| "Lord of War" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 15:43 EST
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i understand what you mean about real life *rubs left sholder* i swear my boss is trying to kill me
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Title: yay!!!
Reviewed By: €orwalch On: February 20, 2007 09:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoyed the new chapter which was worth the wait! duo getting attached to heero alreadi. wats with the perv emperor hmm? trying to stealing heero from duo is he? and by the way how does shinigami look like, a cat?
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Title: MORE!
Reviewed By: Corwalch On: February 14, 2007 08:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is now valentine of the new year!! i wan more Lord Of War STories!!!
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Reviewed By: yuikitai On: January 30, 2007 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssseeeeeeeeeee ee update! I love this fanfic.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 23:32 EST
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Your latest chapter was simply delightful. I have to say that I am very happy with how Heero and Duo are progressing. It's one of the things I liek the most about this story, how you make everything come to life, from the characters to Lorlia itself. You being a history major truly does explain it all and I am most impressed that you put so much thought and research into this story. It truly shows and you should be proud of yourself! ^^ Finding out Heero was a Celacent was truly shocking! At some points I was hoping that Duo would just come out and say that he loves Heero, like he already has in his head. You can tell that Heero is just dying to hear those words from someone who truly sees the real Heero, and not the Celacent. I finally understand why things were the way they were. Everyone always sees the Celacent, and not the man. It's SO cruel that they can just sacrifice him like that against his own will, even if they have completely and utterly brainwashed him. All I can say is I hope that Duo can give him a reason to want to live, to stay with him. I can tell that the moment Duo admits he loves Heero to his face is going to be a BIG moment indeed, with a lot more meaning going with it than any other Heero/Duo fic I have read so far. This story truly is amazing and I hope you continue writing it for a long time to come. There's just so much you have set up for it and one can tell that there is so much more to tell in this story, especially with Heero and Duo. We all know Duo has more power than he thinks he has. On top of that I can't help but wonder about the Emperor of Lorlia and the mystery that surrounds him, not to mention those vague people(outsiders) who actually know that there is a Celacent in Lorlia. Keep up the good work and I'll be anxiously awaiting an update. ;)
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Reviewed By: wyft [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 08:57 EST
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please update!! i really love this fic! one of my favorites and we all are dying to know what happens!!!
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Title: !!!
Reviewed By: Corwalch On: December 17, 2006 02:15 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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!!!!! are u gonna to update update update!!!!???? i wanna more more n MORE!
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Reviewed By: Crescent [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 13:32 EST
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oh please update faster it has been so painfully painfully long. Ah I knew Heero would give the pet to Duo. I can't wait to discover what Duo idenity really is because I know you keep teasing us with all those forshawdowing. Ugh.
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Reviewed By: Crescent [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 13:32 EST
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oh please update faster it has been so painfully painfully long. Ah I knew Heero would give the pet to Duo. I can't wait to discover what Duo idenity really is because I know you keep teasing us with all those forshawdowing. Ugh.
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Reviewed By: SMO [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 02:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and cannot wait to read more of it. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Red_Wasabi On: December 02, 2006 08:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, I really enjoyed reading your fic! I only came across it this morning so I got to read chapters 1-13 in one day, but now that I have finished chapter 13 I can't wait for the next one! I like your writing style because it isn't hard to understand and you handle the pov very well. You have a occasional grammar mistake but it doesn't mess up the fic so I'm okay with it. I've read alot of Gundam Wing fanfics so I've seen the slave concept used more than a few times but I love how you've characterized Duo. Overvall I love this fic....write more please? Well, it's been fun but I gotta go, sorry about your 20 texts books-hope they don't ever fall on you. Ciao.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 10:00 EST
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Girly! I love it and now more interesting secrets have been revealed but I have a feeling I know who was behind Heero's parents' deaths and gahh that Emperor dude weirds me the hell out... update when you can *huggles you*
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I mentioned that this fic makes my life? I drop whatever I'm doing when I see it updated. It's terrible. Oh FUCK YES Duo got the little Shini. That's going to be so fucking awesome. So much build up and mystery,a nd though we uncovered one we have so many more. ::rubs hands together:: If this updated more I'd die of joy and then haunt the internet to make sure I didn't miss updates in the afterlife. You have just the right level of angst, don't fuck with me, and lust with Duo. He didn't just go from DFWM me to Ohmygod I love you, screw me until I DIE. Which irriates me beyond all rhyme or reason. He's stillg ot that edge of DFWM, and healthy dose of lust (because for piss sake its Heero.) and some sympathy. Beautiful, I love the charecterization, I love the mystery and you balance out the sap with gore magically. I have a low fluff tolerence... ehhh... I just can't help it. If this doesn't get on the first page soon it would be a crying shame (update more than BW does or I fear I will need to break things)
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Title: Saviour Chapter
Reviewed By: Corwalch On: October 29, 2006 07:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) yay thanks for this chap!!! veri nice to read too!!! i like the last part best- the commentary and little shini- awwww so adorable!
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 17:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lovely chapter! and duo finally gets little shini. i agree with duo, heero got the short end of the stick and lorlia can go to hell. can't wait to read the next chapter, hopefully some of those nifty torture tricks soon, and i hope you survive your 20 text books. o_O;
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