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Reviewed By: chimeara009 On: July 04, 2006 07:50 EDT
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absolutely love this fic and can't wait for an update!!! its been so long!! really wanna know what happens =) keep up the exxxxxcceeelllleeennnttt work!!
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Title: LOVE UR FIC!
Reviewed By: Corwalch On: June 28, 2006 05:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i totally love ur fic :D grins. a good job done on the continued chapters!love the way it is a developed crush on heero. hehe, i hope to see ur next chapter soon
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Title: FABULOUS!!!
Reviewed By: noh1 On: June 26, 2006 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT!!!! I really like how you are portraying all of the characters, especially Heero and Duo. Personally, I am hoping that Zechs comes to save Duo and ends up being the perfect match for Wufei. Fei is too uptight. He really needs to get laid. ~_^ Please keep it coming. I sooooo look forward to your updates!
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Title: WILL U PLEASE UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: kourutusunie (Not signed in) On: June 25, 2006 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE!!!! Update it will be July soon and you've yet to post another chapter! What will I do If you go a month without updating... (I'll live yes, but I wont be a happy camper)
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Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 11:02 EDT
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THIS CLIFFHANGER IS KILLING ME! Anyways awesome as always and hope you write more soon. X3
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Reviewed By: sugargirl On: June 13, 2006 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics I have ever read. your creativety is off the chart, and I enjoy every moment of the story. Please update soon, you have me hooked on this fic, I want more!!! pretty please with a chocolate covered heero with a duo on top?
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Reviewed By: Susan009 On: June 09, 2006 06:48 EDT
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Interesting chapter. However, I would have thought that Duo would have spent more time being upset over the death of people from his clan. Especially Solo, who was raised as his older brother. Also it does seem as things are moving really fast if a week has only passed. I agree with Duo that it seems that more time has passed, with people making connections so quickly. I can't wait until Duo and WuFei work out their problems. I wonder what Duo would have to do, to get WuFei to trust him. Also I assume that the person that the people at the end are looking for is Duo. He's going to react badly when he finds out the people in his tribe were killed, because someone wanted him. Not to mention other tribes, it sounds like. I can see him making a break for it, so as not to bring this trouble to his knew friends. Of course that would lead to the knew problem of being a runaway slave, however I can't see Heero or the others reporting him. Especailly if they knew the reason why he had left. Because they know where Duo is, they could grab someone for trade. Trowa would be the likely target, with his wanderings. How long would it be before someone realize that he was missing, if they did it right. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Eclipse02134 On: June 07, 2006 04:03 EDT
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Great fic. Hopefully Duo will get to see his tribe again before he settles with Heero. Just to let them know that he's still alive and everything's all right. It sounds like Duo is a foundling, the way Duo remembers that no one knows who his parents are. The men at the end seem to be looking for someone. I assume its the masked men who have been raiding the tribes. That means that they're propably looking for Duo. Especially since it seems they went back again to Duo's tribe look for the person they're after. I wonder how they recongize who they are looking for. Duo also seems to have a connection to Shingiami, because Heero seems surprise that he likes Duo. Made it sound like he doesn't like anyone else, except for Heero. Also thought the part about magic was kind of funny. It seems that none of tribe seemed to think that the reason Duo's light spell was able to kill something was because it extra power behind it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: YAOIFANGUY06 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 17:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I loved the lime scene I could just eat it all up ;). There was only one part I didn't like in this chapter, man I sound like a constructive critic asshole, but anyways, I really do think duo should have mourned Solo a little longer than what was apparent. I know that means it would have thrown the direction of the chapter off, but I do think this chapter should have been a little more angsty, with a consolable Heero. Anyways, keep updating, I am loving this fic.
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Reviewed By: Lolita! On: June 05, 2006 03:01 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story!! I'm the hundredth reveiw woohoo!!! Oh and by the way, the fact that you made heero and duo wait this long? Major points!! It's so much more believable then when the auther tries to make'em hop into bed together all at once. I really enjoy this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm hoping we'll see Zechs soon, and in a good light, (my small wish). Is Duo it?! The _____(blanks out for new readers)I can't wait to find out! Thanks much and adios!!!
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Reviewed By: ip On: June 02, 2006 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I can't wait until you update! I wish I could find more stories like this. Or ones with vampires. Do you know of any? If ydo, could you please email me the links? My email's hotchick1053@yahoo.com. Thanks! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Crescent [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 11:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The long awaited lime YAY! Actually that was unexpected, for the two to become intimate that spontaneously. Of cource now everything will change, and I can't wait to see how your morph their relationship. It seems the plot is unfolding. I knew that after you developed the characters there would be an underlying storyline. And it involves MAGIC YAY! Fantastic job as always. Thankies for the lime, you sure kno how to treat ur readers. :D
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Title: "Lord of War" 1-10 reading binge
Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 03:15 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Drama like whoa! ^^ Just as the title said, I've gone on a reading binge and read chapters 1-10 in about 2 days, and I find this fiction absolutely WONDERFUL. So fun and interesting. I consider it to be among my {beautiful fics to suggest to anyone and everyone who likes 1x2 works of art}. I saw a few grammar mistakes but they were mostly "liket his", just an easy to accept quick typing space error. *luffs* IS Zechs going to be in there? n.n I -heart- him. I love the quirky realtionship you gave Heero and Duo, very refreshing and suiting to their attitudes. I like your input of Shinigami, that cute snake chinchilla thing. This fic just makes me happy. I can't wait for the next up date. ((wow 2 days and I'm back to my bubbling insta-fangirl mind set. n.n; ))
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Reviewed By: WD On: May 29, 2006 21:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutely AMAZING!; your writing is honestly one of the best I've ever read--if not the best. Your style is just so perfect, I can't even describe it as anything else. Perfect, perfect, perfect. *sighs* I'm very glad to read that Heero and Duo have finally admitted to each other and themselves about their love. Your telling of their progressing relationship is so realistic and beautiful; it isn't rushed, which definitely shows that you are a very determined and skillful writer. Argh, I could go on and on about how amazing you are but I think you'd get annoyed so I'll stop. XD Oh, I have a question. I tried clicking your name link to your other work on Mm.org but it gave me "No Results Found." So, I was wondering if you've written anything else? Haha, you've gained a Super Fan. Hope you're not terrified. Anyway, GREAT job! I seriously can't wait until you post the new chapters! :)
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Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 26, 2006 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT DO YOU THINK WE THOUGHT?! That was wonderous, I've decided I'm addicted (though that might also bee 5 days of fanfic withdrawl... ug... it was hot, it was cute, it had more than one kind of warm fuzzy... Yeah. Um... 0.0 Wow. STOP LEAVING ME INCOHEARANT! It makes for crappy reviews ;-; In any case update soon, love and food.
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