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Title: Yeap, I'm back!
Reviewed By: JennyBoo On: October 31, 2007 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya... me again. Uuuhm.. I've read tons of other stories. I kind of got into the AU type thing, it's growing on me. Still, I come here every day checking for an update. PLEASE UPDATE soon? I'm becoming desperate.
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Title: Chapter 24
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 20:03 EDT
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Well, now I'm wondering if Kagome is really pregnant or not. She really needs to be more careful with what medicine she uses if she is pregnant. If she is pregnant I'm sure Inuyasha will be by her side 24/7! ^^
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Reviewed By: JennyBoo On: September 22, 2007 03:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm completely stuck in this. I started and I couldn't stop till I reached the last chapter. I usually don't like InuYasha stories where the characters are put in modern situations, but this sucked me in and wouldn't let me go. 10 stars, two huges thumbs up, couple of toes too for good measure. Please please give us more chapters. I'm putting this in my favorites to make sure I won't miss it.
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Title: DID YOU HEAR THE HOUNDS
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DID YOU HEAR THE HOUNDS???? THEY WERE VERY CLOSE !!!! POOR KAGS SHE IS SO STRESSED OUT AND YASHA ISN'T HELPING THINGS OUT. LOL I DON'T THINK HE IS ALL THERE EITHER!!! BUT TIME AND ANOTHER CHAPTER WILL TELL UNTIL THEN ,,,,"WRITE ON"!!!! GOD I HATE IT WHEN I DO THAT LOL I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: MCRChick4life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE PLZZZZZ IM SO INTO IT!!!! I LUV IT!!!! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEE!!!!
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Reviewed By: anika [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 19:39 EDT
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AAHHHHH!!! NEARLY PEED MY PANTS WHEN I SAW THIS UPDATED!!! awesome story! Please update sommore!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 16:06 EDT
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Tahnks for the chapter! though a cliffie is fun fo the author, please update so we aren't waiting so long. though I do understand with homework and a job and all that.
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 15:43 EDT
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Too bad that Inuyasha can't be more of a help. He is just making her more stressed out with how he is acting. Maybe she can call Sango or her mom and talk over the phone so that they can reassure her? The byplay between Kouga and Ayame with Sango as and observer was funny! This was a good chapter! Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I just read ur story and it's fantastic! Please update soon tho, Thanks! ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: Kashu On: September 18, 2007 13:14 EDT
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As a woman trying to get pregnant, I can tell you while the urine tests at the doc's office are about as accurate as the ones you can do at home, there is still a chance of error. For example, you can get a negative when you are actually positive. (False positives are more rare.) However, the doctor can - and will upon request - take a blood test. Those are more accurate sooner. Again, I would like to point out that you don't get pregnant the week before your period. You get pregnant right in the middle of your cycle. You ovulate smack in the middle of the cycle. From the time you ovulate, you have 24 hours for fertilization to occur. Sperm lasts 48 hours, so doctors reccommend every other day when you're trying. Then, the fertilized egg has to implant - usually about 7 days after fertilization has occurred. At that time, some women experience spotting, others experience slight cramps, others experience nothing. This would be one week before your period. Then, you're late for your period. The first expected date of your cycle, the egg has been fertilized for approximately 2 weeks. Just FYI.
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Reviewed By: MeganLee On: September 18, 2007 10:37 EDT
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....thats all i get after all this waiting, your a terrible person
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: September 17, 2007 23:54 EDT
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I'm still in shock, you actually updated! A bit short but I still loved it. I hope you will continue to update regularly.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 22:57 EDT
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finaly now write more
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Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 15:26 EDT
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*jumps with joy* excelent job and I am psyched to read the next chapter ^ ^ keep up such great work kk?
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Title: Sakura Samora
Reviewed By: Sakura Samora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 14:53 EDT
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Man i'm really anxious to read the rest, its great!
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