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Title: Chapters 23 & 24
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 16, 2005 14:55 EDT
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Ah, sorry I missed reviewing yesterday! This will be for the last two chapters since I didn't review yesterday's chapter. Chapter 23, heh I liked the little hug Cain and Gin had at the beginning, that was so cute! and omg...Gin telling Cain she'll do anything and get down on her knees and beg...oh that was too funny! And then Belle's comment after, lolol! Heh, I just love it when Cain is flustered. I loved Kagome's talk with Kich, she's such a good mother! And I love that she told him to try to focus on making Belle smile :) In 24, I love how Kagome caught on to who Belle is by her age, very clever! haha, Sierra's line about neutering Toga was just awesome! lol! heh, I also liked yasha's reaction to smelling Cain in his house. Great chapter, this tournament sounds very very interesting!
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Reviewed By: RainAndHell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, ok, i understand, i just hope i didnt affend you in any way, because it would suck if you got rid of your stories on this site like at animespiral.com. i liked this chapter, do you plan to write anymore purity stories after this one? or is this going to be the last? great chapter, your stories seem to get better and better,great job! 10000/10
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Reviewed By: Gold Wings On: June 16, 2005 14:25 EDT
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Very nice... I have a few questions: Who did Aiko marry?; How do you pronounce Kichiro's name?; And how often do you update this story? Thanks!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 14:24 EDT
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Wonderfully written my dear. I can't wait to see if Inuyasha decideds to teach her how to fight or not. Imagine the argument that would produce between two over protective fathers. ;)
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Title: geez....
Reviewed By: hanyouwings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 14:06 EDT
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I don't get it...do people go out of their way to piss you off? I mean seriously. I've never heard of anyone putting up with as much crap as you do. Hhmmmmm... in my opinion you have to be one hell of a writer to attract so much attention, but that's me. Anyway, I love the new chappies! I can't wait until Belle and Kich have their much needed talk!!! I hope they kiss and make up (hides behind tree to see smoochie action ^_^)! Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: Amargo Scribe On: June 16, 2005 14:02 EDT
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As you might have been able to tell from my review, chapter 21 left me somewhat dubious, as I just couldn't sympathize with Kichiro any longer, he was being too much of an ass. But now I'm hooked all over again! Kichiro has to pull himself out of this hole he's digging, but I'm enjoying watching it unfold :) Hope to see Gin beat the tar out of him!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 00:12 EDT
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Oh! I can't wait until tomorrow! This upcoming "tournament" could prove to be interesting on so many levels. It's a shame Cain ain't comin to watch his "little girl" beat the pants off all the boys! I'm so excited for the next chapter! Poor Cain... once again, Gin with her naivity left him with his jaw down! LOL! Wlfhund
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 23:56 EDT
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I just love Kagome. She had more than her share of common sense and understanding when she first met InuYasha at only 15 years old. Now that she's a wife and mother of many years, her insight and gentle wisdom has only grown. Just the balm for Kichiro's stinging conscience. I only hope that he finds a way to mend what he broke. - Jeeze! When Gin gets all squeely and excited, I can't help laughing. She's just a ray of sunshine that floods her surroundings with light. I think Cain needs some dark sunglasses and sunblock spf 5000 to resist her unique warmth. LoL - I wonder if Cain's promise to join his dead wife was to her...or to himself? He's managed to live this long without her. Sad and lonely its true, but he loves his daughter and he does find enjoyment in life. Now, with a bouncing and giggling Cake Fairy taking over his thoughts, maybe he'll rethink the reasons behind his promise. *crossing fingers*
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Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: June 15, 2005 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait till next chapter oh and with out cain gin would be a lost little puppy
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sweet to see Kagome and Kich talking. Kagome has always been good at giving advice and I think Kich is going to try to make it up to Belle. All the best to him. Great chapter that I enjoyed very much.
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Title: ROFLMAO
Reviewed By: chichiwvu-nsi On: June 15, 2005 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"Did she get on her knees and thank you?" ohhhh sue.. too much! i loved it! It's so great, cause I know people who were like that, and they never know the damage they cause. Hell, i used to be like that, but now i know when i say something bad, cause i laugh my ass off!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 17:50 EDT
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Well, Kagome, you're about to meet her....this should be interesting!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: June 15, 2005 17:05 EDT
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so, maybe this is going a little ahead of myself but can't inu smell scents of people on people (ie cain's scent on Gin since she practically is running there?) ...hmm. i love the teasing with this 'fight' between cain and inu...funny that Cain wants to rip into Yash as much as Yash WILL him (when he gets downwind of this all). very good. :-) i feel like i'm egging on a fight here. OI. LOL. great story, as always. love the breif 'begging on the knees' dialogue between gin, Cain and Belle. very cute. :-)
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Reviewed By: Darksquire(not logged in) On: June 15, 2005 15:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious! "You used the charm the pants off women all the time... literally." Hahahahahahahahahaha! I can't stop laughing! Oh that is too brilliant! I can't wait till Kich realizes Belle is coming along! Oh this will be priceless!
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: June 15, 2005 15:03 EDT
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hehehehehe! Gin's not so innocent sounding to a dirty mind rhetoric strikes again! Loves it! Great chapter! te he he. I love that softer side of Kich and the allusions of back when he was younger, ah, sigh. Looks like Mama and Papa will get to see Kich in action as he deals with Belle. yey! I was hoping that Cain would accept an invite as well but hey, maybe you have something planned for us that we do not yet know of. ;) Great job; I cannot wait for more! --Aitu
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