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Title: Chapter 28
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 22, 2005 15:29 EDT
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awwwww poor Gin!! At first her reaction to the mouse was kind of funny, but then I saw how scared she was and I felt so bad for her! Boy Ryo and Kich were SO mean! What a horrible trick to play on a child, no wonder she's afraid of rodents! Cain is so cute with her though, so comforting and patient, it's so sweet ^_^ I just love seeing how their relationship develops with each chapter, it's such a neat thing. And I liked Cain's reflection at the beginning...poor guy, that had to have been so hard. I loved him saying 'daddy loves you' when he was thinking of Belle, that was so sweet. Great chapter, Sue!
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: June 22, 2005 15:08 EDT
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Sorry that I haven't had the chance to review lately. "Real life" is horrible these days and reading your latest chapters is one of the few bright spots (thanks!). Poor Gin - I can so empathize with the rodent-phobia (I almost didn't manage to get my laundry done yesterday because there was a cricket in the laundry area - AHHHH!). There's been so much great stuff going on lately, but I just had to comment on the "Kich is gay" teasing. Where have I heard this before? ;-) LMAO
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 14:20 EDT
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Aww...she must get the rat trait from her mom...How do you do it? One minute I'm crying the next I'm laughing...I love how you can do it though!! Poor Cain, it's almost the full moon, Gin is in his arms and Belle is gone...I feel sorry for him.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 14:19 EDT
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That was really sweet. I loved that. Can't wait for more! :-D
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 13:06 EDT
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poor cain [lol] and poor gin with her rat phobia...heh but that was pretty funny for the tai-youkai of america getting rid of a little rat hah but pretty mean of gin's brothers
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(not logged in) On: June 22, 2005 13:03 EDT
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hehe awsome chapters, update soon as you can, ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 12:08 EDT
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*chuckle* Gin's...rat...a hanyou that could probably take down a lion bare-handed...afraid of a tiny, little mouse. Awww, the *snort* poor baby. You are so right, Cain is a sucker. Ryo and Kich...evil big brothers. Mine did something like that to me...with Black Widow spiders. *shudder* I think I was 4. Now I hunt them with extreme prejudice. Favorite weapon: broom.
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 09:17 EDT
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Rodents, don't like them much either. It's so nice of Cain to capture and dispose/throw away the mouse for Gin. : )
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 22, 2005 02:49 EDT
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Excellent, I love payback. Sweet, sweet revenge. You gave me warm and fuzzies...And you gotta love guys ogoling their crushes in swimsuits! That was fun to read. I'm so glad you updated, Cant wait for another one!
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Title: ROFLMAO!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 02:19 EDT
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Oh Toga! You sure topped the "beefcake" debacle...only it was Ryo that set you up, not Kich. Hmm...does that mean that Kich's revenge will happen to Ryo? Nah, that's just too twisted. *snort* Uncle Sess trying to keep a straight face and Belle's blase bombshell of, "Oh, him? He doesn't count. He's Gay." The little dvd viewing only clinched the deal. Belle got her way and is accompanying Kich to the States. Well, maybe Kich will realize that he will have endless opportunities to fix Belle's opinion of him. Gay indeed. He knows that she knows he isn't gay...but maybe...actions speak louder than words...maybe he'd be better off showing her how un-gay he is. -- On a lighter note, Cain just got flattened by the pool...and so did his youkai; `Gin . . . wet . . . Cain?' When an inner 'voice' becomes speechless or incoherent, you know trouble's brewing! LOL
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 01:30 EDT
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Oh this should be VERY interesting....I hope it spices up when Kich and Belle go to America. I'm so going to love these next chapters!!!!
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Reviewed By: TenshiKaika On: June 22, 2005 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gin's such a doll...I love her. She's so innocent and naive. And yet...really cool. I love it when she says those funny things to Cain. Like when she told him to do her later. LOL I had this funny vision where she was wondering what "Voulez-vous coucher avec moi" in the song ment and Cain told her... hmm... this sounded so much more funnier when I was listening to the song...now it sounds stupid... oh well! Love the story!
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 23:36 EDT
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Also that means that sesshomaru knows how he feels towards gin, toga knows how Kichiro feels towards Belle, and Kagome knows how Kich and Belle feel towards eachother..? wow, gives a whole new meaning to 'confusing' lol not really. Wow this review is strange isnt it? Well keep up da good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL Cain scooted farther away from Kichiro after Belle said he was gay, i couldnt stop laughing! Love that chapter, add a new 1 soon plz ^__^ great way of making Kich study Belles rack lol. But i dont understand 1 thing..why are Cain's crests so..AMAZING? i dont understand..?_? oh well, update soon plz
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Title: Chapter 27
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 21, 2005 22:15 EDT
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OMG that chapter rocked! Kich's line was one of the best lines in the story, that was so funny! Heh, I couldn't stop laughing! I love that Sesshoumaru can see through Cain so easily and knows that something is up between Cain and Gin. And poor Cain...he's so doomed with Gin in her bathing suit! And just that whole part with Kich and Belle and the bathing suit and everything was so perfect. Bad Kich! heh. LOL that's so funny that Toga showed the tape to everyone...and Sesshoumaru's reaction to Belle saying Kich was gay was just perfect. That whole scene was so funny. I can't wait to see what happens when they go to America. Great chapter!
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