| "Close Quarters" Reviews/Comments [ 356 ] |
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Title: Rinlover
Reviewed By: The Yellow Submarine On: March 07, 2006 21:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really did enjoy this fanfic, but you did have a few grammer errors. I really like this story, and you NEED TO CONTINUE!! GRAAAAAGHGHHSHGSFJDSLK! ...Yeah, I really enjoyed it ^^;;
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Title: UPDATE SOON!!!!
Reviewed By: AWESOME JOB!!!! On: March 07, 2006 11:42 EST
Comment/Review:
OMG! i loved this story and i hope you update soon! I cant wait to see who comes through the door! update soon!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 04:07 EST
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Hey there. No, I'm not mad. I'm trusting you, you said this was just a rebound chappie after the lemon, which by the way, I loved. LOL. And as for "A Kiss of Shadows" by LKH? All I have to say is... I'VE READ THAT BOOK!!!! I LOVED IT!!! It does have hot lemons, huh? Actually I've read the whole series, up till number 4. Heck, I have number 4 and 3. I've read 1 and 2 but havent bought them. The ones I have are on hardback, but I think I'm gonna get the first 2 on paperback. I think my favorite out of the whole series would have to the 2nd and 3rd. The series itself has so much political intrigue, I love it. And I like Doyle too. And as for the other series, I've read that too!!! Pretty much everything by LKH except Nightseer. So yeah, I read her Anita Blake vampire hunter series too. "Micah" is her lates book in the AB series. It's a short story about one of the characters. I loved it, thouh I reccommend you read all 13 books first. LOL. That'll take a while. I think Merry book 5 is probably gonna hit stores sometime in 2007. I can't wait to see when her cousin comes out. All heck will break loose. Okay, that was one long review. ;-) Anyways, great update, story, I love it. I can't wait for the next chappie!!! :-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: Fuega1 On: March 06, 2006 21:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and hope you update again soon. I like your style of writing it is much better than most i have read. Some good fanfics that im reading are The Phoenix Blade:time lapse and The Curse of the Dragon andf anything by Sueric is good hope you check them out. Update soon good job so far
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Title: Rebound
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 20:58 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter alot. It was short but very sweet. Excellent trickery at the very end. You don't know if the rebound from the lemon will be a positive match for both Inu and Kag or will they stay just rommates. Great writing! I can see why you are taking awhile to update also. Fantasy books are a great read and I may just have to try "A Kiss of Shadows." My favorite reads are from the authors: Evil_Buny, her stories are mainly Sess and Rin pairings and are great! Sueric is another one, she has a great series called "Purity," and she is now writing #5. I love her writing and her original characters that stem from Inuyasha and Kagome and Sess and Kagura seem to come to life and she makes you feel like you are there with them. InuGrrrl is another one, she has the hottest lemons in her stories. She writes with spunk and is very clever. She likes to write Inuyasha and Kagome and Sess and Rin pairings. I hope this helps and I have alot more if you want to email me. Take of you.
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Reviewed By: bobby pin On: March 06, 2006 18:25 EST
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wow. umm...short...yeah. inuyasha went outside? aww...did he get up early to go buy a nice breakfast for kagome so she doesn't have to cook? well, seeing as kagome's still...dirty...from their 'play'--shower sex!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879(NSI) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 17:17 EST
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Nice update. Yes short but still good. As for the request about fanfictions to read. Check out any of the work by BrokenSouledPoetess she is really great specially at drama. Also there is a one-shot of mine that is posted it's called The Lovers it's under Inuyasha but I really recomend BrokenSouledPoetess work
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Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 15:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! ::blushes:: That was a hot chapt. I'm so glad you updated. ^_^ I feared you gave up on the fic. That was definately worth the wait. I knew the press party was starting, but the lemon was a sweet surprise. Thank you so much, I really enjoyed that. ^_~ Can't wait for more!!
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Title: Close Quarters
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 22:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really glad that I came across your cool story and I am also really hooked on it! You have a way of capturing Inuyasha and Kagome's spirit with your writing. I also like how Sango, Miroku, and Kikyou are portrayed. I can't wait to see how things will turn out. Take care of you.
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Title: ramen recipie
Reviewed By: ashimi On: January 27, 2006 00:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to tell u that, bein the ramen fan that i am, i tried that recipie. IT WAS AMASING!!!! thanks for putting it in ur story. which by the way, this fic is one of my favorites!!! i cant wait to read the rest of it!!!!
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Title: nice..
Reviewed By: x On: January 26, 2006 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice like how that tied although i thought the lemond part would be more detailed and longer too, but its all good. good job man^^
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Title: ramen recipie
Reviewed By: ashimi On: January 26, 2006 22:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to tell u that, bein the ramen fan that i am, i tried that recipie. IT WAS AMASING!!!! thanks for putting it in ur story. which by the way, this fic is one of my favorites!!! i cant wait to read the rest of it!!!!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 07:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter/update. I wonder what will happen in the morning. Where do they go from here? I can't wait till the next chapter!!! Great story! ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: January 26, 2006 00:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm glad you decided to finally update. I checked this story basically every day hoping that you would have updated but you did nothing for a very long time. Anyway YAY!!! Lemon!!! ^.^ finally everything is out in the open and Kouga doesn't stand a chance. Update again soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: x On: January 25, 2006 23:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eh not bad not bad, good job on the lemond
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