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Title: ramen recipie
Reviewed By: ashimi On: January 26, 2006 22:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to tell u that, bein the ramen fan that i am, i tried that recipie. IT WAS AMASING!!!! thanks for putting it in ur story. which by the way, this fic is one of my favorites!!! i cant wait to read the rest of it!!!!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 07:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter/update. I wonder what will happen in the morning. Where do they go from here? I can't wait till the next chapter!!! Great story! ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: January 26, 2006 00:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm glad you decided to finally update. I checked this story basically every day hoping that you would have updated but you did nothing for a very long time. Anyway YAY!!! Lemon!!! ^.^ finally everything is out in the open and Kouga doesn't stand a chance. Update again soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: x On: January 25, 2006 23:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eh not bad not bad, good job on the lemond
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: January 25, 2006 22:53 EST
Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Inuyasha can be so sweet. I am glad that you wrote another chaoter. This is one of my favorite stories. Inuyasha finally told her that he saw her doing that.Please don't take long to write another chapter.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879(NSI) On: January 25, 2006 18:05 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh my. yummy lemon. You can feel it almost...or maybe i do just cause i was already on edge when i started reading..which just made thing wetter for me....great update.
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko (not logged in) On: January 25, 2006 16:33 EST
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Wonderfrul chapter and I like how it ended. I hope everything works out for them in the future. Can't wait to read more of this fantatic story of yours.
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: January 25, 2006 15:18 EST
Comment/Review:
Nice. Now let's hope they don't have a case of violent amnesia when they wake up O.O
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Reviewed By: Jacque On: January 25, 2006 14:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! They finally resolve their little sexual tension. Way to go Kagome and Inuyasha! Umm...no offense to your taste or Inuyasha or anything, but I take a look at the dress and couldn't help but notice that the style of that dress and many from that store are for older women. Like at least mid 30's to early 50's. Kagome is young and should wear something more youthful than that. As one of my gay friends say, rhinestones on clothes just make you look old. A plain one in young, cheerful color (like 3027 or 2026NS) would look much better!
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Title: really good
Reviewed By: i love Inu/kag On: January 24, 2006 17:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did really well with this fan fic..you should right more it's really good.
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Reviewed By: Az On: December 16, 2005 05:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-cries- i just spent two hours reading your story to find out it wasnt completed yet! damn you!! well so far its great ^_^ i'd love to see inuyasha and kagome get into a bit more awkward moments oooh! and sango and miroku meddle more!! it'd be so kawaii!! ^_-- well please update soon i'll be checking regularly
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Reviewed By: Giggles-a-lot [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 23:25 EST
Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite stories...& I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 18:46 EST
Comment/Review:
I think you did that on purpose...you're teasing us. But thanks anyway, for letting us know that an update is coming soon.
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Title: Evil A/N
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 17:18 EST
Comment/Review:
Oi...thats evil...down right mean. I don't need to be reasured that a new chapter is going to come, I can wait however long it would take for one to come out. Author's notes are like teases by mail...so please no more A/N
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Reviewed By: Lucient, NSI On: December 07, 2005 14:20 EST
Comment/Review:
I thought it was a chapter. But I forgive you. ;) Glad to see you haven't given up. :)
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