| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 12:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story. I was wondering when you were going to update on AFF. This is one of the b est stories ever written. And I wish alot more peopple would read it.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 12:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story. I was wondering when you were going to update on AFF. This is one of the b est stories ever written. And I wish alot more peopple would read it.
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 20:45 PST
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O my I hope you are able to find what is wrong and able to find a way to fix it, or cope with it if it can't be fixed. Pleas remember to take as much time as you need to deal with your problems, after all we just get to enjoy your work so don't feel obligated to put us ahead of what you need to do. Now on to the somewhat more pleasant aspects of this comment, I thought the 'big reunion' was done wonderfully, it stayed true to the character of what you have already established, and still managed to keep it surprising. Well done I must say. The one and only strangeness, Emily.
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 17:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALELUIA! I´m very very happy that you update this story and I´m even more happy with this chapter...Finally they come to some agreement. I´m sorry that you are facing problems right now and sincerilly hope for your recover. I understand that you may not have the same amount of time to write but don´t stop it, but if you really love it know that you are very good and a lot of people are wainting for the next chapter.Congratulations on this chapter, this awesome story. I´ll pray for you.
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Reviewed By: Wowzer313 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 17:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I don't remember if I've reviewed this before (and I don't feel like checking) but I thought I'd drop another line anyway. I'll probably do it a few more times until you're done. I only wanted to say that this was an extremely cute chapter. I think, somehow it was different from the others. Not in terms of caliber or anything...somehow the style was distinctly different, though I can't place my finger on how. Anyway, I liked it. I thought Kagome was just adorable with that 'I'm pregnant' story, as implausible as it was. It was funny. And I liked the little '7 times' thing they had going on. I truly enjoy the way you characterize, especially Inuyasha's character. It just seems so believable to me, and that, in my opinion, is the mark of a true artist, and shows real talent. Also, I truly hope that all of your medical issues end resolved and positive. I wish you all the blessings in the world with that, truly I do. Good luck, stay safe& healthy! Wowzer313
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 17:06 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome & inuyasha saw each other again... and at some point were able to talk about some issues... how will their deal play out... what else will happen in the two weeks they're together... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: 11235813 On: February 19, 2008 15:46 PST
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I'm so glad that you updated. I thought that you had given up on the story, even though you had said you wouldn't. Your health is definitely more important than the story though. Good luck. If you're half as stubborn as your characters then you'll be sure to get better :-p
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 14:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I want to say I am so sorry to hear about your health problems. You have some major stuff going on and you have my heartfelt wish that you will pull through with flying colors. I have been keeping up with your story, I may not comment all the time. (as I never know what to say) However, I love your writing and this story inparticular has me in it's grasp. I will wait for however long it takes for you to do the next chapter. Just take care of yourself and be well. - Amy
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Reviewed By: mojop [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 14:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have all my best wishes for you. I really hope you get better. Also, it's amazing that you're keeping up the story! I really can't believe that they are going to go on a five-year trial run! She's going to wait that long..oooh that is just the biggest tease. Plus, I don't understand why Inuyasha could just spend those five years with Kagome at her shrine, but I guess he doesn't want to become too attached. Oh, and because they have only kissed once, I really can't wait to read a whole chapter with those two just kissing. But I imagine that will only happen when Inuyasha's ready. Thanks for the update! It truly made my day :)!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 14:00 PST
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lovin the update!!!! ahhhh!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Butterfly21 On: February 19, 2008 12:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry to hear about your medical situation I hope that you will have a fast recovery! Your fan fiction is wonderful and a pleasure to read. My only question is if you changed Inuyasha's manner of speaking a little more than before. It seemed a trifle out OOC. Otherwise, a great story all around and I look forward to any future updates!
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 11:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh G-d, I didn't know you weren't feeling well and were sick. While I was waiting what felt like forever for you to update I thought it was the usual, school, work, or something else was stealing your time and preventing you from writing. If I knew you were sick I would have sent you an email wishing you were feeling better or at least talked to you. You are one of my favorite authors, in the top five list for sure, and believe, me, I read a ton of fanfiction so it is a long, long, list of authors I like. If I knew you were this ill I would have liked to do something, even though thinking about it now, I have no clue what the hell I could do. I hope the surgery goes well and that they figure out what is wrong and cure you. I understand you might not be able to update for a while and due to the circumstances that is okay with me. Just do your best to get better and update when you have the time. Your fan and friend, Zach
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 10:14 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I have to say how sorry I am that you are having medical problems. I hope it turns out alright for you. I completely understand writing, or anything else, taking a back burner to health and family right now. Now to the review. I have to say that it is good that Kagome is going to be getting some while she waits for her hanyou to finally realize how much she loves him. I hope it doesn't take the full five years though before he accepts her love for him. They should be together and he should experience some real pleasure and joy in life before that place manages to kill him. I can't wait to see how you manage to work it all out, I just hope Inuyasha or Kagome doesn't have to die for the laws to change.
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 09:59 PST
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Great update! I'm sorry to hear about your medical troubles. I'm sure we'll all be thinking good thoughts!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 07:44 PST
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wow i'm really really sorry to hear about your medical problems. That you've even given a thought to this is amazing so thank you so much for posting, but you're health definitely comes first. I wish you all the best and I hope everything turns out okay.
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