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 Reviewed By: camillian  On: May 26, 2006 04:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
great job as always!!!!! there were a few grammatical errors here and there, but the underlying plot was so much better that it really didn't matter too much. i can't wait to read the next chapter, especially with the others finding out about heero and duo's new step in their relationship, and also to find out what's behind the mysterious person looking for the "celacent." update again soon!
 Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: michikoneko notsignedin  On: May 25, 2006 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ *hugs* I love it..please update soon!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 25, 2006 17:56 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
All I really have to say is "Finally!". Hehe, it took Duo long enough to get his head out of his arse. I love your story and I can't wait for your next update!
 Reviewed By: shevaleon [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 25, 2006 11:03 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sqweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! Another chapter!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!! CRAVE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!! And that juicy scene between the two!! *sigh* And that cute lil' Shini!!!!! Owww, I sooooo wanna pet it!! And I knew there was more to Duo - now bad guys are after the cutie… Poor lil' thingie…. Anyways, being serious, please update soon. Hugs, Anya
 Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2006 22:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yes Yes Yes Great and well-awaited lime!Awesome chapter. Great detail work and writing style. You really make your work come alive especially this story. Love the scene in which Duo sees through Heero's obvious lie of not do that search for him. Keep writing.Keep updating.
 Reviewed By: Miss Macabre (nsi)  On: May 24, 2006 22:38 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Damn! Hot! Up the lime! Mannn...don't leave me like this! I really like the fact that they haven't gone straight to the lemon (though it would be nice;) I wonder what's going to happen in the morning - it would be quite funny if the others came in to the room like last time in the morning and found them having an encore performance. You have to wonder about ol' Wufei though - he never is far away from Heero...maybe he heard something...nosebleed!
 Title: Dont wait to update!
Reviewed By: kourutusunie (Not signed in)  On: May 24, 2006 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update sooner than you did before. It was killing me to wait for another chapter! Dont leave me hangin for so long next time! And on a side note... I loved the lime...can I have more? At this rate we can make limeade and move up to lemonade...
 Title: I love it
Reviewed By: Yaoilovertash [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2006 20:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
I just love this story and I'm proud to be one of the betas. I'm just glad that you continued it, it really brighten up a rather boring day.
 Title: Hugs
Reviewed By: Crescent [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 18, 2006 23:48 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I owe you a detail review since this is the 9th chapter. I wanted to tell you that I absolutely love this story. It is extremely enjoyable because the content is both innovative and imaginative. You are so articulate in your detail that it is easy to get loss in the fantasy world you sculpt. I have to say my favorite aspect of Lord of War is the slow, yet progressing relationship between Duo and Heero. The relationship becomes more dynamic and realistic when the authors actually take the time to develop it. You did this really well. That being said, when will the lemon ripen? Please continue writing this magnificent story, you really have a natural talent and a wonderful imagination. Update Soon.
 Title: Lord of War Review
Reviewed By: can't remmber my name  On: May 17, 2006 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That is so awesome you have to update soon. i mean the way heero defended Duo. That was adorible and so romantic.. Please have them get together real soon i cant wait to see it and i would love it if you could email me when the next up date is so that i could read it. great work and please update soon. Pretty please my eamil is amanda420@sbcglobal.net
 Reviewed By: desperate  On: May 16, 2006 10:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
please please please please please please please update!!!!!!! cannot wait any to see what happens!! you have us all on edge here waiting to see what happens to li'l Heero and Duo. This is defintely one of the best fics i've read!! and i'm hungry for more *muahahahahaha*
 Reviewed By: Miss Macabre (nsi)  On: May 13, 2006 07:44 EDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story! Very interesting! I loved the fact that Heero's little display was in defence of Duo - he fought for his honour! Soooo cute. I haven't got much time on my hands to write this review, so I'll just say...UPDATE!!!!
 Reviewed By: YAOIFANGUY06 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 11, 2006 08:16 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry if you haven't gotten my email yet, but I have been trying to write you. It's good to see you have another chapter up, another great chapter up. Thanks for giving some insight to Chang's past, it really helped clear some things up. I loved the way Heero acted towards Duo in this chapter. As their fondness of one another grow their actions toward each other become more fluent if you know what I am saying^_~. Anyways keep updating. Oh I absolutely adored how Heero kissed Duo behind the ear, not to mention the underlying sense that Duo is calmed by Heero's presense. One more thing, I absolutely loved Wufei in this chapter. Write When ever you want Adam Ellsworth (adulum06@yahoo.com)
 Reviewed By: Basteta  On: May 06, 2006 19:50 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have fallen in love with this story! Please update soon. I so want to know what happens next. ^^
 Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Logged In)  On: May 05, 2006 17:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yes! I knew that Heero would allow Duo to fight! Squeak! I loved it! It was a good fight scene, lord knows I can't write one of those for the life of me. I was pissed that the bastard dared to insult Duo like that! I was soo...ARGH! I'm glad Duo didn't kill him, because then we wouldn't ahve been allowed to see how Strong Heero is and how much he's grown to love his braided aiko. Awwwww..... I was really hopping that Heero would kill him though...If wishes had wings....But anyway, I am dying to see if you introduce Duo's tribe mates into this fic. That would be sweet! Only because it would be more trouble and we all know you can't have a story without trouble! Solo, as an example. If I wasn't mitaken, that's who Duo had been thinking about when he's seen Krushrenada I believe. The appearance of Solo or someone else (Maybe Hilde per se...- wink wink-)comming to look for him to take him back home might get Duo to admit his feelings. (These are just my musing.) Well, I think that is enough for one review, it was a great chapter! Ja!
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