| "Close Quarters" Reviews/Comments [ 356 ] |
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: May 28, 2006 14:59 EDT
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Oh my goodness. I can't believe that I can remember all of the previous chapters, I love your story and it is really amazing. I don't want to wait for another posting from you.
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Reviewed By: serendith_ On: May 27, 2006 12:44 EDT
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I just found your story and am really enjoying it! I hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i teally enjoy reading this story it's wat u would call a reallity . it suites the char,s very good. please update soon ok
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: May 26, 2006 10:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok yea Inu needs to get back home so that Kagome can stop freaking out. And she also needs to take a deep breath and just try to stay calm and not freak out until she knows for sure what's going to happen between her and Inu. Anyway it was a good chapter update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: IC On: May 26, 2006 07:34 EDT
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tha fic is awome
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: May 25, 2006 15:21 EDT
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It's nice to see you updated, I was wondering about Inuyasha's thoughts on what happened between him and Kagome.
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Title: ch. 18
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not sure if i reviewed yet but i wanted to stop and say thank you for the update and tell you how much i enjoy your story!everything is perfect so i don't have much to critique or suggest...good job! can't wait for what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Charice On: May 25, 2006 13:05 EDT
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Please update as soon as you can. It's a great story. I'm dying to know what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 08:38 EDT
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I loved it the drama, everything, even though i usually HATe drama, it fits with the story line so what the hell I can live with it:) update soon, tis a great story and hope to be able to read more soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 04:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another beautiful chapter. ::exhales with a smile:: OT - I'm a fan of Laurell Hamillton too!! I just learned of her approx 3 wks ago and have already purchased and read 5 bks. They alternate btwn Anita Blake and Merry Gentry series. I'm soo happy I found out about her.
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 22:23 EDT
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alright aleight... next chapter is what im waiting for
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: May 14, 2006 15:48 EDT
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I Love this story, it's been a while since I've last read it so I had to re-read it all again, and I am in love with this chapter, please update soon. Unlike me, I take forever to update and it gets on my nerves. Well, I really really LOVE this story. I'm glad that your were nominated for whatever it was on Mediaminer. Hopefully you got number one. I can't wait for Sango's response to what Kagome and Inuyasha did. It's surprising about how they ended up in that position. It's funny. Oh well, long review as it is.. Great story, update please! Can't wait. ^_^
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Title: Breakfast
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 14:36 EDT
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Hello there: I caught a few spelling mistakes in this chapter but I won't point them out to you. You know where they are. The spelling mistakes still doesn't take away from the story though. It was also good to see an update from you. They are slow but worth the wait. Thank you again for the update and take care.
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Reviewed By: FriendlyWarning On: May 14, 2006 13:22 EDT
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A big name author got deleted recently for posting an author's note as a chapter because it is against Mediaminer's rules. She was causing trouble too, but that is the official reason she was deleted. Well, that author's fans seem to be reporting anyone who posts an author's note as a chapter and Mediaminer recently deleted someone I know for doing it, even though she had never broken the rules before. Mediaminer has to follow its own rules so if you are reported, you'll be deleted. I have you on my notify list and I don't want you to be deleted. Please take down the stand-alone author's note and instead add it to the bottom or top of your last story chapter. They can't delete you for an author's note as long as it's posted within a chapter that actually has your story in it and as long as the number of words in the author's note is less than half of the number of story words in the chapter. Please be cautious. I don't want you to be deleted. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 11:26 EDT
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very good. you should update again soon before i forget what the plot is. it's sad. so many stories on my favorites list have been discontinued. authors lost interest. you're one of very few that still update. so, you should. good chapter...peace
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