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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 11:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY u updated!!! I loved this chapter lol plz update again soon eveything is great Im just in love wioth ur writing lol so plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 10:41 PDT
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Hey, I liked this chapter so don't worry. It's good that he's at the shrine with Kagome it will give him some sense of what a family can be and give him some normalcy. He better not clam up because Kagome got a little scratched up during there forest rendevous. Spontaneity is the key in keeping a relationship alive. Well now that he's human let's hope he'll open up a bit more. Until next chapter,Happy writing.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 09:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful Chapter. I love your story. And btw I would have loved to read 30 pages!! I can't stop reading your story. I actually went back and read it again because it is so great. Very different from other stories. Keep up the terrific work! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 07:44 PDT
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aw i love it! i wonder how kagome will react to him being human. oh please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next. please udpate soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 05:33 PDT
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Outstanding! I really love how you've allowing this story to go "double-pace": It goes both fast and slow at once. You're not rubbing in emotions and thoughts, you're allowing us readers to think for ourselves. Lemonwise this is a pearl! No, make that a diamond! : ) I think I know what the the mixed thoughts in Inuyasha's head are, but I'm still looking forward to next chapter where they'll probably be revealed. Also a star for Jii-chan's behaviour; after all, he's a traditionalist and ought to act like one. I'll be reading you!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 01:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Has anyone told you that you are wonderful? I absolutely love this story, and the new chapter. (no wonder InuYasha has been so prissy about 'weak humans' as he is turning into one soon.)
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 00:32 PDT
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really enjoying this story you got here
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Reviewed By: Serenity666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 13:54 PDT
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This story is a wonderful one. I enjoy reading it. Please continue to update. Thank you so much.
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Reviewed By: Serenity666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 13:54 PDT
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This story is a wonderful one. I enjoy reading it. Please continue to update. Thank you so much.
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 19:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is very interesting! i love it. very well done.
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Reviewed By: perqwerty On: July 23, 2007 18:57 PDT
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I don't know, I sort of liked it better before the revisions. The style you use now is a little bit forced and a little bit too formal. It reminds me of a Jane Austen novel, or some Victorian era thing. I feel it takes some of the authenticity of the characters' emotions away. Don't forget, the story is also a heck of a lot fun.
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Title: ^__________^
Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 23:12 PDT
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This is my first time reading this fanfic and I must say, it'z really original and very very interesting^____^ Now I know I can't wait for more so...can't wait for more lolz^_^
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Title: *claps her hands*
Reviewed By: XIShadowxDemonIX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 19:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully written!! Best fanfic I've read in a very very long time. At least six years, easy. It's such an incredibly creative idea, I'm so jealous of your ability ^^; There may be fairly large gaps between updates, but the length of your chapters is definitely nothing to sneeze at, and very much worth the wait. I honestly think that this idea, which belongs solely to you, would make a very good book. Of course, you'd have to change certain things that belong to Rumiko Takahashi, and you'd need to elaborate on the holes that that would create, but I certainly would buy it... ^^; Anyway, please update as soon as you can, I look forward to it. *bow*
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Xryte [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 16:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You, are a wonderful writer - if I can go so far as to say that without making myself a complete fool. The fact that you have created this little universe with it's own little set of rules, is something not many people could do. It's a daunting task, and you've pulled it off quite magnificently. Your characters have reasons as to why they act like they do, and they have backgrounds; Something very few people take into consideration when actually writing a story where someone's personality drifts slightly to an extreme in one direction. I can understand why Inuyasha acts the way he does, and that is one of the major reasons why this story has become one of my favorites to read. You make the story angsty, without making it seem forced. There's no Kikyo bashing (because honestly, as a character, she's quite good.), and there's originality. You don't know how hard it is to find a story that's original nowadays. You have three types of fanfics in the fandom of inuyasha lately. High School, Old Japan, and just plain horrible. Reading this every two or so weeks is a breath of fresh air that is needed when dealing with a very popular fandom. There are people out there that can turn something like the "high school drama" into something very good, such as Curse of the Dragon, and I'd like to say that this story ranks up there. Keep on writing. There wasn't much I could think of to criticize other than that Mrs. Higurashi seemed slightly off, but thats to be expected. Heck, most of your characters are slightly off, but they stuck to the original character plan, and that's what matters. First time reviewing for this story, but I've been watching it since the first chapter. I enjoy it, and I hope that you release another update soon. A month is a long wait =)
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Reviewed By: MistMirror On: July 18, 2007 15:33 PDT
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Thank you for writing such an original and interesting story.
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