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Reviewed By: Hyperness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 09:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not very original... But I absolutely adore it. xD It's really really good I can't wait to read the next chapter! You totally took something and made it your own... I give you props for that :3
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Reviewed By: BEGGER On: August 19, 2006 02:17 EDT
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please place a new chapter asap please with puppy dog eyes too.
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 17:45 EDT
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will appreciate update soon
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Reviewed By: little-pixie n.l.o On: July 23, 2006 15:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv ya stories! keep em all goin!
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 21:02 EDT
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cool fic loved it but wat happens next please update soon . bye now i have np wit it so i like it alot .
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 20:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a few storys. Called Rockstar is not as good as yours but it has 101 reviews. REALLY GOOD GLAD TO HAVE READ IT.
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Title: AFF
Reviewed By: suikidoen On: July 16, 2006 11:37 EDT
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aff is changing stuff around insted of going to the originall aff for inuyasha you go to http://inu.adultfanfiction.net/
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: July 16, 2006 00:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I highly recommend "My Future's Past" by bluezinthos, it's on here. "Facets of The Living Jewel" by Licentia Poetica, also on here. And "Curse of The Dragon" I can't remember the name of the author for this one but it's an AU and fits into the hentai genre and is rated X. All three are really good!!! MFP is a twist on the original story line, Kag comes through the well but can't get back and Inu is full youkai and Sess is the main bad guy. The latest chapter wasn't that great but it's a really interesting story. FLJ is a divergence and the author is very up to date with IY, we both read the manga online and are WAY ahead of everyone who only watches the show or reads the viz mangas. But you don't have to be that far ahead to understand everything, she's just a really good author. Anyway in this one it revolves around the adult characters being aspects of the shikon no tama and they have to come together to form a Living Jewel in order to defeat Naraku. Inu gets alot of bonus perks in this one and her character development for him is AMAZING!!!! It is also rated X for adult scenes and language. And finally CTD is an AU where all the chars. are in high school, but don't let that stop you, it's an amzing story with really character development and each of the chars. get their time in the spot light. Anyway I think you would like all three of these. Now about your story. I like this story but I wish the chapters were a little bit longer. I've waited through three chapters for Inu and Kag to talk, it better happen in the next one or I'm going to go crazy!!! Anyway if you need help editing or shooting ideas around you can email me at punkishgoblin@yahoo.com and I'd be glad to help!!! ^.~
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Reviewed By: InuyashaFreak-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 04:18 EDT
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As far as aff.net, their site was becoming too large, so they made seperate sites for most of the anime. http://www.inu.adultfanfiction.net/ That is the link for the Inuyasha site. Good luck with the voting.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 06:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I really like your story I have some stories that you might be interested in: "Unleashed" by: Black Mamba07, "Welcome to The Age of Un-Innocence" by: Laurell-chan, "The Rebellion" by: Lolleh-hime, "The Island of Dr.Onigumo" by: Princess Melissa83, Laying Down the Law by: The Kouga Lucius Connection, "Long Lost..." by: Trinityk, Savvy by: xbitternessx, The pain of reality by: xYour_Last_Chancex, and Complexities of Fate by: yanna_enoah. That is all from MM.org and they are all Inu/Kags fics. I hope you enjoy these stories like have but some are not complete so anyways I hope you keepup the good work on this story.
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Title: Waaah
Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: July 13, 2006 15:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait till inu gets home! i just wish miro and san werent there!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Lurv OHS
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter to an excellent story. I rec'd it before at the guild, and...a few other places, lol. Actually, I sent in over 40 rec's this last time to them and I read every one, too. If you want I can send you the list. As for your story, Im wondering too, what Inu's gonna say/do when he gets home. Should be interesting on how things go from here. Love the story though. But you be with your man while you have the chance. We'll still be here...I know I will :P So update when you can. :D
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Title: Traffic (Ch 20)
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 11:06 EDT
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Good chapter. Though I did skim over parts. And I can't remember what this story is about (a summary would help if you don't mind). Anyway, pls continue! I recommend Wish Bringer by Rogue Pryde (Fanfiction.net) http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2145411/1/ Also, here's 2 pics of Inupapa - http://inuyasha.nu/index.php?set_albumName=inumovie3&id=inumovie_3_035& amp;include=view_photo.php&categoryid=3 (from Inuyasha.NU - Fukai Mori [Movie 3 gallery, page 3, screencap 35]); and http://www.ear-tweak.com/ramen/koiuta02.htm (fanart on Ear-Tweak). Sore ja!
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Title: Traffic
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 02:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree with Patchcat on this chapter also. I found myself cringing whenever I saw a misspelled word, but it was a good update though. I liked how Inuyasha handled the interview and can't wait to see what will happen when he finally meets up with Kagome. And don't feel bad about dating someone younger because I am 7 years older than my husband and it's wonderful! Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: July 12, 2006 00:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! =D Waiting on the update! I love hayao miyazaki movies! i wanna collect them all xD
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