| "Close Quarters" Reviews/Comments [ 356 ] |
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: duranrox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 15:37 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story. Keep at it.
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 15:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
update please!
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Title: close quarters
Reviewed By: crzy144 On: September 25, 2005 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv it muah update soon
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Reviewed By: Amie On: September 24, 2005 05:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
Your fic is fun and funny, with good interchange between the characters. I had the initial impression that this was a quickie fic and right on to the lemon action, but I'm enjoying the story and the slower progression of the Inu/Kag relationship. I must mention this: I chuckled at Sango's being diagnosed as a "borderline workaholic." Maybe just saying that she had a nervous breakdown or was suffering from exhaustion might have been a little simpler? Thanks for writing! Your efforts are appreciated.
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Title: Close Quarters
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 19:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: leila-chan (nsi) On: September 20, 2005 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love that you're having inu and kags relationship take the slow route. makes the climax of a fic all the more enjoyable when they wait. i'm excited to see what happens at the press party, and i think the dress is awesome. keep it up. man, is kouga's persistance sad or what!!
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Reviewed By: Dd On: September 20, 2005 15:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really tlike the way your write, and your story is pretty damn original. I really enjoy reading it.
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Reviewed By: what the hell is up with this name thing On: September 19, 2005 21:11 EDT
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omg, i soak up this story like a sponge. When i openned it up and saw 2 chapters, i was like, "...is it my birthday? christmas?" xD then i read it all in 15 mins. I tried to read it slowly too to savor it. But alas, its all gone now.. ;_; lol looking forward to next chapter, keep 'em coming! Gonna go back to watching Prison Break now. xD
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Reviewed By: kinoko *not signed in* On: September 19, 2005 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on the story girl, but when are we going to see some action?? I'm dieing here man!! Well, keep up the good work, and you'll be seeing tons of me all up on here! -kinoko
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 19:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
luv ur story!update!
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: September 19, 2005 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that you're taking your time with your fic. I've read a lot where the author rushed everything up to the lemon and the story just ended up sucking. I hope I wasn't one of the people you felt rushed by to do a lemon. Don't get me wrong, I deffinatly want one, but right now I'm content with the character and relationship development.
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Title: This rocks!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 04:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think inu should do kags too!,But at the same time if it's to soon it'll mess it up I get that so keep it up your doing great! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!! LadyWolf;)
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: September 19, 2005 03:32 EDT
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Nice dress enjoyed the updates. Yeah the one chap was a little boring. The people that think you should speed up can piss off in my opinion I think the story is great the way it is. Your developing the charaters nicely. Also I'd like to know more about the plagarism. Rainstorm61879@hotmail.com Thanks and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss-nsi On: September 19, 2005 02:46 EDT
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I like Good Eats too but I gotta say my favorite is 30 Minute Meals. Anyway! Awesome chapters and great dress for Kagome. Don't give in to the lemon pressure. Make them wait or they read another story! This is absolutely fabulous exactly the way it is!
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Reviewed By: Tia Q On: September 19, 2005 01:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute
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