| "Lord of War" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 17:48 EST
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Wow! This story is incredible! Thank you very much for writing. I just can't wait to see what happens next! Your descriptions are very clear and the characters really seem to come alive. I love the little Shinigami demon. I wonder what it really does. And didn't you mention that Zechs would show up at some point? Or did I miss read... Ah well. Wonderful story! Thank you for writing! I'll keep reading! Your newest fangirl, jess
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Reviewed By: wyft [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 16:03 EST
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wow! i think its about time for another review and another push for more updates!! yay!! i really wanna know what Duo is gonna do and i can't wait for their 'formal' get together.. which i sense is just around the corner...this is seriously one of the best fics that i've read and i'm anxiously waiting for more!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: October 22, 2007 21:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya gonna do more soon? I'm seriously missing this fic. Duo's just SO close to admitting his feelings...and all the miserable stuff in the world is happening...and how come the Emperor can't just drop dead? Hm? Ah, well, just have to wait to see what you'll come up with. Soon?
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Reviewed By: frikyu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 06:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I admit to really disliking the beginning. But for good fics, you really have to tough it out to get to the goods near the end. Everything seemed like it was all pointing to a pointless lemon in the beginning, but there really is an interesting plot going on here! God, I really just can't think of Duo as sane if can ignore all the wrong doings in the kingdom in favor for settling to love someone as messed up as Heero. The writing style didn't help settle the mood in the beginning, because I can't imagine a person back then thinking the phrase "sex on legs." Really, maybe you should try writing highschool fics if those phrases need to be used. Looking forward to more of this story, though.
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Reviewed By: YAOIFANGUY06 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 12:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't quite know if you remember me or not, but I just had to leave another comment. It's been awhile since I was able to continue reading your fic and I am sorry I haven't been on to say WOW!!!!!!!!! I still love this story...it is the greatest oppurtunity to be able to read this story. I still love the way you write. It's been months since I have read it and it is still as good as when I put it down. You have such a unique style of writing and I absolutely love it. I dunno how many times I have repeated that, but what can I say. This is by far one of the greatest fanfictions I have read. And I read a lot. I hope this and the other 197 replies that people have sent you will encourage you to keep on updating. I don't know what I would do withouth this fic. It has great potential and expresses emotion to a "T". Not to mention that you love to leave me with a cliff hanger and everytime you do I desperate for more. I always check on this story's progress and it always shocks me at how much you accomplish in the time you do. You have the potential to be a great author someday.
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 23:51 EDT
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I have to say that Chapter fifteen really impressed me. You showed us that Heero is far more complicated than we thought upon second glance. I'm like Duo...it bothers me when Heero says things he doesn't really mean but has forced himself to repeat. The things he has had to go through are just inhuman and Lorlia is definitely turning out to be far more sinister than I thought. It was so wonderful to see Duo begin to break through the ice around Heero's heart! Brought a smile to my face to see that. ;) More good news came in the fact that Heero is a Prince and that his kingdom may be of use in the future should Duo convince him to escape his Lorlian fate. I hope Duo can save Heero!
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Title: OMFG!!!
Reviewed By: Sayochan On: August 16, 2007 01:09 EDT
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about freaking time!!!! yeesh!!! i was like shitting myself, checking for updates everyday! and can i just say FINALLY?!?!?!?! they gonna be good lil boys now and admit the love-y-ness?! please? lol... will wait anxiously for the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 01:27 EDT
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Oh that was a great chappie! Practically worth the wait... *sigh* I get the feeling you are trying to make me like the Emperor... IT WON'T HAPPEN, I TELL YOU! IT WON'T!! I don't care if he is Heero's friend, he still just wants to use him. He doesn't love Heero. I wish Duo would give Heero the words... he needs them.
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Title: Wow!!!!!
Reviewed By: SapphireQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 22:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for writing this fic. I really enjoy the story and they portrayel of each character. I must admit i am eagerly anicipating seeing the role Shini is going to play in this story and i must say i am hoping the emporer eats shit and dies. Thats not nice but, oh well. I love this story and i hope you update very soon. Arigato.
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Title: yay!!!
Reviewed By: wyft [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 09:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! thank you so much for updating!!! it was a wonderful chapter...learning so much about Heero!! its great!!
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Reviewed By: sseattle On: August 10, 2007 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy to see an update here - I was afraid this story had been abandoned. This is definately one of the more original stories out there and I will continue to look for more updates!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 01:50 EDT
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welcome back form real life..i know what you mean by computer crash..thankfuly my lover has a computer of his own that i can use now that mine is resting in peices at the botom of a garbage bin some where.. love and peanutbutter cookies! Kixster and MeefMonster, Lovers of Apple Sauce, Fried Chicken and pot noodles. Parents of Hyper Active Munchkins that insist on hiding Daddy Kix's glasses as often as posible, then asking Daddy Kix if he was praying last night when he was calling "oh god, oh god oh god" at the top of his lungs
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Reviewed By: Masterofyoursoul [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 00:20 EDT
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yay you're writing again, a part of my soul is restored ^_^
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Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 22:37 EDT
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im so glad you are still writing this i was beginning to worry real life got you. awesome job and keep it up looking forward to the next installment!
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Reviewed By: akkenea On: August 09, 2007 09:57 EDT
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About damn time, I love how you put the altar in there, as a physical representation of all Heero has to bear, and the fact that he can't even go into his parent's room to mourn without seeing it. Good chapter.
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