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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 12:56 PST
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OH and heres my email. I want to be on the list. Prchica4256@aol.com
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 12:55 PST
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Hey Im review 301. So close to that 300. lol Wow. What a chapter! SO much drama and action going on. And poor Inuyasha still getting his treatment. Yet I think also inthis chapter since Kagome found not one but TWO hanyou her perspective of the whole thing is changing. And she is starting to understanding the whole dilemna more and more. And also that there might even be more people with her views or an extent of them out there that dont like what their doing. BUt cant do any thing until its changed. :sigh: Well an awesome chapter once again. And I telling you by them time you finish this fic your gonna be rolling inthe awards.
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Reviewed By: mic_check1212 On: November 11, 2007 00:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for updating!!! wow, its so angsty with inuyasha trying to deny any possible feelings for kagome, i hope that he will have some sort of breakthrough in the future! looking forward to the next chapter!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [nsi] On: November 10, 2007 17:09 PST
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Whaaaaiii awww cutie Josef!! It's like a mini Inu
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Reviewed By: Machiavellian_Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 15:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautiful. I would go so far as to wonder if the anti-racism thing is the message... ^___________^ i absolutely adore this, dearest. Your writing is wonderfully articualte and i love the new character additions and the not-having-the-hanyou-boy-die-alone bit. that ment something. you've the character's behaviors down pat. i love how everyone acts! the pervert i am, you write great lemons ^____~ but the tiny, sentimental parts and what make this amazing. i really liked your style, and this is damn creative, i liked it, specally towards the end, even if it got a little monotonous in the middle...but PLEASE UPDATE!! me encanta!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 10:53 PST
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I like the original boar characters they certainly aren't a bore! (sorry, i like puns) So often original characters aren't interesting. oh & ty for the update
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Reviewed By: Qui :] (i'm too lazy to log in) On: November 10, 2007 07:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is so so so so so sadd :[ this is such a good story. i love how it's more than just inuyasha and kagome's relationship but at the same time kagome's reaction toward that hanyou was based on her feelings towards inuyasha. I'm sure Kagome would have still felt remorse for the boy if she had never met INuyasha.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 05:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your new characters. joseph and yami are a great tool to use in the story. they give kagome the ability to see some of the conflicts and pain that inuyasha would have gone through in growin up. keep using them well. i have to admit that the death of the young hanyou bothered me. i know it's just a story, and he was ananonymous character, but it still bothered me. in the story it points out the fact that while something needs to be done, whatever is done could cause more danger for inuyasha. with the societal values you have given the story, there is no safe place outside for a hanyou. i just wish we had more of inuyasha in the chapter. it's about him, but he seems to be forgotten thank you for another wonderful chapter. and however long it takes for you to update, i will wait, even if not patiently, as long as you don't try to force things. as long as the chapters continue to be this well written, i can wait
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 02:12 PST
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oh yeah, i forgot to mention how nice it is, that you had Kagome meet Yami and Josef. Its sweet to see her interact with other Hanyou. I hope there will be more!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 02:09 PST
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*sobs* that poor boy, to be shot for stealing and maiming... This is soo damn sad, i hope you make kagome into a legal head or something, or have her befriend some higher ups. Damn, I can't wait until you update again. I really really love this story, and Im so glad you are going to finish it. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 01:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful!
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Title: YAYYYYYY!!!!
Reviewed By: blackr0s3(logged out) On: November 10, 2007 00:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay i was so happy when I got the alert that u updated...and craptastic? this fanfic is ANYTHING but crappy it's one of THEE best made EVER! I am in love with it...I love the original story plot and how well writtin everything is! please update again..as soon as you can!!!
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 00:47 PST
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thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou!! that chapter was really good!! im sorry that you have been having a hard time lately. i hope that things get better for you. that made my day really. pretty lame that a story can make my day but to tell you the truth i had given up on you ever updating this fic but i am so glad you did! i cannot wait for you to update again! please dont make us wait so long again! however if you are having a tough time then dont worry yourself too much. ABSOLUTE BEST STORY! i cant wait till inuyasha and kagome meet again. should be good. thanks for making my day! xx
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: November 09, 2007 23:04 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. When will poor Inu get left alone? *sigh* Well written like always. Glad to see your motivated again. Can't wait to see more from you.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 21:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... inuyasha is too stubborn and stupid... kagome is getting more involved with josef... kinda sweet... seems that kagome has a lot of work cut out for her... will inuyasha talk to kagome soon?... will yami get to meet inuyasha?... hope so... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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