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Reviewed By: InuBaby369246 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaay you updated!! I've been checking like every day. I loved the part about the breadsticks. I personaly thought that it was very funny. maybe I'm just weird like that...
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Title: Oh yea!!!
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 12:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yea I am reviewer #100!!! I should get a prize or something!!! I love this fic you are going on my fav story list okays???
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 11:21 EDT
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First of all, great fic! Second, I'd like to thank you for pointing out that fact about the reviews. It's been absolutely soooo annoying. Anyway... Great fic! Keep it up and I can't wait for next chapter! C-ya! ^_^
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Reviewed By: tiaq On: October 22, 2005 04:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chap update soon
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Title: I LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Lady_Relm loged out On: October 18, 2005 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whose braid of hair is longer, Bankotsu's or Hiten's? Okay from the pics I have of the two there is about the same but Hiten's is long aqt least by 3 inches but that is what I saw other ppl may have a different view...However...I love this story alot PLEASE! HURY UP AND UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: October 18, 2005 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...that's a tough one but I think it's Bankotsu. I'm not 100% sure cuz I haven't seen Hiten in a while but I don't remember his braid being as long as Bankotsu's and besides the style looks way better on Bank anyway. This is a good story. My friend said I should read this so i am. You really need to come up with a better summary tho, it has no appeal to it. Anyway update soon ok ja!!!!
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Reviewed By: just_a_friend [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 03:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
to answer the question, bankotsu's hair is longer. also that 'yoga move' isn't hard at all, i have to do it during wrestling practice to strech out my lower back.=P
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Reviewed By: Thoughtful_Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. The idea is the first of it's kind that I've read. I might have seen a few in the past, but I don't remember if I have. Anyway, I love all your fics, and being as I'm going to start writing on my own...meh, I'll start reviewing. Keep up the good work though! Ah, I read the question on chapter 11, and after finding some pictures, I would have to say that Bankotsu's braid is longer...either that or they are about the same length. *nod nod*
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Reviewed By: ikkdlover On: October 13, 2005 12:27 EDT
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i love your story!!!!!!!!!!!!its so awesome.....please update...........
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: October 13, 2005 00:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Although my computer has been being stupid and refusing to let me reveiw. Oh well, doing it now so anyways. I just really like this fic. I guess it's because it reminds me of my friends and I. Either way, it's a great read. Keep the chapters coming.
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Title: question
Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can just see miroku and inu doing the salutation to the sun thing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! neway, i think Bankotsu's is longer. but im not sure. love the story by the way, and i cant wait for the next chapter.
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Title: YUM!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 18:02 EDT
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I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO gonna try that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but i agree with u about the mushrooms! they're just DISCUSTING!!!!!!!! Ramen is like the BEST FOOD EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry, but im like an inu clone sorta. i have his temper and i also LOVE ramen!!!!!!!!!! I cant wait to finish reading ur story.
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14(not loged in) On: October 12, 2005 16:41 EDT
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great story, i love it! oh, and i think jakotsu's hair is longer then bankotsu's hair, but that's just me, chow for now!
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Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 15:40 EDT
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Aww, that'll be cute to see what Miroku and Sango are going to do! ^_^ Huzzah for the update! You rock my socks!!! So this party thing should be quite interesting...when is it going to happen? I'm anxious, woot!
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Title: Close Quarters
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 15:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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