hehehe. Gin is the best. She's so innocent it's almost frustrating, but it's also cute. The fangirly side of me keeps screaming at Cain, "KISS HER ALREADY!! GET TOGETHER!! OH EMM GEE!!" Whereas the writer side of me knows that you no doubt have a very deliberate plotline that will still culminate in a way that makes my fangirly side happy. Of course, no one ever said my fangirly side was reasonable. ...Eagerly awaiting next Monday, and the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 19:51 EDT
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Ooooh.... Belle's panty secret is out. It's good that Kich came in time. I shudder at the thought if he hadn't.
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