| "Close Quarters" Reviews/Comments [ 356 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: January 25, 2006 22:53 EST
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AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Inuyasha can be so sweet. I am glad that you wrote another chaoter. This is one of my favorite stories. Inuyasha finally told her that he saw her doing that.Please don't take long to write another chapter.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879(NSI) On: January 25, 2006 18:05 EST
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Oh my. yummy lemon. You can feel it almost...or maybe i do just cause i was already on edge when i started reading..which just made thing wetter for me....great update.
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko (not logged in) On: January 25, 2006 16:33 EST
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Wonderfrul chapter and I like how it ended. I hope everything works out for them in the future. Can't wait to read more of this fantatic story of yours.
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: January 25, 2006 15:18 EST
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Nice. Now let's hope they don't have a case of violent amnesia when they wake up O.O
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Reviewed By: Jacque On: January 25, 2006 14:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! They finally resolve their little sexual tension. Way to go Kagome and Inuyasha! Umm...no offense to your taste or Inuyasha or anything, but I take a look at the dress and couldn't help but notice that the style of that dress and many from that store are for older women. Like at least mid 30's to early 50's. Kagome is young and should wear something more youthful than that. As one of my gay friends say, rhinestones on clothes just make you look old. A plain one in young, cheerful color (like 3027 or 2026NS) would look much better!
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Title: really good
Reviewed By: i love Inu/kag On: January 24, 2006 17:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did really well with this fan fic..you should right more it's really good.
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Reviewed By: Az On: December 16, 2005 05:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-cries- i just spent two hours reading your story to find out it wasnt completed yet! damn you!! well so far its great ^_^ i'd love to see inuyasha and kagome get into a bit more awkward moments oooh! and sango and miroku meddle more!! it'd be so kawaii!! ^_-- well please update soon i'll be checking regularly
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Reviewed By: Giggles-a-lot [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 23:25 EST
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This is one of my favorite stories...& I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 18:46 EST
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I think you did that on purpose...you're teasing us. But thanks anyway, for letting us know that an update is coming soon.
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Title: Evil A/N
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 17:18 EST
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Oi...thats evil...down right mean. I don't need to be reasured that a new chapter is going to come, I can wait however long it would take for one to come out. Author's notes are like teases by mail...so please no more A/N
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Reviewed By: Lucient, NSI On: December 07, 2005 14:20 EST
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I thought it was a chapter. But I forgive you. ;) Glad to see you haven't given up. :)
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Reviewed By: TiaQ On: December 07, 2005 13:38 EST
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Good, ive been waiting for an update. Just hope you do soon, you have a great story! Tia
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Reviewed By: ikkdlover On: December 04, 2005 20:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love your story its so good and i cant wait till you write the next chapt..............=)
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Reviewed By: lyv [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 15:49 EST
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nicely paced, with good dialogue. Keep up the good work, thanx.
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 21:49 EST
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great great i enjoy the story alot.... please update soon..... and umm..... more maybe a bit of fluff or some interactions between inuyasha and kagome... im not aking for a lemon.... yet... but something
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