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Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 20:41 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the Sept. 2009 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/sept2009.html Authors, please retrieve your awards here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20Sept09 / First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2009art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Inuyashaloverr ^.~ Moderator Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2009 20:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS AWSOME I LOVE IT!!! YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER!!!!!Anyways I was reading this on Adultfanfiction at first but i couldn't leave a review so i checked on here.PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 08:44 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: la623 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 00:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I loved this so much! I had to read 21-24...didn't realize how much I'd missed...but this chapter was so good. i was so happy when the little boy defended them! YAY! And the kisses! Oh wow...can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 21:47 PDT
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WOW...I finally caught up and I am so happy that I found this story...well done...love the plot line and i was ecstatic when inuyasha finally admitted his feelings here in this chapter...big HURRAH!!! Hope your health is better and that everything is going well and I cant wait for the next update...keep it up XD
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Title: Owesome
Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 20:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW... This chapter took my breath away. It's been a while since I've been following this story and I think it is fantastic. At first I bad could wait for a new chapter, was an original idea and very well writing. I really like your style. I'm sorry to say that in the middle of the story I lost interest ... it have became very aganst and gloomy ... moreover, Inuyasha refused to live with Kagome and then came the proposal to wait for 5 years ... 5 YEARS!!! Too much! I thought it was too much drama. However, this chapter made me reread the whole story. Finally we're getting somewhere. I'm happy! Although you do not know me, I'd like to give a suggestion. Don't you think it's time for Kagome and Inuyasha being together? Really together? Have not come the time when Inuyasha at least fight to free yourself from the temple and start a life with Kagome. I'm sure that this new life will not be easy and you will have lots to write about the difficulties of a Hanyou in a society so prejudiced. Inuyasha will have to learn to deal with the family of Kagome, accept new friends .. there are so many obstacles. You have already written more than 350 pages, do you not think it's time to go up a step? Hope you don't get me wrong and get mad with my suggestions. Your story is very interesting, one of the best I've ever read and one of the few I have reread. Your style full of details in the description in each chapter holds me pluged in. Yesterday I had a terrible day and the only good thing was to read your story and sleep with the soul relieved. You and your story made all the difference for me. Please do not leave this story without an end. Congratulations and thank you.
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 18:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Inuyasha has finally admitted it, that he loves Kagome. The question now is where do they go from here? They both know the other loves them but how do they move on with their lives together? Does Inuyasha have the courage to leave the shrine and move in with Kagome? Would he even be able to or would the confinement to Kagome's home and lack of things to do prevent him from enjoying his freedom. The problem for Inuyasha is that no matter what he does, right now he will be confined to an area and wouldn't be able to leave for his own safety. The question is, can Kagome change that, would Inuyasha be willing to wait until Kagome can change the laws, and where would he wait? Actually there are more questions that I have but I simply am running out of energy to type. Thank you for writing this marvelous story that not only entertains but provokes so many questions from the reader over where the story will go next. Thanks for updating and I hope you are having a wonderful fall. Sincerely, Zach
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: TiffanyM [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2009 21:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it completely.... 'nuff said this time (only because I'm super tired and running a bit short on time lol) I actually started reading this on ff.net then moved on to another site, and then this one.... i don't really know why lol
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 (not signed in) On: September 10, 2009 13:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my freaking god. they kissed. they kissed. they kissed they kissed they kissed!! i don't think you understand how happy i am! and how my insides are dancing, and i'm actually singing! lol you're a fabulous writer, and i really was able to feel hatred everytime you wrote about the racism he is victim to. oh wow, i love this story so much, and Kagome and Inuyasha really deserve each other. this is my favorite chapter yet! update soon, and fabulous job!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2009 11:11 PDT
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Another wonderful chapter! So glad Inu got to have (for the most part)a nice day!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2009 10:47 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that they had an interesting outing... there was trouble at first but looks like it turned out good in the end... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2009 05:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, an update! Ooh I loved this chapter, I'm a totally sucker for the 'damsel in distress' situation :P It was brilliant how Miroku and Kouga charged in to help, and the little boy's speech was gold- it just shows the purity of children, in this case, not fully tainted by society's hatred of hanyou. And the kiss scene was perfect! Goodness knows poor Kagome has had to wait long enough! Thanks for the update, look forward to your next chappy ^^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2009 04:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that's why a lot of people comment on the end or beginning of the story. FANTASTIC! BRILLIANT! (maybe a side story the last part with Kouga???? if you cant fit in anywhere..)
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2009 13:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. Wow. Wowoowwowowow. That's all I can realy say ^^
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 20:02 PDT
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I have to say this story is really upsetting me (this is a compliment)as I hate to see Inu getting hurt, but it is so well written,I will have to stick with it to the end! Please end up making their world a better place for Hanyou!!
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