| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 14:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I know that hurt. Well he had to do it, first think then deside... But hes only thinking about the side affects of this perdicament. Still there has to be another way, one that doesn't cost lives. Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: alexus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 08:58 PDT
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Aww, thats so sad. He just walked out after what she told him.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 03:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea Souta! InuYashas so AHHHH!!! Kazuma is gross... Wonderful as always.
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Title: SQUUEEEE
Reviewed By: angelofscreams96 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 00:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story so much. ^_^ you're such a great writer. everytime this story gets updated it makes me want to squee. ^_^ its that awesome. your awesome. thank you for posting on mediaminer. ^_^
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 21:44 PDT
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Inuyasha no baka!!! I think he has reached a new level of stupidity. Rite now I would like to give him a few hits with that 2 by 4 with nails in it. I wish Kagome was able to make him see what she saw. Then he may be ok, or not. I don't think he realizes that he hasn't been living for a hell of a long time. All he's been doing is existing. The boy needs a few goods hit to the head and a good hug!!! Hope the next chapter doesn't end on such a depressing note. The one and only strangeness, Emily.
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Reviewed By: CowgirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 21:24 PDT
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this is getting really good. i can't wait to see what happens. is he going back to the other shrine? update soon
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 18:43 PDT
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better than any over dramatized scene ever. you have the characters down, interesting and yet true to the original show. and with sex :)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 17:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... feel bad for kagome... she's trying to help inuyasha out... but it seems that he doesn't want her help... hope she goes after inuyasha though... if inuyasha goes back being a tetsudai... will kagome have to go back too... wonder what will happen now... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 17:47 PDT
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what! NOOO!!!!! please please please have kagome go after him! omg i love this story but i will be completly crushed if they dont stay together! please update soon! its a great chapter and story keep up the great work!
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Title: Bah!
Reviewed By: Xryte [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 17:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, and it was such a depressing ending. I'm hoping things brighten up next chapter, because there really is only so much angst and sadness one can take. Especially with the update system. It's my three least favorite things in writing coupled into one package. Angst, Sadness, and Anticipation. Bah. Anyway, your chapter was nice and original, and a great read. Keep up the work. There is one thing that I have to wonder though... Where is Inuyasha's brother? It seems like he would play an important roll in the story later on, considering he's a full demon, and the prejudices of the two races. Hope its answered soon, but not too soon. First I'd rather see what happens next so that our favorite couple gets together... Later!
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 15:25 PDT
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oh, so many issues!!! Poor guy!! ;_; Loved this chapter! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 15:14 PDT
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Typically as chapter fics go on, people stop reviewing because they've already said their "ZOMG! THIS IS GREAT! UPDATE!". And let's face it, that's what *most* reviews are. Reviews with substance are few and far between. I wish this site offered a way to see how many people have a specific fic 'favorited'. That's far more telling than reviews. In any case, I really enjoy the world you've set up here. The frustration and relative hopelessness of the legal situation Inuyasha is in is tangible. You are also keeping the characters themselves despite it being an AU which is rare and shows great talent on your part. I'm also enjoying that it's taken a while for the characters to come to terms with their emotions and that they didn't jump immediately into love. So many authors would have them confessing their undying devotion by chapter 3. I am hoping that you keep it up even though right now you're on a precarious edge that could easily sway you from that path. Kagome's giving nature often lets authors turn her into a doormat. I sincerely hope you don't give into that line of reasoning because you've been doing astoundingly well thus far. As for places to improve, I think you could have taken a bit more time to talk about the month that he spent at her home. You took 9 chapters to tell the story of the first month, but then slammed through the next in 2. And that is supposedly when his character development really took place. Maybe you have a reason for skipping it and plan to address the missing time in later chapters, but I'll admit I was thrown when you suddenly skipped ahead 3 whole weeks. I am very interested to see where you take it from here.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 13:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The angst is so wonderful. I love dark chapters almost as much as I love fluff chappies. Keep up the good work.
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Title: shrine Prostitute
Reviewed By: cheshirecat On: August 19, 2007 13:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far! at first I thought it would be all about sex but i was mistaking. It had turned out to be a story filled with compassion...but now i am mad because you left me with a awful chapter ending. you are mean for doing that, so please please update soon even though you had just updated today! I ask for too much don't i?
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 12:02 PDT
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oooo, things are getting good!
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