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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 23:25 EDT
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OMG! That is just fabulous! Not only did Cain get to see Gin kickin some brotherly butt, Kich and Ryo are just as apt to get picked up by the scruff of the neck and treated like naughty dogs! He tweaked Cain's nipple???? Hahahaha! That was fabulous! I loved it! I am enjoying this story so much! Thank you for continueing to share this! Thank you so much!
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Reviewed By: benlzy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 21:17 EDT
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Wow, Cain muz be hot 2 attract that much attention... Haha... Will Cain and Inuyasha be fighting soon? That would be 1 hell of a match. Wonderful writing from u, as usual. Totally bringing out and capturing the souls of the readers. Did Tokijin really got destroyed in the manga? I haven come across it yet, which book is it in?
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: June 17, 2005 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I had trouble typing this because I was still laughing about the "tournament." It was hilarious! I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks Sueric! Cynbad146
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Title: Purple Nurples... A 'Purity' Staple!
Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 19:06 EDT
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Oh, where do I start? That chapter was so... wonderful! Cain joins the tournament... in time to see Gin kick Kichiro's ass. Everyone with two X chromosomes is veeeeery appreciative of Cain's stripes... crests... and, my favorite term for them courtesy of Kagura, "oh my." I loved Cain's confusion over Yukitora. And, of course, the ever-priceless pantsing of (a commando!) Kichiro. I love it! Gin knew what was coming and covered her eyes. I can't believe Yukitora actually held on to Ryomaru through all that! And of course, the twins just haaaaad to go and give the North American tai-youkai a purple nurple! I hope they get what's coming to them! Sue, once again, I so love you in all your authorness! XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou (P.S. I found a couple of songs that fit Gin perfectly: "Right To Be Wrong" and "Security" by Joss Stone.)
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Reviewed By: Simply a Lady (NSI) On: June 17, 2005 15:41 EDT
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Hee hee heee heee Just sits in her chair laughing! Yep this is definitely one of my favorites!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 15:24 EDT
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I just knew this tournament would be good! Well, well, well....looks like Belle just got flashed. Poor Gin, now Cain knows what she lives with.
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Title: Chapter 25
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 17, 2005 14:57 EDT
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this is such a great chapter! From start to finish, it had me laughing so many times! I love the reference to the Pillsbury Dough Boy and Kich's outtie. Heh, and go Gin! She totally kicked Kich's butt, he so had that coming. LOL and I love all of the girls' reactions to Cain's stripes! That was so great, and then Yasha's reaction to Kagome was just classic. LOL and Belle got to see Kich...really see him (as did everyone else). And I love how you incorporated Mel's ecchi pants into this! That was so awesome, yay for ecchi pants!!! Great chapter Sue!
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Reviewed By: ll kocoum ll [nsi] On: June 17, 2005 14:35 EDT
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LMAO dear god, this story cracks me up so much. i was laughing so hard i started to choke. :] yay! i loved the chapter and i love the story! i'm hoping there's a sparring between cain n Inu Yasha
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Title: Purity 4
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH.....MY.....GOD....Ryo gave Cain a titty twister, I was eating my breakfast when my stunned eyes read that, and I almost choked to death trying to laugh, chew, breath, and stop swallowing down the wrong throat. This story keeps getting better, and better. Sueric, you're a genius. Your mind is a treasure, don't ever lose it. Titty twister, Oh god, what will you think of next.
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou (it keeps kicking me off!!!) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 21:15 EDT
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Oh, Sue! When Belle snuggled into the Mokomoko-sama, I just wanted to cry! I got a little misty. And I was just waiting for Cain to touch Gin's ears! That was fun! I think Kagome is going to do some meddling! Yay! The twins are almost thirty and they still give each other purple nurples? I love them! And you just gotta love the idea of Sesshomaru being dragged down by his grandpups! I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Gin kicks Kich's heinie! XOXO!!! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 20:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! Hehehehe, Inuyasha almost passed out when Belle said that Cain didn't teach her self-defense. For a hanyou who opened a school that teaches self-defense, it must have been sacrilage(sp?) for him to hear that. I hope that Cain doesn't blow a gasket if Belle decides to learn how to fight. At least that way, she can keep Kich in line. :)
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 17:07 EDT
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OMG i loved it! So, Kagome knows who Kich's girl is. I wonder if she will have anything to do with them making up. I hope Gin makes him pay for treating Belle like that in the tournament. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Megan55 On: June 16, 2005 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Oi, what's Grabby doing here?" "She's grabby, that one." OMG Sue, you have no idea how much that cracks me up. I laugh every time. I love it how Ryo calls her Grabby Wench. He just cant let go of it, can he? Does he even know her name, or is it just 'Grabby'? Lol! Please, more grabbing!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 15:30 EDT
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Toga needs to calm down....I hope he didn't try to carry her purse during the first two pregnancies, but something tells me that if you had written a Purity off of that he would have...I hope Gin kicks someone's ass the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: June 16, 2005 15:04 EDT
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hey sorry i haven't reviewd this past week. i wanted to say that the past chapters have been awesome. infact the whole Purity series have been amazing. you have been doing an excelent job!!!! :) keep up the good work!
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