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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 18:23 PDT
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great chapter update... not sure but any one with powers in this fic... like it so far... hope Kagome thinks thing through wouldn't want Inuyasha to get in trouble... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 05:15 PDT
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WHY have I favourited this without reviewing? Shame on me! I find your plot one of the best I've seen so far. You've really thought about the environment and the situation and made it all a question about ethics, politics and moral more than one of love. I felt you kind of tossed Kikyo in there a little too sudden, but that just shows us readers how Inuyasha saw her before and how it all came to the situation at hand. I am looking forward to see how the situation will be solved. I also appreciate how you've managed to separate sex and love in this fiction. Many, especially women, have a tendency to mix the two up. Sex CAN be an act of love, but it really doesn't have to be. I am looking forward to read next chapter.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 23:28 PDT
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interesting story... like it so far... looking forward to your upcoming chapters... update sooon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: lil6ter On: June 27, 2007 20:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic. so far. I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. I have some theories as to how Kagome is going to get Inuyasha home. My favorite is a concealment spell placed of the rosary. Love the fic. Keep writing!
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Title: Update!!!!
Reviewed By: Dreamer6164 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 15:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please please update soon!!!!! I really like your story and I really want to know what happens to InuYasha!!!!! ~Dreamer6164~
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Reviewed By: Ayriga On: June 06, 2007 21:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely incredible... most amazing work of Inuyasha fan fiction I've EVER read. Perfect style, the plot is amazingly developed, the characters are as in character as I ever could have dreamed... job well done. Amazingly well done.
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Reviewed By: yume_no_hanabira [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 06:47 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please update soon! I'm on the edge of my seat!
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 19:23 PDT
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MEe ¢¾'s this story. You're actually doing a really good job with the plot, It rocks! PLEASE update soon. THX!☺☺
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Reviewed By: kaname_inu_fan On: April 19, 2007 12:43 PDT
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Please update as soon as possible! I love this story so much! It has such a great plot, and drama, and just so sweet! And other times hot, but hey! I ain't complaining! ^_^ Please update soon!
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Title: UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 09:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this story was AWSOME!!!!! I like the whole plot line...its getting better and better... especially with the whole marriage thing.... please update soon!!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: suelias [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 08:36 PDT
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So, this means that if Kagome would accept to be Kouga's mate, she will be agreeing to not have children and in the case she had them she will be expected to be fine whit lock them up in total isolation for ever? I'd loved seeing her having a word or two about this subject whit the wolf. And as usual, I loved the update. It's so sweet how Kagome is set to help Inuyasha. And I really hope she will be allow to take him out of the shrine for a while, 'cause even when Ryu is right in his reasoning, Kagome has some valid points too.
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Reviewed By: ladybutterfly On: April 15, 2007 05:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is progressing beautifully! Though it would be amazing if you would update more.*cough, cough!...update!* Overall it's a good plot and your writing style is pretty polished. I like how Kikyo and Kouga were integrated into the story but what about Sango and Miroku? Are they going to show up as well? It would be interesting to see how original you can make them...Update soon!
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Reviewed By: violet blossom On: April 15, 2007 03:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sorry i've never posted any review before..but i sincerely thought this is a really good fic.. i like the originality of the story..never read anything like this before.. hope you update this fic soon..really want to know what will happen between inu/kag..and i love the way you characterize inu in this fic..he's adorable!! (and devastatingly hot too.. ^-^)
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 16:12 PDT
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My girl got determination, that's right Kagome fight for your hanyou. I HOPE that Inuyasha and Kagome can spend her extra month together. I think that's the only way they'll grow to trust each other more and let down the barriers holding them back. Great chapter, read ya later.
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 14:48 PDT
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ahh dont worry about it, you made a comment, i re-read my review, and hoped to correct it, so that you wouldnt take offense to what i said. I personally like kikyou, but its hard to not be swayed by others view. *but can't you picture kikyou dressed up as the greatest wet-dream, whipping inu like a bad puppy?* sorry couldnt help myself. ahhhh but anyways.. Great chapter, i would love to see Kagome create a *save haven* law for Hanyous. I hope she is able to find a loop hole in the martial law, or any law for that matter, to be able to create that save haven. Would you make just Inuyasha safe, or would you make all hanyou safe? And its nice to have a little background for characters. It makes us readers, able to relate to them better. IMO. Keep up the great work and i cant wait to review the next chapter. :) ~Autumn
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