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Reviewed By: Isa91 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 12:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!! OMG I'm so excited!!! Kagome told those dumb cops off!! And Miroku is coming!!! WOOHOO!!!!! You must continue to write, I adore your story, and can't wait for the next chapter!! Luv!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 10:56 PST
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hahahah Miroku is making an appearance now? And poor Inuyasha and Kagome, it seems really hopeless for them. But their strong so I bet you have something planned for them, right? I really like this story and I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 09:48 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... at least inuyasha & kagome spent some time together despite the trouble they encountered... seems that miroku will make his appearance soon... and sango will be going with kagome to the shrine... wonder what'll happen... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 09:35 PST
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Miroku! Can't wait to see how he and Sango interact. I'm super glad that Inuyasha and Kagome faced all that negativity rather well. yay for trust! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Qui (too lazy to sing in) On: October 25, 2008 22:13 PDT
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i wasn't too impressed with sango this chapter. i didnt hear her mention anything about faults in humans. everything was directed to hanyou and youkai. last time i check humans are pretty harmful, dangerous, stupid, and unstable too.
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Title: mickiressa
Reviewed By: mickiressa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 21:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't remember the last time I reviewed but I'm sure I told you this was an awesome story and it still is. You have encouraged me to write the rest of a chapter I've ben working on. ANyway this is a really great story and I love where you're going with it. It puts me in the mind of the early 1990's when Afican Americans had to fight for their rights but in your case its a little different since they're not human. Okay getting off track continue to write and I'll continue to read.
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 00:08 PDT
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Whew! Law and Medicine are two subjects I absolutely LOATHE, so this was a hard chapter for me to digest. Your writing was good, and the chapter itself was excellent - I just don't have what it takes to digest this kind of stuff. Myself, I have an AU fic where Kagome is in Med school, and when I started the research, my head was spinning and I saw stars. Congratulations on your ability to make sense of it all! As for the chapter itself, I really enjoyed Kagome meeting Jinenji. Will Shiori ever make it into the story as well??? I also enjoyed the interaction between Houjou and Kagome - although it would be funnier if he were still oblivious. Excellent job, and I hope your health problems lessen, if not go away completely. Until the next chapter, adeiu!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. The Middle Court sounds so promising. It may be just what Kagome needs....but that is FAR away. She still has the awesome job of convincing a certain stubborn, gorgeous hanyou that he's worth all the trouble. I can't wait to see how this plays out. And good luck with your medical problems by the way. I didn't know about that, so I appreciate your updating even more.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 11:29 PDT
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you described hojo's mother's preparation of herbal formulas as homeopathic. i think you meant a holistic approach including naturopathy massage etc. these alternative forms of medicine would be all encompassed in a term like holistic or natural.♣ the allopathic as opposed to the homeopathic-- herbal remedies are allopathic, treating the symptoms directly therefore possibly indirectly treating the underlying cause. homeopathic works on a 'law of similars' in which case, substances that cause the same symptoms in a healthy person are diluted to a point that only minute traces of the original substance remains is given to a patient to trigger a healing response. a muscle test is used to determine the best choice of remedy and the strength (less is more-- a 'stronger' dosage would be one that has been diluted more). a muscle test would be either a physical strength test while holding a specific remedy or electrochemically using a precision ohmmeter to measure response to choose the best remedy.♣ sorry, don't mean to get carried away and most people wouldn't know the difference. wonderful story, one always hopes for the best. you have come up with so many valid points, obstacles, and arguments for their case. for some reason i was remembering the case in 'star trek ng' where they were fighting for data's civil rights and to acknowledge his sentience. i got a giggle out the comparison. ♥ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 23:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo wow... Houjo is sooo much better in this... lol.. im very sure that Kagome will get the hanyous rights ^___^
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Title: Yay! An update!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 20:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder if Inuyasha's blood in Dr. Hirohito's vile will turn human during the new moon, and if Dr. Hirohito is even aware that hanyou turn mortal from time to time. If it was previously mentioned that he was aware of this forgive me...but it has been a while since the last update and I didn't bother to refresh my memory 100%. That being said, please no worries regarding the delay of your updates, I would much rather have them late than not at all! *smiles*
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty (at hell aka school) On: October 15, 2008 19:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE This chapter was so great!!!!! I wonder who is on the council and what their opinions of Hanyous are and If they have ever considered having a hanyou (or more) to make up the Midle Court an odd number...
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 08:24 PDT
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Thank you for this wonderful update! I see a lot more going on with Kagome. She's getting a real eye full of what she's getting herself into. Though I'm rather surprised that she confided in Sango and Houjo. Hope that she knows what she's doing and who her friends are. With the Dr's research, I'm getting more and more curious as to how this will all fit together. I really enjoy this story and look forward to more of it in the future. Please take your time with updates, get to feeling better.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 06:34 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome has been busy... nice talk with sango... interesting one with hojo... and nice that kagome has been teaching as well... what's next for kagome... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: dirtydogs57 On: October 05, 2008 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I just read through this in two nights and I am loving it. ^_^ You created such angst and emotion between the two...I can't wait to read more!
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