| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: alakab4m [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 13:59 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this chapter. but i'm sad that they can't see each other anymore. hope something great happens to bring them together!! update soon.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 01:18 PST
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I do like how you've written Kagome in this story, even though she's doing something that would be looked down upon in current society, she still has her air of innocence. She's also not wishy-washy like she's usually written and she's not a desperate fool in-love either. This slow burn is cool, sometimes it takes awhile to find true love, I think that way you cherish it more - friends before lovers. See ya next read
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Reviewed By: alakab4m [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 22:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! i'm so sad about the limit though. good job!
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Reviewed By: LadyButterfly21 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter brought the plot along nicely and you did manage to express Inuyasha's "feelings" towards Kagome well,the story makes more sense now so good job!The one thing that left me puzzled is if Inuyasha and other half- s/demons are subject to such rigid etiquette when socializing with others that weren't her kind why didn't she know of this already? Kagome isn't that clueless.Aside from that point I'm really enjoying this story and please keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Kaname_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 19:51 PST
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Holy crap! You gota update on this one, PRONTO!! Love it! Keep up the great work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Genie666_28 On: December 21, 2006 15:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I juat read the new chapter and I thought that it was amazing! I had actually the first chapetrs a while back when it was first posted and I got hooked. But for some reason, since you didn't update, this fic slipped my mind. But today I saw it posted and i was so surprised! I just read like a moster. You have really great talent to come up with a story like but I just hope that you could update this story more often!!! This story is explicit, just how I like it! But PEASE PLEASE PLEAAAASSSEEEE you gotta send the other chapters....I really wanna know what's gonna happen next!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 14:54 PST
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*cuddles nussles and gropels* doing good..good luck in rescuing inu yasha kagome!
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Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 09:01 PST
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Great Chapter! I'll be waiting in anticipation for the next!
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Reviewed By: cbm1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 17:40 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNERRRRRRRRRRRRRRR PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 20:39 PST
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boo when are u gonna update haha going through withdrawel
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Reviewed By: tamtam807 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 13:14 PST
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COME BAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCKKK FINISH THE FIC PLEEZZ
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Title: >w
Reviewed By: sallyo129 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 15:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I happened upon this fic, at first I just sat here and stared at the title scratching my head. "Interesting..." was all I could think. The summary caught my eye, so onward I went, and read I did! And now I'm all "OMIGOSH THIS FIC LYKE AWESOME DOOD!!!111one11!!1!!!" XD I love the part about Inuyasha not kissing... Reminds me of Pretty Woman... *clears throat* "Pretty hanyou walking down the street! Pretty hanyou, the kind I'd like to meet, pretty hanyou! I don't believe you! You're not the truth! No one can look as good as you! Mercy!"
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Reviewed By: suelias [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 13:42 PST
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I like the plot. Is sad and sweet. A good combination. I just have one question: At what time does she pray?
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 21:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely amazing, I am really feeling it. I like the Pretty Woman spin to your tale, male instead of a female. God knows we're always the low man on the totem pole. Their reluctance to be anything more than client and customer is angsty, I just wanna yell, get over it already ya'll like each other! Please update a.s.a.p this story is HOT. P.S. LOVE THE LEMONS
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Reviewed By: Anna22 On: November 07, 2006 14:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All i can say is write more!!! Write more!!! lol
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