| "Lord of War" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Reviewed By: chevalier009 On: May 05, 2006 17:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*droooolz* over the macho heero scene when he kicked that commander's ass in this chapter. Really enjoyed reading this!! luv the way u bring in the characs and build up heero and duo's relationship slowly!! keep up the good work, can't wait till an update!! an extrememly enjoyable read!!
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Reviewed By: bb On: May 04, 2006 23:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 04, 2006 16:38 EDT
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0.0 W00t update! YES! ::glomps:: And it was long too. We MIGHT forgieve you for taking an age nd a half about it...well... I suppose Real Life does occasionally take the top batter, but you should have thought of that before writing such a good story. (Am I making that sound like a bad thing 0.o whoa) Please, like I've said everything I've reviewed, for the love of all things wonderous in the world update soon. Please? Skeller will make you cookies!
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Reviewed By: shevaleon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 06:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thak You Thank You Thank You!!!!! Thank You for Updating!! I love this story soooo much, I was going berserk until you updated!! Please don't frighten me so!! The duel was so exciting!!! And Heero... can't express it in words, only *drool*. Hope you'd continue soon. Hugs, Anya
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Title: OMG UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: kourutusunie (Not signed in) On: May 04, 2006 00:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! U have to update soon! I know life can be a pain in the ass, but please whenever you find a moment to write PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO!!!! I loved at the end of the fighting scene that Heero kissed Duo. Startin to show some affection there... And Heero's reaction! I LOVE IT! Write more! Soon Please! Don't leave your fans hanging on the edge of a cliff. Be nice. Please.. 0.0 I'm am awed at your writing...more soon...
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Title: Woah I want more
Reviewed By: Yaoilovertash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 22:54 EDT
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All I got to say is, it was an amazing character and left me desiring more. I hope you can put up a new chapter soon, your story really brightened my day and I love reading Duo and Heero's relationship is progressing, I hope there will be romance between Duo and Heero in later chapters.
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Title: Not to seem stalkerish..
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 14:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This needs to be updated, you can't write a story so well and not update it. The readers will have fits. C'mon. Update. Please? ::pokes:: I'll give you a cookie...alright... two cookies? OH OH! A fully posable, Heero plushie with karate chop action! And he come in three outfits, school uniform, tank top and spandex andpiolet outfit. (batteries not included see store for details, we can not be held responsible for any deaths resulting from the Heero plushie) If you make it long we might through in the Gundam Dream/Safe house... limo... Gundam? They're chibiish!
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Title: Not to seem stalkerish..
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This needs to be updated, you can't write a story so well and not update it. The readers will have fits. C'mon. Update. Please? ::pokes:: I'll give you a cookie...alright... two cookies? OH OH! A fully posable, Heero plushie with karate chop action! And he come in three outfits, school uniform, tank top and spandex andpiolet outfit. (batteries not included see store for details, we can not be held responsible for any deaths resulting from the Heero plushie) If you make it long we might through in the Gundam Dream/Safe house... limo... Gundam? They're chibiish!
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Title: lord of war
Reviewed By: Corwalch On: April 29, 2006 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u show both characters duo and heero as strong characs as in close with the series albeit tat u make heero much more endearing than his stoic facade it at least show the fact that he realli cares wat happen. being a staunch supporter of 1x2, i enjoy the fic veri much who wouldn't with duo slowly feelin up to heero. the introductory of the other characters are also veri well done. i like phinneaus and sally. so from all ur fans or my sole lonely voice, could u update the fic? i look forward after every new chapter for the next. till u end the story of course.
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Reviewed By: I'm Not Logged In On: April 03, 2006 10:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, for one thing it's great. You must have at least two good beta readers. Anyway, I see no way this story can get a rating less than...8...in almost all categories. Spelling and Grammar - yeah, you need some work, but hey, that's why other people edit it. At least you don't have the word "Ningdom" in there -- yes, I found it while reading another fic. Well, this is a great story, especially for an a/u. I would recommend this to almost anyone. I can't wait to know what happens next (hehehe).
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Reviewed By: Saholi On: April 03, 2006 06:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I llooovveee this story sooooo friggin oober much!!! XD Keep rolling with this!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: April 03, 2006 02:21 EDT
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great job on this chapter too! nice intro on wufei, and i did notice that the chapter was shorter but it was still as interesting as the last one. loved the water fight scene and i hope to see more instances of heero and duo losing themselves to each other. update again soon!
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Title: Terrific
Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 17:27 EST
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This is one of the best AU fics I've read in a long time. I usually don't read AU because they're usually stupid and silly, but this caught my attention and I ended up reading it straight through. I can't wait for more. You rock as a writer and storyteller.
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Reviewed By: Escapee On: March 31, 2006 23:16 EST
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Great story. Can't wait for the next part. Duo's relief that Heero wasn't chosen is a little early since this sounds like something that is doen fairly regularly. Maybe Heero already had to full fill that part. It would do much in explaing the promise, and what he said. Nice to see WuFei finaly. Also what is with the people in black cloaks attacking people. Like the water fight. It would be interesting to see Heero dream about Duo too. In someways this is going to be sad, because if Duo stays with Heero in the end, he won't ever be going home. I would at least like for Duo to find out that how everything is back home. Also I'm sure that there'll be problems, since Heero will need a heir and that will mean a wife. I can't see Duo going for that. Also would like to hear more about the Celestial Gifts and Adjacent. Wonder if Duo is one, since the Head of the House of Magic seems greatly interested in him, but that could be because of how important Heero is to the country and wants to make sure that things stay stable, since the two of them don't seem to like each other personally.
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Title: Good, so far
Reviewed By: Yenny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 20:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey.. Nice chapter. I like the way you show Heero's and Duo's budding relationship ^^ It's quite cute. I love the bath scene *winks* And Wufei... Typical *chuckles* Hmm.. it's already the 8th chapter, I hope to see more progress, you know, story wise. I'd hate to see this falling into my personal category of stories being just into 'romance' seeing how this is an AU and well, the setting gives the impression of having MORE. And oh, about Quat and Trowa, personally, I browsed through their love scenes; no bearing to the story, really, for me anyway. Well, guess that's it. I still enjoy reading this. Keep it up and hope to see more in the next chappie.
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