| "Close Quarters" Reviews/Comments [ 356 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anju On: March 19, 2006 23:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I just thought I'd mention in chapter 16 that you say the first thing Kagome did when she got back to the apartment was to take off her shoes, then when she and Inuyasha are in the bedroom he takes them off again. Just thought I'd mention the little inconsistency! Great work!
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Reviewed By: inuslilhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 23:26 EST
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hey your fic is great but i really wanted to thank you. i havent read any good book/novels in a while. and when you talked about reading Laurell K. Hamilton i checked her out and now im reading Cerulean Sins and its really good so thanks.
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Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: March 17, 2006 21:45 EST
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Since mm.org don't like me and won't let me log on for some inexplicable reason, I can't "favorite author" you and I didn't know that you updated. So I'm late to the party. The PRESS PARTY! Long-awaited, lots of fun - glad to see Inu/Kag together. Keep going!
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Reviewed By: Az On: March 17, 2006 06:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALLELULIA!!! you finally updated!!! -jumps up and down hyperactively- wootwoot!! -cries- i waited so long i almost gave up hope, well, okay chapter, short but okay, i'll accpet that you didn't want to write anything longer, update soon!
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Title: Omfg!
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 00:46 EST
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Holy talitos, Batman!!! That was awesome! A well-written lemon if I say so myself. So, Kags wakes up all alone and then the door opens...ack! Please update! You're killing me!! I'm going to cry...okay I'm being a little too dramatic but this is such a great story. I read it over a few times. And wow, you've been getting lots of reviews. Way to go! Just keep updating if you want more, please?
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Title: great fic
Reviewed By: Punny On: March 16, 2006 05:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm amazed by your ability to capture the charactristics of each character without writing a whole lot. Great plot too! Keep up the great work! I'll be stalking this fic for a while...
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Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva~NSI On: March 11, 2006 04:44 EST
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*LoL* EVIL! O_o Just plain evil. ::folds arms across chest:: That was such a tease. I was soo excited when I saw the update from you, then it took less than a minute to read. Please update soon. This is a great fic and I'm dying to know what you have in store. Sorry, I don't have any suggestions, but I do have some advise. UPDATE real soon. ^-^ The book you're reading sounds interesting. Think I'll give it a go. Thanks
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Title: MM.Org won't let me log in....
Reviewed By: ChickensEveryWhere [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know what you mean when you say that Laurell K. Hamilton is an awesome writer, if you like her Merry Gentry series, then you should read her Anita Blake Vampire Hunter series. The sex scenes don't really start until about the....6th book in, but the series is so awesome that you won't even really miss the sex secenses. I have every single book she's written and currently have her newest book that is coming in July "Danse Macabre" on reserve in Hard Cover. Awesome Series....A little off topic there. Your story is so good! UGH! Please update as soon as you can! Poor Kagome, to loose your first time like that is sad...hope everything goes over well ya know? Keep up the good work. AND ONCE AGAIN....UPDATE SOON! ~ChickensEveryWhere~
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Reviewed By: star963852 On: March 09, 2006 22:35 EST
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OMG how could u ust leave it like that...ur gonna have to write more soon...please update soon
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Reviewed By: x On: March 09, 2006 17:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EHK sooo not cool. *stare* ^^hehe please continue
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Reviewed By: x On: March 09, 2006 17:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EHK sooo not cool. *stare* ^^hehe please continue
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 16:04 EST
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Awsome fanfic. Please update soon!!!! Cant leave us on a cliffhanger!!!! : )
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 02:38 EST
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I READ THAT BOOK MAN!! THAT BOOK ROCKS, ABSOLUTELY KICKS ASS! Oh, and so does your story. AND YOU'RE SO EVIL! *cries* Sorry I sound like a bad fanfic groupie, but I've read this story since your first chapter. Keep it up, please please!
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Title: Good Fanfic
Reviewed By: Jonique On: March 08, 2006 15:26 EST
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If you like The Lucky Ones and In A Different Light, which are my 2 favorite stories, then I know that you will enjoy a story called "True Companion" by Sessy-Sama. A very dark Sessy/Rin story. It is absoulutly wonderful. Also, could you please tell use which ones are the dark ones! Great story by the way, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: senshiminako On: March 08, 2006 02:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg I LOVE Laurell K Hamilton. I have all her books. I love the lemony goodness about them as well as the plots. I guess I am a big hentai at heart ^.^! You should try her Anita Blake Vampire series as well, those are sooooooo good. Oh back to your story, it is so damn good, I love that it is not the typical roomie fic and that there is depth to the story, but why the cliffy, hopefully the next update will be soon. email me at chick_online@yahoo.com if you want some more infor about the Laurell K Hamilton books.
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