| "Lord of War" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 18, 2006 20:04 EST
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an update so soon! and worth waiting for because that scene with duo nearly falling into the lampreys was hearstopping, and that wet dream (i didn't want it to be a wet dream, because heero was so sexy like that XD !) was scorching! it's great that you finally are getting duo to start admitting feelings about heero to himself. the smooth transition of wufei into the story was really good and i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter so update again soon!
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 13:08 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OHHHHHHHHHHHH!ooooooo0oooo00ooo0ooo0oo..... I want more!! Please!!!! Don't make me wait for the next chapter! I'll love you forever if you put up another (LONG) chapter in the (very) near future!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: March 18, 2006 10:28 EST
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Wow, you nice save there. We wouldn't have lynched you, but I think they're might have been a mob...but you wouldn't do that to us >.< Nice wet dream sequence. MUST HAVE MORE!
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Title: I love this story
Reviewed By: Yaoilovertash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 23:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way that the story flows and that Duo finally admitted to himself about his feelings for Heero. I love the sparks between Duo and Heero; I just hope everything works out for the best.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: pyrzm not signed in On: March 17, 2006 19:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great chapter! I love how things are moving along.
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Reviewed By: angel_of_innocence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 00:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am quite enjoying this fic so far and would appreciate updates soon and frequently ^_^ Please and thanks. Plus, if Heero gives Duo to that pervy guy at the end of that last chapter, I'll track you down and kill you *Shakes fist threateningly* ...Sorry, I haven't taken my pills tonight. *sweatdrop* Okay just write more please.
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Reviewed By: YAOIFANGUY06 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 11:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is another great chapter, although the cliff hanger left me mad...you better not hurt Duo or ELSE. Anyways thanks for the info on a beta, and I would love to be a beta, although I do suck at giving suggestions. Although you can't tell, I am really great with spelling and grammar. Keep updating. Oh if you need some encoruagement or anything you can email me at adulum06@yahoo.com. :)
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Reviewed By: redk (not logged in) On: March 13, 2006 11:05 EST
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You might want to consider getting a beta to help you in a few areas of your story. This is an historical setting, correct? Some of your wording seems odd and out of place. I don't think your characters would be tossing around the word "newbie." With some tweaking your story could be a lot better.
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Reviewed By: Asmodeus Saccharine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 18:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Athena and the Elysian Fields, correct?
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Rhiaonna_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 00:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg thats like..............like.........i don't even know what thats like. wow, he so has to be joking, heero would never do that. would he???? i can't wait for more, this story is awsome!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli too lazy to sign in On: March 09, 2006 22:23 EST
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I'm gunna guess here, but: Athena and Elysian fields? Anyway, nifty ass story, continue!! Yay ^_^
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Title: MORE PLEASE MORE!
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: March 09, 2006 18:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH! NO! You must write more! Please I'm beggin here, that is a completely unfair cliffy-like thing and then you took so long to update to begin with and you write so blastedly well. please update soon or I'll go...more...crazy.
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Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 15:07 EST
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you have a very cruel mind to leave it like that....I pray that you update alot sooner! My sanity is at stake!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 09, 2006 07:14 EST
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cool! i love this fic and was waiting for an update! the long chapter definitely made up for the long wait, but now you put me in a sad disposition because it's such a cliffhanger! i really liked the interaction duo and heero are having as they are slowly getting to know each other, as well as the descriptive scenes of the banguet! i can't wait for the next chapter so update again soon!
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Title: Noooo
Reviewed By: unicorn1979 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 21:05 EST
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You cannot leave it there :( please I love this sotry. I cannot wait to find out what happens. Plase update soon. ^_^
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