| "Lord of War" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Title: Up to Chapter 12
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 23:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo, I loved this new chapter, so much happened! Heero was so cute trying to surprise Duo and getting so excited about doing something to make him happy. ^^ Too bad he didn't consider Duo's position and feelings too well. :( Now they'll have one more thing to smooth over next chapter. ;) OMG, Heero is a Celacent! He has all of the celestial gifts and will die if he uses them, right?! That's terrible!!! I feel bad for both Heero and Duo right now, especially for Duo since Heero's been hiding it from him and he found out in the worst way possible. Heero set him free but what awful timing on his part, lol. This story is just so well-written and entertaining that I truly hope you continue it for as long as possible and eventually finish it. ^^ You've set the plot up so well that there's just so many things that could happen and it leaves us guessing what'll happen next! Please, keep up the good work and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: DL On: September 14, 2006 02:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is realy good. I hope to readmore soon. ja ne
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Reviewed By: Crescent [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 16:34 EDT
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Oh wow that was an unforseen twist there. Yay way to thicken the plot (I personally thought it was Duo, being one Celescial gift). aww at first I was naviee and thought Heero was taking Duo to a carnaval, but then I read ring arena and animal torture warning...ancient Rome.....oooh boy. It is indeed surprising that Heero's character would enjoy the game, but understandable. Could you please explain what Celestial Gift and Celacent are in the next chapter, maybe a quick review. I remember you mentioning it, but that was awhile back and I can't seem to find the chapter. Outstanding job as always. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: LPGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 01:56 EDT
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Oh my God!! How do you pronounce "Celacent" and what the hell does that mean? You can't just leave us with the big question mark! Or rather, you just did... *mumbles* This is so good, I liked the gore you put in here, although I was just as surprised as Duo with his comrade being killed in front of his eyes. You are a real good writer. Oh and the magic thing really seems to suit Duo really well. I hope he'll be able to master it soon! Great chapter and please update soon! I'm glad you didn't wait for your beta and if she takes long again, just post it!! See ya!
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Reviewed By: Netogrof On: September 04, 2006 05:09 EDT
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I recently just found you fic, I love it. =D And your cliff hanger...sucks. XD Hahaha... Please update sooon!
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Reviewed By: jill78 On: September 03, 2006 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD1 You totaly suprised me on that one. I was thinking much like the rest, that duo was the one not heero. Now, all I can think about is either duo is still another one like heero or he is the thing who can absorb magic since you mentioned something about it. I can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 12:51 EDT
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Wow. I thought Duo would be one not Heero. Man, you make me wait far toooooo long. It's unfair! I liked Heero seeming a bit vunerable to Duo. I also liked Duo getting angry at Heero like that. Serves him right I think~ those games were barbaric.
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Reviewed By: Sayochan On: September 01, 2006 01:47 EDT
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ho- ly SHIT!!! dude... taht totally came out of left field... kepp up the good work... ::puppy eyes:: any way you can update quicker?
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: Yaoilovertash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 20:55 EDT
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I really love your fanfic, I can't wait to read more chapters. What a twist, I can't wait to see how it affects Duo and Heero's relationship.
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Reviewed By: Corwalch On: August 29, 2006 06:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the long awaited next chaptere is sooooooooooooo niceeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!! it does xplain why heero is "nutty" and the ppl right along with it. i will hungrily await your next chapter
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Reviewed By: Harmony Glory On: August 28, 2006 08:29 EDT
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Oh, my, poor Heero. He was so happy about taking Duo to court but so clueless about the effects the arena scenes would have on him. I feel bad for both of them. And now you have me waiting impatiently for the next chapter, you evil writer. ^_~ I can't wait to see what else is revealed about Heero! Write fast! ^_^
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Reviewed By: chimeara009 On: August 28, 2006 02:19 EDT
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ohh thank you thank you thank you for updating!!! yeah!! finally confirmed, Heero really IS a celacent!! mmmm...now what is Duo going to do?
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Title: awesome aint the word
Reviewed By: Kalico (-Karmegas) On: August 27, 2006 23:00 EDT
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Lol. Hell yeh! This is gettin' into some really tight grooves. I really enjoyed this chap. So plz update real soon and with better consistancy. Is 'celecant' or whatever the word was , a real word? i'll find out in a minute i suppose. so why is heero so special? and why didnt Duo notice the mark during their 'lovemaking'? no matter, update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Trio Wing [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 22:34 EDT
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GLADIATOR!!!! Poor Duo... *huggles* Thank you for the new chapter!! :3
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie(not signed in) On: August 27, 2006 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Did I surprise you? *smile* Review Please! And expect a lot of explaining in the next chapter." Woah!!!! WTF was that? I am so confused! This chapter seemed to come out of nowhere but a chapter is a chapter and I enjoyed it. Duo is pissed. Heero is confused. Here I thought that those two were getting along so great. Can you update soon and explain? You dont want your faithful reader to become lost, right? UPDATE SOON!!!!!! So when I move back to school I can see another chapter before real life starts kicking me in the ass and I dont have time to do anything but study? Be nice to your faithful reader. PLEASE!!!!!! ;)
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