| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Title: this is a great fanfic
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 14:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fell in love with how you protrayed the characters. this is great. I really enjoy your story. I feel as though its on tv or im actually able to see whats goin on not everyone can write as well as you.
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Reviewed By: la623 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 22:24 PST
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I LOVED THIS! So happy to see an update or 2! :) This was great! I had a feeling that the tetsudai was Miroku! LOL...was wondering how he was gonna find a way in the story...can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Rhiaonna_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 14:14 PST
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This story is simply amazing, I'm so glad I found it. I was wondering when exactly you would get around to Miroku, does that mean that shippo's gonna show up too? Anyway I love it and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 09:21 PST
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Great chapter! It's nice to see Inuyasha accepting his feelings for Kagome, even if it's subconciously. Kagome was quite the champion, eh? LOL I sorta guessed it was Miroku as soon as it came up - I'm guessing that his 'crime' was something perverted, hehe. I can't wait to see what's going to happen! Not only for Inuyasha and Kagome's real reunion, but to see what happens when Sango meets Inuyasha and Miroku. And I'm beginning to wonder how you'll make Inuyasha and Miroku friends, if at all... Well, Happy Holidays and good luck with your writing!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 16:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. And what a terrible view of what Kagome and Inuyasha are up against. The prejudices against hanyous are just ridiculous. And it always astonishes me when bigots act so surprised when people call them on their bigotry (like Eri). Or are so self righteous about their racism ( like the cops). What an ugly scene....and you depicted it very well. On a lighter note, Inuyasha was so sweet in this chapter in his concern for Kagome. But it gets all sad again when you look at the emotional torture he went through. He blamed himself for all the trouble, even though he had done NOTHING to warrant the terrible hatred he was subjected to. They are both going to need spines of steel to deal with what they are going to face if they get together. And that seems all but inevitable after the display they both put on this chapter, lol. As for Sango...I can't wait 'til she meets Miroku! I can't wait to read it.
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 14:23 PST
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haha, I can't wait to see Miroku. I'm not sure that being sent to work at the shrine would be a punishment for him.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 03:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sexual harassment maybe??? I am SO happy right now (I JUST passed a test that I needed to get 80 percent to pass and if I had failed I would of had to pay another $80 Australian to sit it again...(I will be a registered cabler soon!!! (Aus is the ONLY country who has "licences" for telecomunications wiring.)) GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!! Sango is going to have so much fun... (I don't know if I mean that in a "dark" way or a "good" way.....
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 02:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* trust Miroku to be in a Bacana Shrine XD i cant wait to see how Inuyasha and Sango meet ^___^ well more like if Miroku is going to behave himself XD anyways im still loving the story ^___^ loves lots until next time ^__^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 00:02 PST
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i am thinking that if there was a biologic incompatibility they wouldn't be able to procreate, hanyou would not exist. ♣ one would think that there would be some sort of precedence for the 'shoot first and ask questions later' attitude displayed by the police force. is it just unfounded hatred or had there been incidences of uncontrolled hanyou violence and if so, what were the reasons behind the violent reaction? ♠ one could understand the reasoning behind his destruction of the trees. ♦ as always eloquently executed. ♥ enraptured, ginny
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 15:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to have to keep this quick because I have a lot of schoolwork to get done but I would like to say is that I liked this chapter a lot. I like how Inuyasha didn't push Kagome away and I think the incidents in this chapter and Kagome's responses to them will serve to bind Kagome and Inuyasha together even tighter than they were before. I do hope though that Inuyasha doesn't get in too much trouble at the shrine. And I was wondering if and when Miroku was going to enter in to the story. I look forward to what will probably be a humorous introduction to everyones favorite hentai. I do wonder what crime he committed that got him in the position he is in. Well I shall find out next time. And who knows, maybe some other familiar faces will show up. (Well you know but that isn't the point! I still think Sesshomaru is going to show up on that Middle Court for after all, he is in Cannon an immensely powerful youkai which has translated into fannon as the Lord of the West. But that is just my theory.) Anyway, now that this not so short review is done, I must be going. Good luck with everything and I hope you are feeling well. If only your health was as great as your story, then you would never be sick again! Your friend and fan, Zach
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Reviewed By: Isa91 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 12:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!! OMG I'm so excited!!! Kagome told those dumb cops off!! And Miroku is coming!!! WOOHOO!!!!! You must continue to write, I adore your story, and can't wait for the next chapter!! Luv!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 10:56 PST
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hahahah Miroku is making an appearance now? And poor Inuyasha and Kagome, it seems really hopeless for them. But their strong so I bet you have something planned for them, right? I really like this story and I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 09:48 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... at least inuyasha & kagome spent some time together despite the trouble they encountered... seems that miroku will make his appearance soon... and sango will be going with kagome to the shrine... wonder what'll happen... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 09:35 PST
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Miroku! Can't wait to see how he and Sango interact. I'm super glad that Inuyasha and Kagome faced all that negativity rather well. yay for trust! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Qui (too lazy to sing in) On: October 25, 2008 22:13 PDT
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i wasn't too impressed with sango this chapter. i didnt hear her mention anything about faults in humans. everything was directed to hanyou and youkai. last time i check humans are pretty harmful, dangerous, stupid, and unstable too.
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