| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 13:05 EDT
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Gee, I'm really sorry to hear about you and your family's loss, Sue. Take all the time you need, we'll still be here when you get back. :o) My thoughts and prayers are with you. God Bless. *hugz* P.S: Great chapters, as always. Thanks for posting twice in one day. It's my b-day today and it was like a present! lol
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Reviewed By: Amargo Scribe On: June 27, 2005 12:59 EDT
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This story is really taking off now. :) I love that you're going for the two romances at once. I still prefer Kichiro and Belle's, but this last chapter with Cain and Gin was very sweet. Can't wait to see the next one.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 12:56 EDT
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Response to Update: [lmao] that was interesting... Response to Authors Note: dear god Sue...take all the time you need with updating...family is more important than a fanfic...i apologize for the loss and wish that your sister in law, family, and you stay blessed and strong...
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Title: Deepest sympathy
Reviewed By: Kadaede NSI On: June 27, 2005 12:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very sorry to hear of your family's loss. I hope everyone involved will be okay. Thank you for thinking of your fans at such a time. This is just another reason why you are such a great writer and person.
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: June 27, 2005 12:23 EDT
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Oh Sue, loved it!! I think that my favorite part was "see how many marshmellows you can fit in your mouth." It takes me back to last year when a few of my girlfriends and I went on a road trip to meet up with a couple other friends at the beach... but yes, we played a fun game called Chubby Bunny where you see how many marshmellows you can fit in your mouth. End Result= lots of marshmellow goo all over the interior of my then new car.. he he he he. It was well worth it. I LOVED this chapter! Loved the whole man/woman whore issue brought up. Hopefully some guy readers read that and were re-educated and at least made to think about things, haha. Yey, it looks like they might be taking a step in the right direction--- only 098459048403284 more steps to go, lol. Great job; I enjoyed!!! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 11:51 EDT
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whoa!!! thats a lot of women...he WAS a man-whore dang...that most likely didnt impress belle...heh...it would be interesting to see how their relationship[s] will start...i cant imagine...but u always seem to make it work out! :)
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Title: Oh My Lord...more than 50?!?!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 11:33 EDT
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LMAO! That's gotta be some kinda record. My, my...Kich is quite possessive-er-protective isn't he? Flipping out because Belle wasn't there when he woke up. - Cocoa can be romantic...hell, watching wrestling on tv (ick) can be romantic when you're with the right person. But the "truth or dare" was an eye-opener. I still can't get over Kich's tally, and now he's all upset because she confessed to a measly 3. Gee, that good old double standard just keeps popping up, especially when you have a chauvinistic male around. They still have strong male/female do's and don't's in Japan so it's not too surprising coming from Kich, but Belle is a product of the U.S. and won't take that kind off guff. "What's good for the goose is good for the gander." *sigh* Now he's gone a ruined the mood...again. His 'baka' gene is showing. He hurt her - badly - and he needs to get a handle on how he deals with her. He's usually the calm one yet he blows up with the least provocation at her. Hello! Get a clue Mr. Smartypants. With all those *cough* women, how many did you yell at? Hmm? (LoL - well, there will be a little more yelling when he realizes he's going to be in technicolor for a while longer!)
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Reviewed By: Migoto On: June 27, 2005 10:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading the first three Purities and what you have posted of Purity 4. I would just like to let you know that they are wonderful. You have a real gift for writing and making your characters seem alive. I'd just like to assure you that K/I pairing is used so often cause it's so perfect, and others who think differently don't have to read your writings (code for please don't remove anything 'cause I plan on reading all of them). Okay, enough with the gushing. One question has been plaguing me since the whole cooking thing came up. Is Ryo learning to cook b/c Nezumi said they could have pups if Ryo could learn to cook b/c the pups couldn't eat take out all the time? Just something that seemed like it could have happened off the wall, and he took it seriously. Anyways, thanks for the great stories!
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Title: Chapter 31
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 10:19 EDT
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Truth or Dare. One of the most dangerous games ever created. Belle has Kich's "spot," I wonder if she's going to use it to her advantage. 'Too many marshmallows,' sure, I heard that one before. Well not exactly that but something similar.
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: June 27, 2005 10:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for answering. Great chapter Good work and happy Summer
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Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 09:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To Kichiro: Woah, Way to go Kich!... Put your foot in your mouth any further, and you'll need a proctologist to remove it. *slaps Kich in the back of the head* Kichiro no baka... To Sueric: Thanks for bringing us another wonderful chapter. I'm surprised to see that Kich is THAT much of a man-whore though. If he were human, he probably would have every STD known to man, and probably a few that arent! :P Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 09:21 EDT
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I like the belly button touching. Very cute!!!
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Reviewed By: Rhiara (not signed in) On: June 27, 2005 08:56 EDT
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Ohhh truth or dare, muahahah... I loved this chapter...I want to throttle Kiciro though. Just apologise, dagnammit! I really enjoyed the rare intimate moment between Belle and Kichiro though...and this was a neat and tidy way of Belle discovering his playboy past without enormous disasters or awkward moments. Yes yes, I like.
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Reviewed By: darksquire(not logged in) On: June 27, 2005 02:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I have been gone for the week. Those chapters were AMAZING. I laughed soooooooo much. I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 01:48 EDT
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That was hilarious. I can just imagine Kich with purple nails and highlights. I burst out laughing. Keep up the great work.
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