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Title: ressa
Reviewed By: mickiressa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 01:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much. I want to read more of it. The story line is original as far as i have seen and I love the way your chapters are long. You have inspired my muse to come back from her very long vacation and I want to thank you for that. Maybe you'll read mine and I will definately continue to read yours.
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Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: Xryte [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 00:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was another wonderful chapter. Brilliant, but there is just one thing thats sort of sticking out at me. There wasn't as much originality in it as there usually is. The "beat himself up after hurting her" seemed semi-original but not.. if that makes any sense. You did a great job on this chapter, and I REALLY can't wait for you to release the next one. I'm sorta glad you didn't change the way you were going with the story based on the background information I pointed out to you. It would've been rather angsty.. and I can't stand it to an extreme . =P Can't wait for another chapter. Good job.
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Reviewed By: CowgirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 00:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story all together. But now I'm just glad that you didn't go into details on Kagome and Kouga. Gross. hehehe. It's funny though, she thought about Inuyasha while... yeah. GREAT STORY!
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Reviewed By: CowgirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 00:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Colorthis is awesome! i can't wait to read more, i would right now. but no matter how good the story, i'm falling asleep! GREAT JOB!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 15:26 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey, am a new fan for this fic and i fell inlove on the spot! The name got to me i tell u, seeing that am this huge hentai XD lolz, and i really needed to read some good fic, more so lemons ofcourse and your fic provided that... Everything about it was awesome... EVERTYHING. I still my self sleeping infront of this comp waiting for an updation from you... lolz, and more lemons! =p Update when u can, oh and can u pwease pwease e-mail me or sumn n give me some authors/stories to read--- they must include lemon and inu/kags---- hope that's not asking for alot XD I jus havent been finding any good fic lately and am bored as hell too >.> plus my summer ends the 3rd of next month and i find my self dreading the idea of me going baq to school >.> lolz... Oh well, update when u can once again n e-mail me^__^
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Inuyasha's adventures and misadventures at Kagome's were really fun to read. It was sad when Inuyasha got so upset when their sex got a bit out of hand....it must be so hard for him to accept that, after all the abuse he has suffered from some of his so-called "clients", that he might have actually ENJOYED rough sex, especially if Kagome was injured. His psyche is a mess and rightfully so after all the pain some of those awful bitches put him through. And, on top of that, Kagome is getting to see him at his most vulnerable. No, Inuyasha is notr a happy camper right now. And I can't wait to read more. I really love this story.
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 13:26 PDT
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OH MY GOD! I´m totally in love with this story. I have a personal policie. I usully don´t read an unfinished story because some times they stay that way unfinished and I end up frustrated. But I give this story a shot and I was mesmerize!Wonderfull story, the way you are writting is a terrific. I don´t have words to describe my awe. Please, and I´m begging here. Don´t let it be unfinished. I can´t wait so see the next chapter. Their time are comingo to an end...I hope not...I keep imagining if they will married...or will Inuyasha being adopted...or will he be back to Kikyou and the freak costumers...hope not the last option. Keep doing this great work. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 01:01 PDT
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I was so happy to open my email to see a new chapter from you. This chapter was wicked cool, and I'm getting sad that you made the chapter pass three weeks. And now Inuyasha is human. With their allotted month almost over, whats going to happen then? Will Inuyasha ever get to be free? Will Kagome's family adopt him? Will Kagome get pregnant? Will they get married? Sheesh I have so many questions... Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 23:36 PDT
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really enjoying this fic!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 19:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the new chapter. I hope the next one comes soon.
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Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 17:04 PDT
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Another great job with the new chapter and I like how it'z going^___^ Can't wait for the next update^_~
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 16:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so kawaii.. as always... i love your story.. i hope you update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome[Not logged in] On: August 04, 2007 13:26 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! so he gonna be human next chapter. Take advantageofit KAGOME! But how cna she lethim waste there time together. Being mad at each other. Its a waste. And the sex must of went down a grade. if you lost the spunk.. wats left ....well I guess he was being tender so .. he gets back some of his point s . haha. ;p I liked it.
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: August 04, 2007 12:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would read 100+ pages! This story is great, you're a talented writer WITH proper grammar(God, that's so hard to find these days)! I enjoy the fresh take on creativity and imagination and your style of lemons are tasteful as well as arousing. Too many mistake graphically erotic as crudely written bad language, I really hate that. Poor grammar to me is like nails on the chalkboard, I can't get through the first paragraph. Can't wait to see what interesting developments are in store next chapter, update soon! ;)
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 12:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, cliff hanger! Good chapter! Update Soon!
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