| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
| Pages (38): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 05:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
i really liked this chapter. you kept us informed of both the main characters. the day-to-day quality helped to show how totally connected they are to each other, even if they are not together. i loved the present kagome sent.
|
Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 03:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I love the plot of your story; Kagome's drive to help hanyou is truly admirable, even though it's so awful that nobody saw the need to do anything long before now. But, that's how most good and necessary things start. A wrong has been noticed by many long before but left unchallenged.....until one day somebody finally gets off their duff and actually DOES something about it. She has her work cut out for her......but she has an adorable reason why. Your characterization of Inuyasha is wonderful. He can be so abrasive.....but so SWEET as well. And you characerization of Kagome is terrific as well. Great job, and I can't wait to read more whenever you can post. These updates are always such a TREAT.
|
Title: What Creativity!
Reviewed By: Wowzer313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 02:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't remember whether or not I've reviewed this piece or not--I truly can't remember. But either way, I wanted to let you know what a stellar piece I think you have here! Honestly, it's so fresh and original. I think one of the main reasons I enjoy it so much is that it is truly thought out and planned down to the tiniest detail. I love the fact that not only is it a piece that entertains, but it informs as well, and I love the incorporation of law and real science (perhaps that is because I am a nerd...). Your characterization is impeccable. And in this last chapter--I truly enjoyed Sango. I think she's going to end up being quite an important part of the story, and I love the role she's played so far. Congratulations on a truly amazing and well-thought out story. Thank you for sharing! ~Wowzer313
|
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 00:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh you even brought in Sango... when will we be getting the rest of the gang? Another great chapter!!!
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 00:50 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that kagome is getting busy on her mission to help hanyou... nice that sango has come into the story... wonder when miroku will come in... nice and sweet of kagome to give inuyasha the christmas gifts... update when you can... please and thank you...
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 03:22 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... glad that kagome & inuyasha are getting along fine again... update when you can... please and thank you...
|
Reviewed By: MorphinexRomance [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 23:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! Hmmm but no lemons or citrus in the last couple of chapters. That makes me sad.
|
Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 13:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could, I would have rated everything above a 10! Such a great story, I couldn't even fathom I would like it so much. I like that you turned what I thought was a subplot into the main point with the whole hanyou thing. I can't wait for the next update... please don't make it too far from now because I really can't get enough of this story!
|
Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 03:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
i was so glad to see that you had posted an up date. i'm glad that they came to some type of compromise, but 5 years? you will make he see the absurdity of waiting that long, won't you? i'm frustrated, already. thank you for a great chapter
|
Reviewed By: blackr0s3(logged out) On: June 17, 2008 03:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyable[: I liked it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
|
Title: mickiressa
Reviewed By: mickiressa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 21:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't remember if I reviewed before or not but this story is absolutely amazing you are my inspiration to continue to write my own InuYasha fanfic. I just love how you seem to be inside the characters. You're a great writer and I really love this story. This chapter was really funny I couldn't help laughing at InuYasha for being jealous and Kagome for seeing Kagome as her brother. (It has to be gross having sex with someone who reminds you of your brother!) Anyway keep writing and I'll wait for the next chapter.
|
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 03:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im still here ^_____^ had to go over the last chapter to get me thinking again :P but hmmmm their time is nearly up?? T-T
|
Reviewed By: Ashayuni15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 14:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! I reviewed your last chapter, a long time aho....in what, March? Ah well, when I said "effing", I put the word "fabulous" after it in italics. and it didn't turn up. So that's what happened there... Anyways. I love this story so nad! I was so scared when Inuyasha bumped into Kouga, and hell, it was funny. Oh and Ryu! He is so cute, lol. How old is Ryu anyway? I always wondered... All of that crap under the bed? Yea, that was scary. Lol. I have been dying fpr Kagome to find the letters, and hey! She did. I think she came to the wrong conclusion. The only reason Inuyasha won't kiss her is because he doesn't want to lead her on...and he believes she will grow out of him, nut she would never say because shes too nice and doesn't to hurt her feelings. I mean his. Arg...I gots tangled. Its sad, but he's right. Kagome WOULDN'T say anything if she got tierd of him. Not that she ever will. I wonder though...If Inuyasha got so mad over Kouga, what would he do if some guy back home tried to rape her? He'd have to come out of his room for that one. And Im betting Yami would get pissed too. Is Kagome going to bring the blood back to her professor? Okay sorry this is so long, I could type u a whole email on your story... Update ASAP please!
|
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 23:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
I was so surprised! What a great little present. Don't worry about not updating - I recently got burned out from writing and had to take a hiatus. Bu tmy fans were really understanding, as I'm sure yours are. This was a great chapter; poor Kagome, always worried about Inuyasha, and poor Inuyasha, always second guessing Kagome. But, at least the Kouga-Inuyasha jealousy thing came out! That was fun. I'm a little worried about what will happen when Kagome has to leave, but that's up to you. I'm sure we'll love whatever ending you've chosen. Happy writing!
|
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 22:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She sighed in disgust. It was always so difficult to understand the minds of the kamis so it was best to just ignore it all together unless a blatant sign came up. ***Should be kami's*** Brother... oh god it so funny!!!
|
| Pages (38): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
