| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 11:51 EDT
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I suppose Kich deserved that "Dr. Gaylord" from Belle considering how nasty he was being. Jet lagged and worn out doesn't quite excuse his behavior. He was very nice and calm while talking to Kelly, and I don't think it was the coffee kicking in. He's just hard-wired to vent/snap at Belle, its almost like a bad habit. His first responce is antagonistic. Its only when he thinks first and opens the discussion that he doesn't seem like he's trying to verbally rip her apart. Admittedly, Belle gives as good as she gets, but how much is retaliation and how much is just self-defence? These two have butting heads since day one and taking too much satisfaction in each mark made on the other, breeding resentment. I hope they can learn to stop, its not healthy. - Great Chapter.
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: June 23, 2005 11:48 EDT
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thanks for the great chapters
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 11:47 EDT
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that must be really hard on belle...if that happened to my best friend i would feel the same as well...dang sue you are absolutely wonderful at the emotions of your characters...i still cant imagine how belle and kich will become mates considering how they "hate" each other and i wonder what the outcome of kelly's operation will be...i LuV tHiS sToRy
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 09:07 EDT
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I love Belle. I feel sad that she's so sad. *hugs Belle*
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: June 23, 2005 06:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. Excellent. Butifully constucted. It just amazes me how well you can do this. Ive just now caught up to what I hopefully believe is your latest chapter.(my computers actin funny) The story is great and I will continue to be a dedicated fan. Just wanted to tel ya I may not be reviewing for some time. Ya see haveta move and no where to go means no internet service, which means no fan fiction reading or reviewing. Life sure does have its sore spots huh? Anyways, great story and keep posting.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 23, 2005 04:12 EDT
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Thank you so much for updating with such a lovely chapter! It was odd, I was laughing at the rat thing at first, then I felt bad for Gin. But really, the rat thing was really funny. I liked the separation anxiety on Cain's part, very sweet. I hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 04:09 EDT
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Aaaah, I got so behind!!! Ohhhhhh, I love this story so much. I think Gin may be replacing Nezumi as my favorite of your OCs. She and Cain are so cute. Aww. Look what you've done, you've turned me into a fangirl! Hahaha. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Amargo Scribe On: June 23, 2005 01:33 EDT
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I must say, the idea of Kichiro and Belle is growing on me. I can't wait to see the two of them stuck together, and in Belle's home turf, no less! That, and I'm really itching to see Cain and Inuyasha duke it out. Ah well, I guess this isn't really a review. Keep it up! :) Great as always!
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Reviewed By: Rhiara (not signed in) On: June 23, 2005 00:56 EDT
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Awwwww they're so cute! I cracked up at the scene where Toga showed the others the footage of Kichiro and Ryomaru feeling each other up (ahem) And Gin is afraid of..... mice? She's a dog demon! hahaha very nice.
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 22:39 EDT
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Ha! that was great! The mental image you gave of Gin, trembling with fear over an itty bitty mouse. Good for Cain, he never once laughed out loud! Guess he's learning too! That was fabulous! Sheer pleasure read tonight! I know I've said it before, but, I have to say it again. Thank you. Thank you for your little world that you create for those of us stuck in ours. Thank you for sharing it with us! I'm ever grateful that you share your talent.
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Reviewed By: CheshireAngel (NSI) On: June 22, 2005 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter, it's wonderful. Keep up the good writings!
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Reviewed By: Black_rose28 not signed on On: June 22, 2005 22:01 EDT
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Another great chapter hehe ^_^ Gin..s afraid of rats>>? Mean Ryo!!! Bad Ryo, u kno u should have Nezumi make prayer beads so that Nezumi can 'sit' him. Lol that would b funny, anyway wonderful job with the chapter ^_^
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Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: June 22, 2005 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
she is afraid of mice? i can't wait till cain admits he really likes gin and i was wondering which couple do you like writing about the most the cain/gin or the kich/belle realation. anyway great story so far i think this might be the longest purity story.
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Title: About my last review...
Reviewed By: Jesachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 18:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's totally fine!!! I thought I would ask! No big deal! HOWEVER... as for my questions... do you think that you could email the answers to me? I promise not to reveal anything! :P I don't mean to bug... I'm just curious, that's all! My email is bradhadair89@yahoo.com or tigresa_diablo@yahoo.com... let me know if I'm bugging you! I hate being a nuisance! Anyway... super story! I still admire your creativity!
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Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 17:57 EDT
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'Big-big-big-rat-bi-i-ig-Cain!' That was great! So Cain "saves" Gin from the big rat, I can't wait to see what happens with Kich and Belle. Hopefully he'll save her from an attacker, anything but a big rat. Good chapter. Keep em coming.
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